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    Instant Collab - Introducing INSTANT

    Yeah it might be a bit long... but read on... its dope

    [FormulaMC]
    You Now In Tune With The Few Who Elevate With Ease
    Dope To Dopest, RB Seeing A Family Who's Wait To Eat
    Is Over, You Closer To The Instance Of Upliftment
    N We Gone Make Sure You Remain High By The Time We Finish This
    Mi Casa Gots Lotsa Pop-Ups, With The Fam In Every Quarter
    This Sorta Shit Brings Jesus In A Bottle, N I Ain't Talkin' Purified Water
    Business, Done, Then We Gone, Just Within A Blink Of An Eye
    We Ten Fold Above RB's Dimes, Fuckin' Hoes, If You Think You Should Try
    Then Provide A Little Bit Of Competition, We Got Many To Rip Ya
    N We Know Most Ya'll Quick To Open The Zippers Like MJ When A Kid Wit Him
    That Means We Ain't Never Gone Get Votes, In Contests Of Popularity
    But When We Spit, I Confess, We Create An Instant Of Ill Clarity

    [Timeless]
    In this dope fucking crew we got Lm, Judge, Wog and Highclass
    We Formula MC's who give Lythal Injectionz to kill crews Timeless
    We kill Landmindz 2 blow and impede sight illness, too Corupt Visionz
    We be taking over Voice Of The Streetz, like crazy upped pigionz
    This is a family of mcees who knows, they flow better than coke
    We leave illness with you, coz we surge to ya overdoses of dope
    now we be the kings of crews, while leave ya'll checkmate like pawns
    you'll have ya pride before ya battle INSTANT..AND THEN ITS GONE

    [LethalNJectionz]
    Lethal's reppin' Instant, the dopest crew are RB..
    The whole crew smokes more herbs..
    ..................then Bob Marley..
    Freeman had to leave, but wasnt much of a loss..
    Cause the bitch went to a place..
    ..................where the Focus is Soft..
    K, LM, wogzta, Quelude, Timeless, Lethal, High Class..
    Physik, Formula, Cannabarz..
    ...................all 10 of us can whoop your ass..
    All crews compared to Instant are like kings to pawns..
    Cause bitch its Instant..
    ...................And Then It's Gone..

    [L0st S0ul]
    U better cash out now, instant results come clean & deadly..
    Friendly?? we'll probably end up enemies after you met me..
    Original minds that come from tha heart, were should I start..
    Rude awakenings come from tha shadows, and we are tha dark..
    In need of sumthin sharp, we're tha grindstone to tha knife..
    Nothings completed right, without an instant thought and mind..
    Saving money for time, just to record your voice in rhyme..
    Thoughts are weaknesses to curiousity, how strong am I??
    An instance goes by, you feel your idea fading away on air..
    New ones come to compare, but not like that, they're highly rare..
    Care to examine instant's, we stay on that level for existance..
    Everyone else is in resistance, gravity pulls them resistless..

    [LM]
    We're the hottest new rb crew to come to you
    Instant attackin you...it's Dynasty Soldiers who?
    It's true that I grew from a herb to do what I do
    I've been through hell, pain but I still always ride
    I'm loyal, our personalities attract, never collide
    I'm wide awake, I havn't slept since Harry died
    So I turned the tide, became mentaly stronger
    And now I promise I aint a herb or n00b no longer

    [wogzta]
    If I ever left this crew, they'd all ask 'will he be back'?
    Wogzta, I'm hotter than a chilli kebab
    Believe the words of LM, he's an honest man...
    He might be the only one reppin it, but we're all from the 'promised' land
    So we don't lie when we say we're faster than Sonic amped
    And we shed everlastin light, like a college lamp
    We're the children of rhyme Gods, we're the chosen
    Blockin' all other crews like writer's haemoglobin


    [The Judge]
    Ive felt for this crew..K’s dealt for this crew being the head..
    But we all family..even if I am leader I got my army..
    ……….to take instant ahead..
    I built this roster..from the beginning ive been sitting..
    ……….in presidential..
    the thing that kept me going was the fact that instant..
    ……….is r.b’s crew..with most potential..
    yeah we sick..loyal to the end and down for each other..
    all ready to ride for the reputation..and respect for 1 another..
    so this a msg to my instant soldiers..stay true and ill..
    ……….be true to you..
    and if any1 wants to hate the up and coming then..
    ……….mother FUCK you..

