Okay since ur new im not gonna make this a big battle
6-10 lines
No feeding
No hate votes
Doesnt matter if crew votes
Due in 15 minutes
LuvableFemcee4u
Fire aka Nikkelz
Okay since ur new im not gonna make this a big battle
6-10 lines
No feeding
No hate votes
Doesnt matter if crew votes
Due in 15 minutes
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iight im checking in and then im gonna drop my verse...
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Its crazy how im devowering this femcee and I dont even eat pussy
I got LuvableFemcee scared to drop her shit like a constipated wussy
Failure to recognize that Im one of the best, ends in automatic death
After this battle you be taken from the list of femcees with future success
And I dont know why I chose to battle you, I much be losin my touch
Nikkelz is a household name, you just 2 cents away from a dumb fuck
So u can try and take the title but I see that u not carryin the license
Cause Im throwing out straight punches, you fumblin like Mike Tyson
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yo u aint gotta eat pussy but u gon learn today imma teach u how ta count cha change... well tha lil bit u got anyway she calls herself nickles but she aint worth a cent im thowin harda flames den dat last mess she sent yo dis chick got me laughin i think im bout ta piss im usin her as toilet paper weneva i gotta shit she calls herself devourin me n she aint even started she crusin for a brusin dis chick must be retarded im bout ta put out her fire n it wont be relit she gon be lickin up her blood worse den she licks clit so i dare her get buck n watch she end up stuck she gon wonda why her lips white lookin like wut tha fuck so tha question is who did it n wut it was tha one n only tha one who dick she gon suck
^ u fucked up....rules were no feeding.....but hey its cool
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LuvableFemcee4u- work on that structure try setting it up line for line and not in paragraph style, its hard to read and get your flow the way you structured it. Anyway about your verse, it was weak, you fed off her a bit in your opener about eatin pussy and the devouring line also. Takin a piss and using her as toilet paper was wack, i didnt really see any punches in your verse, it was difficult to find any
Fire- your verse wasnt that great, but i could actually read it and you had some punches. Structure was decent and flow was OK, better than ^LF. I thought your punches were weak but you had some. Scared to drop/constapated wussy line was ok. not much to say except that you had better structure, flow, punches and all round better verse.
V/Fire
..hit up my link.. hollatchu
Bravo.. now I need kisses from both of you.
luv- really hard to follow, but I attempted and stuck with ti alright. Need to work on a structure, would also help the flow. Wasn't catching the flow at some points as well, but maybe I was just missing. You did feed, but its ok, you're new. Punches were meh.. need to work on making them a bit harder. I like how u tried personals off her name though. Keep up.
fire- the opener was hott.. lol.. put imagery in my mind. But anyway, this was an ok verse from you I guess. Haven't battled in awhile, so I think you rusted up a bit. But ya know, it's all good. You simply had better punches, harder thrown then what was thrown at you. Also the strucutre ad flow was better. You couldn't personalized off her name decently well if you wanted to.
vote- fire
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yo its all gravy i mite hav lost cause im new ta dis thing but i aint backin down to no battle dats not how i was brought up but im still up 4 new battles and any challenges sumbody wanna throw.............holla atcha girl
Fem - you didnt realli have a structure it was more a paragraph type sort..and the flow wasn't realli there either to make it worse..not many personals that were good and not many punches that shown out u kno...no wordplay or meta's either..
Fire - had a blah verse but enough to beat Fem..decent personals and punches were more than enough to win this battle..so..
Vote = Fire
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Its crazy how im devowering this femcee and I dont even eat pussy
I got LuvableFemcee scared to drop her shit like a constipated wussy
Constipated Wussy? uh..first line was played ..4/10
Failure to recognize that Im one of the best, ends in automatic death
After this battle you be taken from the list of femcees with future success
wasnt worded right@second line..5/10
And I dont know why I chose to battle you, I much be losin my touch
Nikkelz is a household name, you just 2 cents away from a dumb fuck
eh okay line..5/10
So u can try and take the title but I see that u not carryin the license
Cause Im throwing out straight punches, you fumblin like Mike Tyson
^wasnt realli feelin it .. 5/10
Overral = 19/40
I felt you could of worded your lines better..could of had better punches too..flow was okay and personals ..werent realli there..
yo u aint gotta eat pussy but u gon learn today imma teach u how ta count cha change... well tha lil bit u got anyway she calls herself nickles but she
^ not bad with the change line..5/10
aint worth a cent im thowin harda flames den dat last mess she sent yo dis chick got me laughin i think im bout ta piss im usin her as toilet paper weneva
cent line was okay..personal..5/10
i gotta shit she calls herself devourin me n she aint even started she crusin for a brusin dis chick must be retarded im bout ta put out her fire n it wont
i wasnt realli feelin the "wipin ur shit"..3/10
be relit she gon be lickin up her blood worse den she licks clit so i dare her get buck n watch she end up stuck she gon wonda why her lips white lookin
like wut tha fuck so tha question is who did it n wut it was tha one n only tha one who dick she gon suck
^didnt flow..wasnt realli useful in any manner@the first 2 lines and the last 2 lines..well..fuckin write ur verses right..couldnt even follow that...3/10
Overrall = 16/40
Could of worded your verses better..came wit some okay personals but try to be more wittier and have more punches..
Vote = Fire aka Nikkelz..
and Illunatic stop Pickin on my votes!
go pick on the Real D/R's
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Luvable - That verse wasn't very luvable.. you need to put some structure to your verse like Fire did. The rhyming was very inconsistent and this piece was hard to read. Either way you didn't really hit him hard with punches. Work on setting up punches and hitting them. Your opponent is a good example of this.. you have a lot of elevating to do.
Fire - I was expecting a bit better, but easily enough to take this. The dumb fuck line was aight, opener was okay.. about all your lines were average. None of the punches were overly creative, but they all hit and that's 4 more punches than Luvable could land so this is an easy vote
Vote - Fire
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