10-16 lines
no feeding
drop whenever
no dickriding
check in
checking in myself
sHoRtAy140
MC StikiNicky
10-16 lines
no feeding
drop whenever
no dickriding
check in
checking in myself
iight playa checkin in u spit first iight ima start to key
admiriable countortions, this `kids` -punches- are as -empty` as -pre-mature- 'abortions', in depth proportions, ima have this bitch mc drop more win(d)s than asthma patients visiting DR. Kavorkiaen//.1
i trailed n made it.. Self confidence is good, don’t start ur own rumours, (said my drops are 'ghostwritten')
no pardon or humor, cuz I 'in-cyst ur shit!' like im 'fartin on tumors'//.2
ill Burn mc snicky like grass, call me ya game-mower , its over for pro ya just a waste of potential like lighting joints with a flame-thrower// hahaha.3
i 'dish out punches' that leaves mc snicky 'fucked over' like 'smut-dealin', cut-squealin, i put your 'intestines in ya hands'..you losin to splitz like always its a 'gut-feelin'//.4
i’ll bring the 'raw-to-shame' i’m like babys on instant messenger i just 'crawl-n-aim', .5
i heard omc snicky sucks a mean dick??….aint that how you made the 'hall-of-fame'? /.6
mc snicky you whack, the only time you 'feel fly' is when you 'fisting-Pilots', /.7
you quickly get used to Losing to splitz Like 'instant-diets'/ hahaha.8
'remove-ya-spine' smack ya coke(cocain) splitz literally 'battered-and-bruised-ya-lines', /.9
mc snicky be having one night stands with pre teens, the only time he 'used-a-nine'.10
watch as i groove-this-tart and both physically and mentally remove-his-heart to show that his life is in my hands,/ .11
This clown mc sticky will have to improve-his-chart in order for him to prove-his-part cuz as of now i'm leaving him right where he stands!/ .12
mc stiki laying-wack, worthless verse is saying-jack, i got no beef, but this homo’s sayin I’m not ill so i’m just hating-back, //13
Spraying-gats, respect is currency, to me mc's paying-tax, title’s an encyclopedia: shortay vs mc stiki is just stating-facts! /14
sry about that my lines got messed up And my computer wont let me fix them
Ayo Some One Close This Shyt This Is A No Show This Is A Waste Of My Time
I'm gonna drop in like 1 hour. I had to drive to Montreal today so I just got on a computer like 10 minutes ago.
Shortay int-er-cepted a newbie callout cuz he can't hold his own a-gainst vets/
Res-ted his eyes be-fore this bout cuz he "lags" be-hind worse than jets/
This i-diot tries to el-ev-ate so he tries to "Get Carter (Harder)"/
But he lacks "TestoStallone" like a faggot boxing Midcarder!/
Your rhymes are east-of-straight, so you write yo shit on papyrus/
Cuz you couldn't rip thru the int-er-net if u were an en-crypted virus!/
Yo shit is more stretched than this guy's---->mouth when he laughs/
Don't make me pull the condoms out ya buried uncle's asshole and REALLY dig up ya past!/
Shit bitch cock motherfucker cunt- I can beat you with random swears/
But your rhymes are so mainstream, you already planning Shortay leather crotchless wear!/
Whateva man, when you took this callout, u knew it was uneven level/
Because i'm standing on a pedestal, while you're still kissing pebbles!/
Sorry for the wait.
Haha, something tells me you weren't actually a newb
Anyways, uppin' this thread.
I will return the favour if you vote.
?? Wut Do U Mean ???.......
well when i looked at shorteys verse this is what i saw
-opener- was nice, and he carries out some good dvocab through his verses.
-through out- you had good complexity along with your punches and wordplay that stood out, kinda like eklips 's style ( from back in the day!)
sum multies where squezzed in thier. don't force em to much. n your lines where kinda stretched but the flow was consistant so it didn't effect it that much
-closer- your one of those who have a decent closer and ends it on a hitting note and doesn't just leave the verse hanging to be thought about. (inless it's a complex finish)
but your closer was a good word-played punch wit vocab.
in stikinikis verse i saw -
-opener- you wanted to come consistint with punches to be able to take that catagorie, but you needed to add more to your text~ all these " -sdf - ds--dfsd--"
just stetched out your line., dont use them inless you really need 2
i can understand structure and stuff but still it through me off the enjoyment even though i got it clearly.
-middle- you had some basic pnch lines and some layed ones like the happy face. i think your a better text battler then that , use more complexity in your verses and give more base to yourpunches to make them diffrent and more hard hitting by directing them right at em, more personals also
closer- your closer was pretty nice and probably the best of your verse, also some of the middle was good but you closed it well.
but over all i based your votes outa 10
sN= 6/10
S140= 8.5/10
ANNIHILATION
OR
DESTRUCTION
iight thank for the vote uppin for more vote on this please ...........................1
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dont post in herr if u aint gonna vote please .......jezzz....spammin up the thread
Aight since u asked nicely ill vote
V/ Shortay
I liked ur opener it was hot Sticky u got some shit to work on but it wassnt that bad
okay thank u uppin for more votes on this please especially poll votes ........................1x
ill poll later when i get votes mayne sorry if i get banned for this shit but people really should switch over to Bijals site its way too hot to miss u should check it out tha league and everything mad prizes and ahh its fuckin great check it out
If anyone wanna battle something good juss pm me and yo listen to this all tha hot battles are held at http://www.djbijal.com/forum/phpBB2/index.php GO THERE AND ENTER FOR VERBAL BOXING! ITS A LEAGUE FOR ANYONE THAT WANTS TO JOIN THA AUDIO SHIT IS OF THA HOOK!!!! LISTEN EVERYONE THAT WENT IN THIS THREAD SHOULD GO TO
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AND CHECK THA SHIT OUT IT GOT SOME SHIT THAT WILL BLOW UR MIND TRUST ME ON THIS!!!
ILL VOTE LATER!!
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