you guys know the rules.
you guys know the rules.
Pick'em Son
Drop Early If You Have To Yo.
Ehhh......12 sounds good to me. I'll drop sometime today cause I won't be around for the rest of the week........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...4&postcount=19
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&postcount=18
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...1&postcount=10
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...6&postcount=15
Last edited by Kon Quest; August 1st, 2004 at 11:56 AM
Alright....
Jacent seems to be droppin bombs.....time to come see the therapist
Cause after this verse......you'll probably go and tear a wrist
Probably won't show.....that's why he wanted me to drop first
Cause Jacent knows I'm a shoe in....even he's digging this Kon verse
Jacent seems to have fell off....your outcome just isn't clear
Barely a puff of smoke....seems you can't make that diss appear
Masturbation is apparent…..cause he ain’t too much of a catch
So he keeps his arm strong…..cause him winning is a stretch
Easily giving this cat a pounding.....leave him mending his bones
Cause Jacent'll break a leg....even his coach was sending him home
Begged for me to make it quick…your punches, I’m abhorring them
So I ended this swiffer…..just so I could mop the floor with him
Dude's queer, it could be worse but hey fag
I mean c'mon, YOU ARE the one rockin the luis vitton gay bag
& that couplets real, jacent brings it honest
Cause J's the pro, & we all know what kon is
Proof's true, i usually can tell ya steez
But damn, didn't know u were as ugly as sam cassell in this league
& you actually think your good, hit ya peak? never
Cause my last opponents gotta be the easiest 3 weeks ever
I know ya holding back & now he tryna fight this?
Seriously, i've never seen a spitten text with that bad of gingivitis
Ya postseason run is done, stop writin & start reading
Only playoffs this guy knows, is only apart of feeding
Jacent seems to be droppin bombs.....time to come see the therapist
Cause after this verse......you'll probably go and tear a wrist
---uh....kinda forceage of the wordplay....im mehing this
Probably won't show.....that's why he wanted me to drop first
Cause Jacent knows I'm a shoe in....even he's digging this Kon verse
---haha..coo
Jacent seems to have fell off....your outcome just isn't clear
Barely a puff of smoke....seems you can't make that diss appear
---eh, not feelin..
Masturbation is apparent…..cause he ain’t too much of a catch
So he keeps his arm strong…..cause him winning is a stretch
---damn...dope..but u coulda made it rhyme better..
Easily giving this cat a pounding.....leave him mending his bones
Cause Jacent'll break a leg....even his coach was sending him home
---good hit...cuz i know what u talking bout
Begged for me to make it quick…your punches, I’m abhorring them
So I ended this swiffer…..just so I could mop the floor with him
---ok
Dude's queer, it could be worse but hey fag
I mean c'mon, YOU ARE the one rockin the luis vitton gay bag
---weak
& that couplets real, jacent brings it honest
Cause J's the pro, & we all know what kon is
---almost
Proof's true, i usually can tell ya steez
But damn, didn't know u were as ugly as sam cassell in this league
---lol
& you actually think your good, hit ya peak? never
Cause my last opponents gotta be the easiest 3 weeks ever
---eh
I know ya holding back & now he tryna fight this?
Seriously, i've never seen a spitten text with that bad of gingivitis
---coo
Ya postseason run is done, stop writin & start reading
Only playoffs this guy knows, is only apart of feeding
---meh
sorry but...i think Kon wins this..
Kon came pretty good....a couple dope lines in there
and i thik he wins this...
V.Kon Quest
"And I feel like an idiot working my day
around a call but when I pick up I don't know what to say"
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Ok....
Kon
Jacent seems to be droppin bombs.....time to come see the therapist
Cause after this verse......you'll probably go and tear a wrist
nice. bite my concept....
Probably won't show.....that's why he wanted me to drop first
Cause Jacent knows I'm a shoe in....even he's digging this Kon verse
and bite my shoe-in concept from me and Smoka's battle...
Jacent seems to have fell off....your outcome just isn't clear
Barely a puff of smoke....seems you can't make that diss appear
nice wordplay, decent punch
Masturbation is apparent…..cause he ain’t too much of a catch
So he keeps his arm strong…..cause him winning is a stretch
eh...
