...~!Church Myth!~...

[Standard]

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Title : Church Myth
Author : Standard


The Myth
Sinisters say that this place consists of bashful memories
Of how people got beat there, but prayers sent in remedies
Preachers must've had enemies, cuz their instinct is bliss
Pouring holy water down the throats of tyrants using their fists
This church sent by quotes of human logic, with fuming rockets
With a flame engorged collosus, torchlit, navigators sent sockets
Of rays to the demons, then a huge fight began and uplifted the sky
Bringing the sky crashing down, fumes of wit deceived our fast lies
So we walked by with hate in my eyes, keen view through the thick boards
I flip passed the page of the source, reminisce of visions I had w/ pissed morgues

The Story
Nothing on my mind, shortcut through the woods to home from school
Brushing arms on Cypress, sap beginning to puncture our wounds
Hurrying through this dark forest with my headphones blaring
Noone caring that I was late, w/e my friends stop droned and staring
I look to my left, look to my right...with nothing in sight
I look up to a pomegranate falling on my boy's head, he shreeks
Blushing up from embarassment, it seems at this point, it's bleek
They're still staring at something in the distance, pencap, I twist it...
Off, then with a rude cough, I noticed this exceeded my premonition
I fell to the ground in shock, when this old church was in flames
Then a bolt of lightning reached out and grabbed me w/o causing pain
Engulfed me in flames, lay me down at rest in a puddle of rain
I'm subtle at most, driving me insane, on the front step, feeling sublime
Looking in through the boards at an hourglass, peering at the time
Whispers exceeding the volume of my headphones, the door opens
A man walked out, in appearance of a shadow, a board he was holding
Nails piercing my conscience, I gaze through him and clutch throat
Then a wind pushes me through a door, suddenly my gut blows
Waking up in a candle lit room with red carpets ready to start shit
My teeth pierced like accapellas until this shark spits
Shadows surround me, clouting my distance, awaiting pearly gates
I go through the floor boards, death coming, I nearly escaped
I fell for hours, SPLASH,water drowned me in my presence
Swimming for air, I'm fiddling with art as I escape this obliged sentence
Feeling above the water, I felt a glass layer, hoping to escape
Then the glass shatters, but from hell, I noticed it's too late


© Standard 2004-2005

[Incineratedrose]

yeah that sucked.. lol nah im jk, so are you jewish... im jk, but are you like athiest or something? cuz the myth, usually means one doesnt believe in it. but anyway it was good, to many big words for me so at times i got lost, but i got it.. it was good.

[Tim]

i was really feeling this piece it was hot had an ight flow also a bit complex with the vocab and words this was a really good story telling piece for real dawg keep spittin this story tellin shit

[Standard]

im really getting fucking tired of every1 sleeping

[Incineratedrose]

i know really, this actually made me laugh how bad it is being slept on.

[Standard]

what the fuck is going on? this was at the bottom of the page? there are more replies to people writing verses bout thugs and ice

lets go!

[Foreshadow]

This was good you had some real nice imagery which made alot of strong points stand out even more. Your description was okay but you could do alot better in that department. Keep it up standard.

[2mD]

wow

u can make that shit to a movie
shit was graphic and made me think of Silent Hill3
lol
you probably got alot more comin after this so ima hit em up

~1~

ps. STOP SLEEPIN

[Standard]

last up cuz im sick of this sleeping....................