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  1. July 11th, 2004, 05:55 AM #1
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    Writejist - "The Heist"

    This story is about an Bank Heist. First verse is Implex telling E (Emerge) and Sav (Savir) how the plan is supposed to go. Then it is followed by two verses of E and Sav telling the audience how their experience went. The final verse is a multi cypher verse after what happened then E and Sav explain to Plex what went down.

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    Beat: I forgot lol.
    Mixizzle: Genre Productizzle
    1st Verse: Implizzle
    2nd Verse: Mergizzle
    3rd Verse: Savizzle
    4th Verse: Phatness
    Hooks: Illness lol

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  2. July 11th, 2004, 06:26 AM #2
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    this was alot better than the text version i read... you all came nice and smooth... it seemed to fit much better.... especially the last verse, with all of you on... tight.... really liked it.... good work.... gangsta mo' fuckas.... lol
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  3. July 11th, 2004, 12:29 PM #3
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    yeah, quite a nice concept kinda like immortal technique peruvian cocaine but the rapping weren't all that but nice enough lyrics
  4. July 11th, 2004, 01:25 PM #4
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    like the topic...

    "put em up, put em up..." LoL

    Beat was pretty tight... and all emcees did there thing.... LMMFAO "give me your fuckin gold nuggets." Classic.
    Nice track... keep it up...
  5. July 11th, 2004, 04:27 PM #5
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    *listening*


    first dude...flow is choppy...but good story tellin...not bad delivery
    second cat...lol @ put em up....flow is strait...also..good story tellin..
    nice emotion and pretty good delivery..work on that pronounciation
    a little bit
    third cat...kinda better than the rest...nice flow..emotion...delivery..
    strait lyrics and what not..


    Cypher is decent....not bad





    decent track....keep doin yallz thing...
  6. July 11th, 2004, 05:46 PM #6
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    This was neat concept... The first guy is kind on and off on some lines the beat fade wasn't super necessary but it makes the voices stand out which is probably what you were going for.... It sounded like there were a lot of punchins to me but that ain't a real big deal but man some places would sounded a lot smoother all over even though quality wasn't the best it was at least consistent which works.
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  7. July 11th, 2004, 06:16 PM #7
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    this is my first audio session so like im bound to be wack but hopefully ill get better in the next few tries...
  8. July 11th, 2004, 06:21 PM #8
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    first dude's flow isnt really catchin me hard... not real fluid

    its emerge! your flow is kinda choppy...young man voice! *rubs your smooth 10 year old buttocks*

    savir... best flow out of the bunch, could use some better ennunciation though...

    this was iight.
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  9. July 11th, 2004, 07:36 PM #9
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  10. July 11th, 2004, 07:47 PM #10
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    Good storytelling by Implex. I agree, flow could be a lil' better. Lol@the huddle. Lmfao!@"put'em up". I swear, you sound like a 15 y/o kid. You speak really proper. Your flow was cool, but feel off at a couple points. Nothing major though. Savir ripping it. Ill flow from him. Lmao@Gold nuggets. Niggas still wear gold nuggets? The last verse was dope. Good shit again, fellas.

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  11. July 12th, 2004, 01:57 AM #11
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  12. July 12th, 2004, 02:10 AM #12
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    first guys flow reminds me of 1988. you could have rode the beat better too

    emerge sounds young. the only reason i listened cause everyone made fun of put em up put em up

    savir came pretty good.
  13. July 12th, 2004, 02:45 AM #13
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    <listening>

    LMAO at the intro.. lol

    This beat is cool... fast and catchy... Implex is good... good lyrics and nice delivery, but flow is slightly ehh.. good work though

    Emerge - you sound like your 12.. but still good... delivery is very nice, and your gangsta lyrics are inspiring... flow is good, falls off in a few places but mostly nice

    Savir - your flow is very good, fast and breath control is great... lyrics are great too, nice storytelling

    The multi cypher at the end was sick... good work on that one.. it's my favourite bit

    The concept on this is dope, and the interludes were done well... good work all round...
  14. July 12th, 2004, 12:12 PM #14
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    lol at my gangster lyrics

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  15. July 12th, 2004, 12:33 PM #15
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    lol this was Orph Rex`s beat that he made.

    the first dude - flow was really choppy, i aint really vibe w, him and his delivery could use some work too

    mutha fuckin merge - word to your papi, you do sound very young but your flow was iight, its just like mine, still a lil choppy but everything else was coo

    gametime - your pretty good, good job.

    nice track, merge i told you i wanna be on a writejiist track !
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