10 lines
house rules
you spit first
deadline is monday midngiht
good luck
first battle here goes ...
10 lines
house rules
you spit first
deadline is monday midngiht
good luck
first battle here goes ...
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the evolution of ya wack rhymes is way beyond years
and the pain that i'm going to inflict is way beyond tears
u can't beat me u got a better chance of seeing "aveon-chairs"
punchlines have u going bold like u got "radiation-on-ya-hair"
u couldn't come nasty if u were a bitch with no tampon on the rag
ya lyrics are cold in lamen terms ya just playing "freeze-tag"
i got levels of different raps i can reach like their numbers on a "key-pad"
i'll put a noose around ya neck like a dog with a "flea-tag"
fuck peace u wanna step to me i say give "me-war"
ya rhymes wouldn't be above me if u was the 'r' and i was the 'f' on a "key-board"
aight checkin in .....
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my verse verse
So for both of us on this site, this is our first real battle,
This bitch is gonna go cryin to momma so prepare the rattle,
The latest newbie fight has just been opened, quick wit it and prospectiv,
In this bout beating your sorry herb ass is my main objective,
After that im lookin for a knock out, it’s prolly gonna end up like that,
Say goodbye to your family boy, cus you’re goin into hardcore combat,
Can’t believe that you accepted my callout, stupid little child,
Im gonna kill ya with this verse that has just been complied,
Don’t know why you have bothered turning up, should of no showed,
Cus this verse is full of good shit it’s about to fuckin explode.
my first verse so check it.
uppin on this then .
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Quick with it: Some attempts at punches... but where were the opersonals man? And some of the punches where really played notably this one "the evolution of ya wack rhymes is way beyond years
and the pain that i'm going to inflict is way beyond tears", but I guess you had some good punches in tehre so... mehish/goodish job.
Other Prospective: The ryhmes concept was ok, but your verse was mainly self glorification and I think you had only one punch... which was really played (sorry) "So for both of us on this site, this is our first real battle,
This bitch is gonna go cryin to momma so prepare the rattle". No offense but this sounds like MC Animal when he was elevating...
V/Quick with it for having better punches. No hate just a vote
And might I suggest using eprsonal... it really helps your punches hit harder.
thx for the tipc, uppin
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Quick wit it ok punches ^^ needed personnals tho gd flow, (dnt think i saw 1 fuck up wit that) lol.
Other Prospective, slightly weaker punches flow was jus a bit off, tho nt bad 4 1st
Vote/ Quick with it due to harder punches an better flow.
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=145600
muddog u need to add your vote to the poll, uppin
he aint got 100 posts he cant poll. uppin on this ... come on peeps look, read, give feedback. its just that simple.
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i think it was quite a close battle. porspectiv ya need to punch more and quick ya need to get better punches. both need to get more personals in there. both flow was orite and so was structure. erm ... it was close so i dunno who won.
aigh aight lets get some votes guys. dont just read and then fuck off, read it and fuckin vote ....
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ok since this aint gettin any votes. ill do some more feedback and make a vote. so like i said before ... i think it was quite a close battle. porspectiv ya need to punch more and quick ya need to get better punches. both need to get more personals in there. both flow was orite and so was structure. but after looking again im gonna vote for prospectiv, no hate. only postin feedback twice cus this shit aint gettin any votes.
Word, I hate it whern people read it and don't vote...Originally Posted by other prospectiv
yo well im gonna read and give feed back but i cant vote yet so ...
i think that other prospectiv had better punches, only just tho. personals were close as was vocab. flow went to quick and niether had multis.
close battle guys but this one goes to other prospectiv for better punches. close though guys keep elevating.
v/ other p
no hate
aight well this is some feedback: quick with it i liked some of your puches but didnt like the other some of them where ok and some where just wack your flow was quite good as well
tha not bad for your first battle
ure punches where ok as well but i didnt feel others ...your flow was quite good 2 but this battle is close and i cant vote but at least i gave some feed back
peace out..
Move on , no irony here.
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