Easily giving this cat a pounding.....leave him mending his bones
Cause Jacent'll break a leg....even his coach was sending him home
wack.
Begged for me to make it quick…your punches, I’m abhorring them
So I ended this swiffer…..just so I could mop the floor with him
the use of 'abhorring' sounds recent too man.... jesus
conclusion = booty biter verse. I know you're better than this *smh* now prove it next week. go click that link again, where you bit my concept... and stare at all the vocabulary you borrowed.... 'apparent', the 'diss-play' concept you flipped into 'diss appear' ... my 'bomb/tear a wrist' concept... *smh several times, head lowered* I'm willing to bet, if we look up the battle where you borrowed 'abhorring' from, we'll see the other concepts and vocab you used. and to think I voted you #1 underrated. embarrassing kid, straight embarrassing.
and J
Dude's queer, it could be worse but hey fag
I mean c'mon, YOU ARE the one rockin the luis vitton gay bag
weak for opener, eh punch....
& that couplets real, jacent brings it honest
Cause J's the pro, & we all know what kon is
dope. purely.
Proof's true, i usually can tell ya steez
But damn, didn't know u were as ugly as sam cassell in this league
wack use of 'in this league' to rhyme, shoulda re-wrote the punch, wasn't right
& you actually think your good, hit ya peak? never
Cause my last opponents gotta be the easiest 3 weeks ever
a suggestion of a punch... eh
I know ya holding back & now he tryna fight this?
Seriously, i've never seen a spitten text with that bad of gingivitis
funny, decent punch
Ya postseason run is done, stop writin & start reading
Only playoffs this guy knows, is only apart of feeding
decent attempt at a witty closer, nice wordplay, but where's all the damn cruelty gone?
conclusion = better than Kons verse. You took it man, had a top ten punch or two up in there, just get more consistant.
good battle guys (except the biting lol)
pz
Last edited by $pitacular; July 29th, 2004 at 02:23 AM
LOL @ $pit saying its his shoe in concept..
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WhatThatLookLike..?!
Hey, when I see several of my own words in his verse, at that point I know it came from me.
If concepts were considered biting than everyone from RB would be banned.
Vote-Kon for more consistency. He had consistent decent punches while Jacent had one dope punch.
97% of the net would be banned
KaZe.
L e g e n d a r y
OMG THEY TOOK MY BATTLE OUT OF LEGENDS.
Kon came really good in this battle, very impressive...
But I think he directed more towards wordplay and not so much punching...
Not saying he didn't hit, just saying I felt the driving force in his verse, to me, was wordplay.
While Jacent's shit was driven by hard, mean, and relentless punches...
That incorporated wordplay, didn't rely on it.
That's the difference I'm getting at.
Harder, more direct, and the winner...Jacent
Peace
Jacent came nicer.
Kon kept doing the wordplay punches..
and some were hitting, but I got tired of it.
A few nice lines and a few weak ones.
Jacent came pretty nice.
Lacked in some areas, but dope punches...
Good shit.Originally Posted by Jacent
V/Jace
LMAO.....I guess I'll just start doing some gun play lines from now on. I never thought I would get votes against me for too many witty lines. Oh well.....nice battle Jacent
*edit (directed @ $pitacular)*
Holy Shit! You really think I went and stole concepts from one of your battles in April? I wasn't even around until the end of May, how would I have ever seen them? I see why you might have thought I "borrowed" your concepts, but I think its just a coincidence. I actually thought up that tear a wrist line in like Feb or Mar.....just never knew how to word it right. I actually still worded it wrongI appreciate the vote for underrated or whatever it was.....
Last edited by Kon Quest; July 31st, 2004 at 12:00 AM
V/ Jacent
its obvious, his shit was just all around better, it was harder punches, better flow, WAY better wording and good wordplay associated. Opener wording wasnt good though. Kon, you've come a long way, you're gettin good but your wording isnt very good and you forced your wordplay. You focused way too much on wordplay and wit than punches. Punches win battles, just remember that.
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