The Rules
Drop Wednesday Midnight (GMT)
No Biting
No D/r
No Crew
No Hate
No Recycling Etc.
10-12 lines
Whoever drop 1st
The Rules
Drop Wednesday Midnight (GMT)
No Biting
No D/r
No Crew
No Hate
No Recycling Etc.
10-12 lines
Whoever drop 1st
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checking in.........
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ight checking in 4 dis shit
Istart by Jabbin a weapon Thru Your Head,
bcus the Led in my pencil will leave you dead./
Now your name should be Pencil bcus i've rubbed you out,
my rhymes are wittier than yours without a doubt./
i looked at this shit and it made me cry and cringe,
dont call any1 pu$$y when you hav the minge,
im gona stab you again for bein ugly but with a Lyrical Surringe./
yep its true wat you've said your goin no where,
this bitch got fucked so decided to stop and stare./
im gona slap your dad for not takin protection,
he's hurt your mum our the infection./
you just a trainee who's on Instant probation,
we are waitin for the winner were's The Judge for conformation?/
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Line 8......... Goin no where *his custom text*
Line 12........ He's on Probation for *Instants Crew*
Line 13........ The Judge is the leader of *Instant*
i typed up 12 lines but 1 more line dont matter sorri.......
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ight ma bad rascal 4 not droppin cos i fell asleep.....mum just woke me up lol.....imma drop 1st thing 2morrow as i am really tired and need sleep
pz
ok fair enough, but keep to the deadlines in future.......
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fuck this you were active before the Deadline and Afterwards so you could of dropped then.........
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He said he'd drop first thing in the morning.. And you agree'd
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ok Illunatic fair enough *just testin your doin your job quickly*
You
Passed
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sorry bout bein l8 fell asleep last nite and been school 2day
Im The Lumberjack Ur ASS Is THe Tree This Spits Over Its Strike Three...
YOUR Bars Weaker thAN Fleas Would U Put DoWn The Mic please!!!!!!!....
AINES Cause's Hits & Crunches Havin RASCAL Sick Of His Punches..
I Drain The Fear Sweat Outta You Like I Was Twist in Sponges..
Shout & Scream Cause AINES Is Knockin The Teddy's Outta Ya Dreams..
U Stare In The Mirror BItch And PUssY Is About To Be Seen...
Grab & Cluck Cause Like M Jackson To White You Lack The Luck..(Look)
U Still Couldnt Bring Weight To This Battle If You Was Fat As FUck...
Ya Lines Hit? Please!! Takin Pills Only Time You Rhyme With E'z...(Ease)
Only Time We See Your HardnesS Is Starin At Faggits Wearin Tight Fit Jeans..
Endin This....
pz
aines gets it hit ahrder better punches felt it more too.
peace
ayo this is L.A.W.T.O.N., u wanna battle me??
They Shootin....arrrr made u look!
L.A.W.T.O.N.
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RASCAL,
you've got a little better since you cane here, but you still aint dropping hard enough,
you opening two bars were about a pencil, very simple, not much wordplay, you need to work on the way you word things, the pencil things is your custom tex, so your more or less punching yourself, nothing really hit hard the ugly jokokes have ben played on aines.
Aines,
you verse was better than RASCALS an your elevating, a nice constant verse, punches wernt the best but they did the job, you wordplay was good, an overall you had enough force to beat rascal easily.
Vote- Aines
better overall verse, rascal came to elementary for aines here.
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leave feed and a link i'll return it
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^^^that was ur best line........ur verse was just wack.....u bolded shit and put in hyperlinks tryin to be witty, but they just sucked......even ur structure and flow were wack......u had no metas.......weak wordplay........ur punches didnt connect......attempts at personals, but they were wack as well.......Originally Posted by RASCAL
^^^i think those were ur two best lines........had a meta.......wordplay......a decent punch cause its kinda played but whateva.......overall ur verse was ok.......it had a good structure and an ok flow.......u had some metas........wordplay was pretty good......some of ya punches connected.......no personals......
conclusion - Aines takes this in a landslide.......he had a good structure.......metas.......wordplay.......punches .......rascal had nothin.......aines came harder, more creative and more witty so he gets my vote......
VOTE - AINES
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Rascal- haha, I swear you've got an obsession with stationary products. You used a pencil line followed by a pencil line, and I didn't like that. What's this about minge? Where i'm from it's not a common word, so I suspect you're using a rhyming dictionary.
I think insulting Aines picture qualifies to be the played joke of the year. (As funny as it is, it's still old) The rest is just bleh. Don't take it personally, cause I think you've got talent... just try correcting some of these problems. Good votes give you an idea of what to improve upon, rather then "He was wack, the other guy was dope" votes.i looked at this shit and it made me cry and cringe,
Aines- Wins for showing more orginallity.
Hit up my sig please.Ya Lines Hit? Please!! Takin Pills Only Time You Rhyme With E'z...(Ease)
-Best Line
LIFE'S A BITCH, BUT GOD FORBID THE BITCH DIVORCE ME
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