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Thread: Tears In Heaven(Euth collab, Topic and Lil'Hova)

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    Tears In Heaven(Euth collab, Topic and Lil'Hova)

    (lil hova)
    Uncle Michael, I thank you for being there for my Mother
    So I'll spare another Prayer so I can share it with her Brother
    You fed knowledge to her thoughts, and taught her like a Shaman
    We never met, but Momma says we got alot in common
    With pictures on her wall and on the side of her fridge
    She told me how you died on that bridge, riding the ridge
    Running from the Cops, walking that route through
    She loves you so much, she's always talking about you
    I pray that you bless her when she's feeling depressed
    And put your healing to the test when she's dealing with stress
    And Momma, tell yourself, my brother's already close to me
    The same way Eddie chose to be with Rose Marie
    Now he visits her grave, trying not to fall apart
    Rose, your brother loves you with all of his heart
    He was too young to learn that lesson of tragedy
    It's sad to see the way that makes us question his Majesty
    He showed me your picture, you we're precious at seven
    And the message-from the-Reverend says you're blessin' us from Heaven
    I sing for the years, but still I cling to my fears
    Cuz when I think about MY sister, it brings me to tears
    (topic)
    Im focused on her potent posture
    Stareing at me from below, secure
    And safe, for ever in a wooden cage
    I sit more stif then she does...
    ......Thinking about the olden days.
    The golden rays of sunshine beam
    Linger in the dreams of the pheen
    As she sleeps through another event,
    Of mine I sent Another flowering hint
    And she respects it, and immediatley
    She got her ass in line and came to see me
    But just as I was finsing
    She burst through the doors hindering
    Kindness from her heart and thats why I loved her
    She keeps everything with me up above her
    But now its oppisite, and shes above me
    Now shes dancing with the angles..
    .......And It will never seem lovely
    Because your not here to love me
    Scytsophrenia

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    uppin this shit

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    it was the title that got my attention. Have you ever heard that song by eric clapman called 'tears in heaven'? its such a sad song and it has beautiful lyrics, i thought this would be like that..it wasn't, but it was good nontheless. The topic is always an overused one, but you can change that around by using imagry that others won't have thought of, and not sticking to the cliche sayings that are meaningless and overused. You did a nice take on the topic, both of you. Both verses were good, decent lyrics, but so different in flow and structure, because of this i didn't think it transitioned the best that it could of, but the emotional content made up for what it lacked in structure. This is getting slept on huh?

    leave feed to one of my OM's please.
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    upping, ill hit up one of yours fanta
    Scytsophrenia

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    Yeah, I'm feeling it, but with 738 posts I believe that you could've came way harder then that, but you stucked within the Topic, I felt it, I caught the flow and everything, but like I said before I feel you could've came harder but it was a nice piece...
    return the favor
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=143686
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=143200

    holla

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    will do thanxs for crit

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