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    dope nice work everyone great collab and many more to come.............................................. nice

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    this shit was ill and time i liked urs best u had sum dope lines

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    Stick to battles... :P...

    LM was best... He actually did a "real OM" in my opinion...

    Nice enough... But... Stick to battles... ...

    Pz...

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    This is long...very long...I don't know how and why I sat through it...this was an average collab...

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    pen you shuda been in on this under............

    "the ghost"

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    thanks everyone, this really was a nice collab. ok uppin for a breakdown of the piece, it will be very appriciated!!!! Peace fam!!!
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    Blockin' all other crews like writer's haemoglobin

    ^hehe, nigger said homo goblin.

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    uppin for some feedback.. lol @ me and timeless have the same last bar.. lol.. great minds think alike.. nice drop guys..

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    You need 2 links of replies or this will get closed, Thanks.

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    Nice shit fam, feeling all verses. . Instant, bitch. . Pz.

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    ^ ok i'll get two links of replies....

    btw, haemoglobin is the substance which makes blood clot... I did NOT say homo goblin LMAO

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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117313

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...63#post1227563

    ^^^ theres the two replies...


    cmon people, some more constructive criticsm...

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    FUCK I DID THIS AND MY COMPUTER CRASHED !!!

    Heres a second break down !!!
    Escuse the spelling!

    [FormulaMC]

    You structure stuffed you up man i really wasnt feelin it. Some of your lines were strached to.
    Having said that your flow was good and i liked this line

    That Means We Ain't Never Gone Get Votes, In Contests Of Popularity
    But When We Spit, I Confess, We Create An Instant Of Ill Clarity


    another few ok lines as well. Overall not bad...

    [Timeless]


    you had good structure and flow man. Some nice metas in there as well...
    But you came a bit simple on some to.. But thats the one bad thing really
    you came pretty good .. props


    [LethalNJectionz]

    The ....... werent working and totaly fucked up your structure. Your flow was ok..
    but i saw no transition between lines... You came simple to with nothing to witty
    or creative... Your best effort was:

    Freeman had to leave, but wasnt much of a loss..
    Cause the bitch went to a place..
    ..................where the Focus is Soft

    ^^ but even that was pretty wack... elevate peace


    [L0st S0ul]

    that was good man. You had the flow and the structure ... and than nice metas...
    You verse was conistant... and yeh nothing really bad to say.. i liked it
    fev line:

    Original minds that come from tha heart, were should I start..
    Rude awakenings come from tha shadows, and we are tha dark..

    good work man...

    [LM]

    I thought you would come better than this. You had good flow and structure but you came to simple.
    You got the point right but just use more vocab and try be more witti.
    Youll see the dramatic improvement.No quotables man .. it was all simple ...

    [wogsta]

    that was pretty nice but your structure let you down. Just try keep all your lines same lenght.
    But i like how you constantly used metas... And you had pretty good flow as well...
    Iv read some of your battles and you came way DOPER than this...
    But anyways this wasnt bad ... Fev line :

    So we don't lie when we say we're faster than Sonic amped
    And we shed everlastin light, like a college lamp

    ^ even though the setup was a bit strached!

    [the Judge]

    Once again i didnt like the .... And i felt you could have come with a bit more creativity...
    I like to see Witty bar.. you were just stating facts.. however your flow was good..
    and yeh iv seen you come better




    I had a better review than this .. but AAAAAAAAA fucken computer

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    ^^^ thanks for the feedback, much apreciated !! uppin for more breakdowns!! pz
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