You know the rules.
Dont break them
HOlla
Flowsinevitable
Super Flows
You know the rules.
Dont break them
HOlla
Aight yo
Look at "Flows" He sounds like a horny basterd//
Comeon man put up your best line,So go ahead and kill this nerd,
I told you B4 man dont be placin no commin and placin no bets//
Becuz my rhymes is going to confuse you you going to need a ciggeretts,
I can go on for days ,but when The battery keeps goin and goin//
But my rhymes keep transporting like niagra falls keep flowin,/
IM trying to tell you to calm down becuz I keep fuckin your mom with a freddy kruger sweater on,
But if they vote for me man remember its not my fault//
PLease man dont tell me you made when I fucked your sister and she turned into the incredible Hulk,
IM not going to ripp you and clean you up becuz you gey//
Even tho we both from the same place yo as disrespecting VA,
But hey man my its time for bed time and when its time to go its time to go//
I definitly feeling say leaving your record 2-1,
oops my bad I mess uped on some heres the remake
Aight yo
Look at "Flows" He sounds like a horny basterd//
Comeon man put up your best line,So go ahead and kill this nerd,
I told you B4 man dont be placin no commin and placin no bets//
Becuz my rhymes is going to confuse you you going to need some ciggeretts,
I can go on for days ,but when The battery keeps goin and goin//
But my rhymes keep transporting like niagra falls keep flowin,/
IM trying to tell you to calm down becuz I keep fuckin your mom with a freddy kruger sweater on,
But if they vote for me man remember its not my fault//
PLease man dont tell me you made when I fucked your sister and she turned into the incredible Hulk,
IM not going to ripp you and clean you up becuz you gey//
Even tho we both from the same place yo as disrespecting VA,
But hey man my its time for bed time and when its time to be done its time to be done//
I definitly feeling say leaving your record 2-1,
I definitly feeling *sad* leaving your record 2-1,
Oops I messed up again
Come on man ya rhymes is wack u cant be serious
You been smokin my shit ..its den got you delirious
You think you the hottest nigga out be fa real
NIgga i got skills im the 1 like faith hill
Im on them purple hill u puoppin them purple pills
You gettin real dizzy feeling like Eurkal feels
Cuz aint nobody next to I
What the hell u thinkin bout must be on that X like Ja
NIgga im from VA u know how i get down
Like the barrell on my .40 cal spin like a mary-go-round
Im still not feelin ya flows even if you puttin in more
I been runnin va so long my feet gettin soar nigga
Wow...
Punches-Super
Flow-inev
Multi-None
Personals-None
Meta-None
Opener-Super
Closer-None
Overal-Super
Wow this battle was really really bad, I am orry guys but come on now, keep your lines more even Super, you spit like a deranged person with a speech impediment.
Flows your stuff was cool but you really dident diss him at all, you basically concentrated on self glorification, please man, diss on your opponet.
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lol,alright nice try....Lol but anywayz.........uppin for votes.............uppin for votes....
Overall:Originally Posted by Super Flows
You did horrible...but it was decent enough to beat Flows....i suggest you try harder more direct punches....drop the "//" and shorten your lines...
Overall:
You had a better structure than Super Flows...but the rest needs working on badly...i suggest you make more direct hard punches and cocky remarks if you wish to get better.....
Vote - Super Flows
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uppin............uppin fo votes..........soI can make this kats record 0-1.......
what the hell is he talkin about.LOL lets be real.uppin fo votes..........uppin........uppin
uppin...........uppin....................uppin
Originally Posted by Super Flows
Look at "Flows" He sounds like a horny basterd//
Comeon man put up your best line,So go ahead and kill this nerd,
no, what was that lol
I told you B4 man dont be placin no commin and placin no bets//
Becuz my rhymes is going to confuse you you going to need some ciggeretts,
lol what? didnt make sense
I can go on for days ,but when The battery keeps goin and goin//
But my rhymes keep transporting like niagra falls keep flowin,/
filler, second was wack
IM trying to tell you to calm down becuz I keep fuckin your mom with a freddy kruger sweater on,
But if they vote for me man remember its not my fault//
PLease man dont tell me you made when I fucked your sister and she turned into the incredible Hulk,
lol...this was funny but still wack
IM not going to ripp you and clean you up becuz you gey//
Even tho we both from the same place yo as disrespecting VA,
personal......ok i guess
But hey man my its time for bed time and when its time to be done its time to be done//
I definitly feeling say leaving your record 2-1,
alrite personal........
Overal.......
u did bad, dont use // in ur bars and even ur flow
Quote:
Originally Posted by flowsinevitable
Come on man ya rhymes is wack u cant be serious
You been smokin my shit ..its den got you delirious
fillers
You think you the hottest nigga out be fa real
NIgga i got skills im the 1 like faith hill
alrite......
Im on them purple hill u puoppin them purple pills
You gettin real dizzy feeling like Eurkal feels
what?
Cuz aint nobody next to I
What the hell u thinkin bout must be on that X like Ja
sorry no
NIgga im from VA u know how i get down
Like the barrell on my .40 cal spin like a mary-go-round
alrite
Im still not feelin ya flows even if you puttin in more
I been runnin va so long my feet gettin soar nigga
wack
Superflow only lost in structure...........everything was on his side, flow coulda been beter tho
Vote: Super
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uppin fo votes.........you know I beat this kat.
Yo this is my last uppin#5......uppin.......uppin fo votes......
dang yo we died out becuz we made it to that 2 page
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