Catalist vs S to the DIZZLE

[Scott B]

12-14 lines
spit tonight
house rules

[Catalist]

In....will spit tonght at around 7 eastern...gotta go paint a room

i will show

[Scott B]

im tired of these homos picking names outta dictionary
catalist beating sdizzle? fiction............ very
ur lines are played, and flow is never happenin
catalist u the best?........... na hes battlin him
^ i can boast in my lines and be better than u
ur wins are a guessing game, but u have no clue
this bitch wants a battle, have u carried out in a herse
i wasn't mad, i was embarrased to be mentioned in ur verse
u didn't last long in lll jr., ur leavin after this week
hell.................... ur losing right as i speak
why would battle the best, not the brightest move
i thought this was a battle....
..................................... but its just me vs. u
thought he was gangsta, just walks.........doesn't run the street
next time ull spit ill............................ if its written by me

[Catalist]

I saw his callout and decided to explore...
Looked at his name and realized.......
.........That I Already Merked this kid before!
Thought you couldnt get worse, but you never seem to amaze
I should take this guy seriously?, Look at his sig........
.........There's a quote about mayonaise!
Got a good record in LLL Jr., should i be terrified?
Had a feeling you only battled newbs....

even though sdizzle maintains a decent record here in LLL Jr., he hasnt battled any big names

.........And Smoka Verified!
Stats said 5-1, but I knew there had to be catch

sdizzle wins (2-0) and stays in the league (for now)

Shit, Aisle was even mad about you winning you your do or die match!
All this battling you do, is makin you delirious

i don tthink this crew would last without me

Haha, thanks for the laugh......
.....Oh fuck...You were actually serious!
Didn't have the stamina to reach the line limit, so strengthen your ryhmes
And that must be true.....
.....Since you recycled your last two lines!

[Trogdor]

lol wow

Sdizzle

Your verse wasnt very good except structure, and flow was alrite. You had 1 or 2 personals, but thats about it. You had one punchline about the NO CLUE, that was alrite but kinda played. Overall an alrite verse, kinda simple, but it wasnt newbish.

Catalist

Sweet personals, and tons of them......personals are my fav and thats why i felt you won this battle.....that along with better flow, although your styles were sorta similar. this was a fun battle to read. you didnt need any metaphors or similes simply because of all the personals, and that kept me interested

Vote: Catalist for personals


please hit this up honestlyQ

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124845

[flowsinevitable]

ok ok ok..hol up...if it was up to me neither of ya'll would win but sdizzile had some good punch lines..so the battle goes to him...catalist..u had some punch lines but ya flows was hard to follow wit all that otha shit in there so to me the battle went to sdizzle

[Orthodox.]

Lol. Nice Cat, dope personals and punches from you....a pretty nice drop overall I have to say.

All this battling you do, is makin you delirious
Quote:
Originally Posted by Sdizzle
i don tthink this crew would last without me

Haha, thanks for the laugh......
.....Oh fuck...You were actually serious!

LMFAO! Dope man.

Dizzle you came aight bro.
Just not hard hitting or witty enough with your punches.
Keep elevating though.

V/Cat

Peep my jawn with CarsonJet men.

[Catalist]

ok thanks for votes

ill hit up links after im done painting my room

uppin 1
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[Catalist]

hey i got a great idea....

Vote....!

up 2

[Catalist]

uppin 3 please vote...i always return favor

[נєм]

Ino this is a crew vote but hey.....
Sdizzle wernt many hard punches thrown they were coming up short.. parts needed rewording aswell.. so good lines in there..flow was sketchy needs sorting out....

Catalist holy shit this was dope seriously some of them lines had me pissing myself they were hard hitting and they followed through on him.. flow was consistantly flowing with punches never stopped.. Great personals..

\/0te.. Catalist for doper personals and Punches...

['PercepTion']

Sdizzle:
Your flow was basic...no real complexity decent structure to it...your lacked with vocab alot, it came across very simplistic...your punches hit weakly, they could have been so much more..your tried top pull off some personals, but it didn't exactly work well did it..?

Catalist:
Your had some mad personals in here...they hit hard...:
"Thought you couldnt get worse, but you never seem to amaze
I should take this guy seriously?, Look at his sig........
.........There's a quote about mayonaise!"...funny..lol

Liked the fact that you researched, showed you put effort into this....finsiher was dope..killed him off..lol...Flow was decent...fluenty[ish]....could have used some more internals th0..

v/Catalist

[Catalist]

uppin 4 people.....vote

please vote

end this...

[G£s†U®£s]

Sdizzle- Your punches didnt hit at all, they were weak and didht hit your opponent, which makes for a bad verse, personals were bad also, and flow was off cuz the verse was stretched, work on flow and personals, you need to do some elevating. Also, make your lines shorter because it hurts your structure.

Catalist- I liked all the personals you had, they made the verse strong and you really did some research on dizzle. The flow was a bit off becasue lines were stretched but the amount of hard hitting personals made the verse better. Work on Structure and flow. Punches were great and Personals hit hard


v**Catalist

[Laureate]

Sdizzle...basic verse....most lines were mad played dude.....no complexity present....concepts were unoriginal....you can fo a lot better man....up your wittiness tooo

Catalist...quotes got annoying man...limit them....you had a few nice punches and your personals were really good...flow was perfect...but you win this battle with more consistent punches and personals in your verse

Vote Catalist