I Still Love You

[LM]

I wrote this about my ex girlfriend who I miss badly.

--CHORUS--SING--X2--
Just fuck what I said, I regret it now
Without you, life is gettin me down
I'll stick around, this love is so true
Come back girl coz I still love you

--VERSE 1--SING--
I just want to be with you again
I said we were finished...
...But I was stupid then
When we slept I held you near
But now it's over...
...I sleep on my tears
My fears seem so much more real
Coz I'm lonely...
...I need you to feel
I kneel and beg for 1 more chance
And if we had music...
...Then I'd ask for 1 dance

--CHORUS--SING--X2--
Just fuck what I said, I regret it now
Without you, life is gettin me down
I'll stick around, this love is so true
Come back girl coz I still love you

--VERSE 2--RAP--
I'm sorry for the hurt and all the pain
It wasnt my fault...
...I wish we could try again
You claim you dont love me no more
That hurts me...
...Now my heart feels sore
My jaw aches from sayin my apologies
I feel like leavin...
...Please will you follow me
Be my girl again, I know we'll be fine
Coz we're a team...
...You and LM, combined

--CHORUS--SING--X2--
Just fuck what I said, I regret it now
Without you, life is gettin me down
I'll stick around, this love is so true
Come back girl coz I still love you


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http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120423
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...28#post1286028

[Penskills]

This would sound pretty gppd on audio..This is something different from what I'm use to seeing from you..it was nice...good on audio though...

[Abram]

Good writing. I dunno why but the first 2 lines of the chorus reminded me of that damn Eamon song they play over and over...and over on the radio.

I liked reading this. Everything came together real nice like a story. I'm sure it would sound good in audio but it's good this way too.

"When we slept I held you near
But now it's over...
...I sleep on my tears
My fears seem so much more real
Coz I'm lonely...
...I need you to feel"

Those were my favorite lines. The sleep on tears part was real nice.

[Azure]

Would make a good audio.
You like to sing?
Lol.

[Key Tone]

I think this is really tight people shouldnt sleep on it but it would probably be sicker on audio with a mellow beat. it was nice written good flow creative work on transitions to make it more smoother.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...56#post1286456

Check MIne^^

[LM]

Good writing. I dunno why but the first 2 lines of the chorus reminded me of that damn Eamon song they play over and over...and over on the radio.

It was on the T.V as I was writin the chorus....

Uppin

[UNDEAD.]

this was nice your chorus could of been better but overall nice flow good meaning i can feel u heartbreak man ur words brought back memories so that was a bad and good thing but overall nice piece man.

[LM]

Uppin

[southsideloco]

nice piece homie...like said...wouldve sounded better on audio but u still flowed it out tight...nice flow, the hook was aiight, n the vocab was good...had sum emotions to it so it made it an even deeper read n gave deeper thought...overall it was a nice piece homie..keep flowin n hope to see more from u.

Return the favor n hit up my sig unda OM n leave sum feedback on my recent drop..be much appreciated;thanx

Peace

[LM]

Uppin

[Laureate]

This was good LM....

Flow was nice..the refrain reminded me of Eamon's 'Fuck It' except you were portraying the opposite message...Emotions ran deep here..I like the rap verse the best....maybe coulda extended both of them as they were real short...damn...If I was ya girl I';d come back to you...you gonna perform this for her? *hint hint* lol...good drop man

Please peep 'Behind the Scenes' in my sig..thanks

[Osirus]

this was nice,,,

it would sound really good in audio with a kanye style beat..

peace