Jammin' Jobus vs Action

[Jammin' Jobus]

due within 24 hours...
10 lines
no feeding...
no other bullshit

[Jammin' Jobus]

Your true garbage, you come streched and played but hey
at least youve been known to drop dope...on opposite day
Your an example of why dickriding will send this site to hell
I underestimated the issue at hand, until i saw you in LLL
You got destroyed by feeble I guess for you thats shitty
Your no exception to the rule: Blond bitches dont drop witty
Your first LLL match-up was Kon and still you faced defeat
Sorry to burst your bubble, being a girl doesnt make you elite
Starving children couldnt stomach your verse so you started famine
Face it, YOU SUCK, even your avy hates you and loves jammin'

[Nique.]

^LoL. Ill drop in a few minutes. By the way, Im black.

[Nique.]

ILLunatic cant vote.

Ill admit ya skill level has Mass potential.....but I hate gays
Cuz like re-runs of Good Time's..viewers dont pay attention to J.J.
So Im the main focus..u wack and I dont mean to be blatant
There's still no sympathy 4 Jew..even if ur titlle star's represented David
Jammin's like poor reporter's......cuz his talk is cheap
Its a gimmick match..cuz ya avy prove's dat u cant bring da beef
Skeleton with a cigarette's? Your wackness just wont harm me
Cuz if you think dats cool..ill just bone this thug in harmony
U know u a fag..cuz Im a chick and u still aint get personal
Cuz Jammin Jobus a spur of da moment..like info-commercials


If you dont get it. Dont vote.

[CAMROK]

Shit.. both of your verses are so damn close, I can't figure the winner
and I read them both about 5 times now....

Both came pretty weak..
Was a case of good concepts with bad follow throughs.....
especially with action.. needs rewording

I really can't decide here though, I need sleep and I'll check it tomorrow.. but atleast I'm upping it for you now.

[CAMROK]

Alright.. man on my word.

Still damn close.. but I think action came with better creativity in her verse, even though I dont like the way she worded some of her punchlines, I think they were better thought up punches, and they worked..... just not as good as they should have.. Jammin, u came with some ok stuff at times as well.. I think u both could've came stronger with ur verses and if one of u could have done that a little more u would've easily won....

Action for more creativity and a harder punch or two.. not by much

vote- action

[Stuff'd Aminol]

Jobus, i only really like one of your personals, and it was your closer, wasn't feeling your flow, and other than closer i didn't like any of your other lines and your structure wasn't anything special, try n use some multis too, and increase your metas

Starving children couldnt stomach your verse so you started famine
Face it, YOU SUCK, even your avy hates you and loves jammin'

that line made me laugh in a good way, really nice closer

now, Action, I your opener a lot, but it don't like lines with .... in them, t messes up your flow, your flow then proceeded to get even worse, you had a few wack personals, like one multi, hated your structure, had some nice personals though, good wordplay, so aside from a horrible flow and structure, u beat him

my v/ action