Emulated vs Kandy

[kandy]

Aight here's the rules again..

10-12 lines..
no feeding...
30 minutes after check-in

Good luck

[kandy]

--<<Checking In>>--

[kandy]

Maybe you should put the word "mentally" infront of your name
There's no room for a 'mentally challenged' bitch in the rap game
I tried approaching you nicely but got scared by your face
You wont place in this battle, you always come last in the race
Sort of like the way you dress, your ryhming style is outdated
.....If people were asked how they think you did in this battle...
You'd be the first to say "no fair, I hate this!"
I held out my hand and said "I hope you like sweet surprises"
"Mommy said not to take Kandy from stangers" and you politely denied it
So I said okay and asked you where you were from
I've heard of retards, but never had the pleasure of meeting one

[kandy]

You gonna check in or what?

[Emulated]

eh...i dont kno y it always says online next to my name even when i close windows and leave the house....but uh....check in

[Emulated]

*when kandy made her pic thread she said "trying to see how many would diss me...
*her profile says she eats lots of candy...
*she abbreviates her crews name and called them peepee

we battlin on the net, but i can see the fear in ur eyes...
mad when she posted her verse, she really "submitted" when she replied...
u think u can "sit" in my throne just because u cannot "stand" me...
wonders why she cant get attention, fat bitch, ur eatin too much candy*...
bitch called out emulated because im sumthin she cant resist...
ugly ass, put up the pics, to see how many ppl would diss...
i dont care how u look, i have no respect for u...
nice name for ur fam, but fuck pissin, im gonna shit on ur crew...
send ya weak crew at me, im gonna have to blast ya boys...
u jus there for pleasure, like lil kim is for bad boy...

[sabotage]

meh.. not a bad battle... 1 thing first of all... emulated kandy isn't fat at all.. in fact shes really skinny ... and mint at that... but anyways em you came really played in this battle... you had a lil creativity and a decent use of personals but they werent hitting hard at all... especially using a fake personal? wtf is that? shows your desperate to win. you had really simple lines too... made it boring to read.. hardly kept my attention. structure and flow were aight tho... kandy.. you came pretty hard in this one.. i think your punches were stronger than ems but you went off flow around the end off first read but with proper breath control and pausing your ok. I didn't notice many personals in there but your if your opener was a personal it wasn't that strong... none the less you had stronger punches than him so I'ma give this one to kandy.

ok battle
props 2 both
hit up my battles
peace

Vote-Kandy

[STUBBY]

ok here it goes-

Emulateed- now i totally disagree with sabotage on this shit man, i definately feel that you really sucked in this battle, i mean every thing that you tried to say just came out wrong man, you worded everything terribly your shit would have been real good iif it was said right

Kandy-(DOPE PIECE GIRL) , lol this shit was one of the better verses that i have read from you, i think that your structure was real good, your flow was alright, it would have been alot better, but you had 2 lines in there that didnt rhyme that well lol, but your shit was real good

V/Kandy

[Miss Behaving]

Nice battle.

Kandy: LOL nice. This is definately one of your better drops, nice use of language, but your structure gets kind of disjoined in the middle for a few bars. Nice personals and some clever word usage.

Emulated: Your piece good, you had a few good ideas for punches but your wording meant they didnt hit effectively. To elivate rework your sentence structure to make your punches stronger.

Vote// Kandy

I took the time to vote on yours, hit up one of the battles in my sig with an honest vote. Thanks

[STUBBY]

RETURN THE FAVOR BOTH OF YALL PLEASE

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=136704

[kandy]

thanks everyone.. and nice job Emulated.. props to ya

...but one thing.. lol .. did u do a fucking backround check on my ass just to get in some decent punches??? damn u were on a hunt werent ya?..but i agree with sabotage..u had too many fake personals and that makes me think u are psychotic..

[roux]

ok
kandy-eh, not too bad, but nothing really even noteworthy here, the opener was funny but "retard" lines are played as hell
".....If people were asked how they think you did in this battle...
You'd be the first to say "no fair, I hate this!""---maybe i'm stoopid, but this shit seemed awful and totally out of place, it don't ryme or even fit, WTF???
keep it poppin next time, too much retatrd-related stuff and a lot of played lines, good flow though(except for the line i quoted)


Emulated, nice verse, but a little stretched on the made up personals."we battlin on the net, but i can see the fear in ur eyes...
mad when she posted her verse, she really "submitted" when she replied..."-love the opener, that made me want to read the rest

--"bitch called out emulated because im sumthin she cant resist...
ugly ass, put up the pics, to see how many ppl would diss..."--a little stretched, maybe sounds good on audio, but this is text. over all, better punches by Emulated, less played too
--vote-Emulated

[Jonezy]

ok hes how i seen it

kandy-not a bad verse from you at all, you did have some good connecting punches whcih were linked well with personals...you hit alot harder than usual, you came strong in this battle and deffo had the better punches...flow was good but did go choppy a few times. structure wasnt bad.


em -not very good from you, no real hard hittin punches or good personals that hit really hard, you should of been more creative and used wordplay, try not to use played lines and just link hard punches with personals.



vote kandy

return the favour in one of my battles plz..both r on front lines first page...thanx

[Fire aka Nikkelz]

The battle was okay...didnt like the crew diss thing...can i be next on you battle list Emulated?

Anyway.....Emulated Nice verse. the structure was okay. I felt as though you could have had a better opener. It didnt really have anything going for it. The flow was okay too. It was kinda boring. You really didnt bring any live punches in the battle, and what were supposed to be punches were played. Personals werent really identified that well, you had maybe 2 worth counting. The closer was good. I noticed that you try and make punches but you have to use better concepts. Elevation is good

Kandy.....nice battle, Ive seen you drop a better verse tho, but you really didnt have to try that hard. The opener was cool...i liked it. You had alot of personals and they were good. I especially liked the "rhyming style" line. You also had alot of good punches. You had good concepts to rhyme about also. The structure was set up okay and the flow was good. I think that you did very well for going first in this battle. Most people try and feed. Elevation is good.

Overall..it was a good battle from both sides, but Kandy delivered better


vote...Kandy

Crew vote gone.
-Amb

[kandy]

uppin