Full Metal Jacket/Out The Box

[Zav]

These are just two random verses I wrote up one day. They're nothing special.


Full Metal Jacket

I keep a full metal jacket, wrapped up in the habit..
With disguising a moment of a truth for just lack of..
Faith, that you seem to have in mind, of dyed landscapes..
Where chants insight, that the beliefs,
Of man kind is nothing more than puppets..
Strung along, no other purpose than to fuck with (what?)..
Man of course, molested over the years from bein' mass endorsed..
As stranded herds - with a sense of a manic birth..
Addicted to the way, we slang our words..
But that's all about choice, and God never gave a damn about that..
So crowds react, to a voice beneath the clouds and back..
Now bring it back, to when the earth was thought as flat..
So I can say that I, fathered rap and brought her back..
To the mother she's never known, always mentioned though..
As the woman, straight off at the top the the dome..
K-k-keep rockin' it on..



Out The Box

Now that I'm out the box, my whole train of thought is off..
Walkin' lost, from heart to heart conversations..
To bein' lost in translation, to holdin' hands of a woman..
Who remains nameless, to this day..
With the truth engraved, in the palms of her daughter..
Who guarded, everything we see today and take for granted..
Since without her smilin' faces, the sky's changes would seem phantom'd..
Now know the ledge, before you take your first step..
Towards the life you left, with nothing less than a few breaths..
A true death, sect, beyond the likes of man..
To rewrite the sands of time, entwined with the signs of land..
I tried to plan, a life on my introspection alone..
Where my expressions would hold up to a likeness of myself,
Just mirrored through soul..





http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=138124
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=137880

[Zav]

Uppin'..

[Zav]

Err..

[Zav]

You guy's are shittin' me, right?

[Mistral]

These were alright man...The titles were pretty interesting, caught my attention...They both had pretty good flow I thought, some places for me were a little choppy and lost some flow but it still flowed well...Vocab was there in both, pretty nice there....the content of the first one was nice, liked the angle you took with it made a good read, second one had good content in just liked the first one more...But overall they both were good reads.

[Zav]

My only real reply. Hooray!

[Zav]

Uppin'

[Vylint]

zav is dope as fuck, fuck you al!!!!!!!!

[Vylint]

Uppin Fer Zav

[Zav]

Thanks fam.