Dont Quit

[Avenge]

This is for a friend who stopped writing....

Wish i could rewind this shit
Back to when you were complying spits
Jottin scripts...counting syllables
making it so everyline was feelable
I was feelin it, anger? you were spilling it
Thought you needed to chill a bit
now you're done...you get no joy from writing
Broke my heart...deployed the silence
voice was violent...now soft and calm
I liked it better when you were droppin psalms
stopped your palm...cant even finnish the thought
Im dimminished and distraught
But now you've got a life to lead
Always enjoyed seeing your strife to Read
On the net...fighting back tears like rivalry
you have scriptures that the bible needs
Its for the better...Im trying to say
Help that girl to grow up right in this day
She doesnt understand you havnt finnished your life
but you could help her by beginning to write....

[Varentao]

Seemed quick. Like you sketched it all out. Whcih maybe was how it was meant to be. Jotting down thoughts and feelings on this person (and writing) in a raw way.

It was solid for what it was.

..resp...

[Philo]

nice stuff.
I hear you and have had that experience with people to.
It did seem a quick piece and that seemed to work, there's more rawness to it.
But sometimes you gota come to grips and let him live his life too.

I enjoyed it though.
.wurd.

[Wulf1]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125728
Feed please

ahh i like that gives me the fuel to start writeing again it was nice, though felt forced it was a nice piece

[Spoken]

i agree, it seems sketched. based on one solid thought, and you get your point out and acrossed. its pretty self explaintory really, it was more for a purpose then the actually ability im guessing. was different thou, and showed signs of a good writer.

T