Shinobi and Bruce Lee vs Method Man And Dr. Dre

[AR-TIST]

Shinobi and Bruce lee vs Method man and Dr Dre.
..........(place ya bets)..........

bruce stepped to the mark with his advance martial art's..he couldnt give a fuk./
With acrobatik stealth ninja statik..surgin through shinobi's balls a steel...dre know this bitch's foh real./
A Ganster stance Method man defnatly advanced with cannon balls at the end replacin his hands./
Gansters most elite...east an west sides most unique...future looking dim foh da weak./
then from the shadow's a gangster sound...an earthquake stomp...dre's hanging around!./

AND THE BATTLE BEGUN

Crazy shots bein pulled off...bullet's piercing the air..dre's deagle's sparklin wiv a death blinding glare./
Meth blinked... shinobi dissaperd...Meth's mistake cuz bruce standin dere...lookin scared he turns 90 degree's ... he's stripped bare./
Retaliating Wiv a powerful fist swing...bruce lee flips feet to hands unleashing his delivery./
A Quik Power up and it's On...his size increased sayin "This Geek best be GONE!"./
And a hella brick punch thrown proper...followed wit a super charged kick, who softer?./
From Nowhere came the body dropper...sword out, 2nd bout, Meth's soul a Foster ./
Dre sparks that cigar...he aint goin far...bruce sprints up with no regard rights, lefts.. a true saiyin spar./
Sparks engaged atomik hit's were phazed...the best contest where speed mostly crazed./
From the back pocket a bat appears...bruce twaked back twenty years./
intimidation now, concrete dah ninja's facing...circles walked they be pacing just waitin./
launched first was shinobi...off the mark he darted towards the enemy as Dre wes fending./
a clever thing happened.. ninja took flight to the skie's...but dre's excellent aim was the ninja's demise./

.........iight piece ar-tistry

reviewed piece's:
All Bottled Up Inside by Topik
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=143174]sumfin new by lyrizist[/URL]

[AR-TIST]

Listen i need some feed back man too see where im at so it be great if one person read this shit???

come on, a truthful review. so uppin 1

[iBlazE]

This was type weird...strange idea...some words u used to ryme i dont agree with. But it was a hot drop tho MaD ProPs Yo.

[>Inertia>]

The concept was the gayest thing i've ever heard..but surprisingly enough, the piece wasn't all that bad. It flowed alright..a bit shaky in spots. You had some nice metas and shit..like I said though, concept was wack. Vocab was alright..nothing special.

5.5/10

[MKs]

right..... funny concept yo

[***DEST***]

this turned out better than i thought..... i whikle reading the name..i thought .."what the fuck?"..but as i got into it ..it wasnt as bad as i expected....not the greatest ..but not bad....flow was off in spots..and some of your words didnt even rhyme...structure was a fuking mess...but work on those and you will be on your way

pz

[AR-TIST]

thnx 4 the feed back..

upiing for more plz

[Sublime D]

hmm...you know what...i almost liked this...the concept was dreadfully dumb, but it wasn't executed that poorly...i mean...the structure was bad, and the piece looks bad...but your flow was there....i could definately tell that you have some skill...you knwo how to rhyme in rhythm...that sounds dumb, but you'd be suprised how the lost the concept is on most people....this was ok...not really bad, just a really bad topic...if you took yoru time and wrote a serious piece about a better topic, i think you could write somethign very nice....nice multies....

7.0/10

[pytogenic]

interesting....not bad though surprisingly....it looked liek some of the rhymes wernt to thought out...but overall it wasnt bad

[Crimsion]

^lmao him sayin dat ... but this was out there an not hot at all

[AR-TIST]

dude you just can't read.......but i keep the peace.

cheers aye all the feed bak....now im write a beta piece

[Crimsion]

you being better then me is a eww joke .. you not up to par or my level .. i guess tho