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    Stage Fright

    This is for my battle verse against Stryk9. Its a topical about...

    Stage Fright

    Check it...

    Backstage
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    Deception to the brain, do I have what it takes to make it?
    Its an all or nothing game, will I stand to make or break it?
    The questions echo within my mind, I hide behind my seat
    A heartbeat away to enrage my face with victory or defeat
    My palms embalm perspiration, desperate for more direction
    The words I thirst are unheard at first to prevent my perfection
    So the doubt seems to grow as I’m a step closer to performing
    Recollecting images of my scripts in the form of brainstorming
    Close my eyes to recite a prayer, then look my face in the mirror
    I take a step towards the door and the fear seems to grow nearer
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    At the Top
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    I embrace the faces of the crowd and try to look past the stares
    Recallin all the mistakes I made the day before in my nightmare
    I ensnare my verse to be dispersed vocally through my chords
    Only to be caught too afraid to swallow as sweat fills my pores
    My mind stumbles upon a few sketchy lines and a broken chorus
    Trying hard to remember the couple of verses I wrote before this
    The crowd adores this, they laugh and mock my poor performance
    So it hits me, I can’t fail my dreams of signin autographs and tourin
    I recall it all to enthrall the call of the crowd screamin' my name
    Let loose the fear that I've felt and grab hold the meanin of fame


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    Last edited by Ace of Aces; March 19th, 2004 at 01:23 PM

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    Pretty nice drop, Ace...

    Very 8 Mile-ish, of course...

    But you made it your own, and didn't mention Mekhi Phifer! LOL!

    Real good vocab, real tight flow.

    The only thing I'd fault is the originality, but hey, Em ain't the only one that ever felt that way, is he?

    So, real good drop, can't relate as I've never wanted to be in front of a crowd, but still, the imagery and emotion were enough to make me feel this.

    Dope stuff, Ace.

    Peace

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    ^thanx man i appreciate it. but im better than eminem. lol.

    peace

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    ^word..................uppin............
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    peacez

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