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    M.Perror Ming
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    Collab: What About Me??

    Collab of M.Perror Ming and TiLLEyEDiE: What About Me??


    Chorus

    I Strive Off Attention.. I'm Getting None What Should I Do
    Theres A Special Somone.. For Everyone You See
    Too Busy With Themselves.. But What About Me?


    TiLLEyEDiE
    I Stay Patiently Waiting To Be Notcied In The Dark Depths
    I'm Invincible.. At Least Invisible............ To The Top Vets
    I Work Harder Than Anyone Should To Get A Strong Rep
    But U Crush It When Seemingly Forget Im Right Here
    Your Never Scared? Dont Be Silly Make Yaself Clear
    Look At Me.. Really Look At Me.. Now Tell Me What You Fear
    Yall Claim To Be Number One...... But What About Me
    I'll Be Remarkable Teach Me.. I'll Be Plain Astounding
    Yall Will Never Forget My Name.. Cuz It Will Be Announced, See?
    Continously Looked Over.. But I Never Been So Real
    Take A Glance. ...... Blantly.. I'm The Boy With Unknown Skills
    Im The Kid In The Future.. Exploiding.. Im Juss Making Deals
    But Please Believe.. I Never Try And Run Im Too Good For That
    Im Spitting Every Day.. Just So I Can Get My Own Back
    From Stack To Stack.. I Push To Got From Whack To High Stats
    You Still Dont Understand? You Weren't Listening You See
    Face It.. Ya Too Busy With Yourselves.. But What About Me?


    Chorus

    I Strive Off Attention.. I'm Getting None What Should I Do
    Theres A Special Somone.. For Everyone You See
    Too Busy With Themselves.. But What About Me?



    M.Perror Ming (~Deluxe-Edition~)

    Please dont forget about me cuz Im still here,yep Im still on this sphere
    But no one hears me or sees me till the mist comes clear
    I try every day to not be ignored and I always perservere, still doesnt work
    Cant take this ignoring anymore so I quit my job and go berserk
    I was a bank clerk then I quit and now I am one of those guys that are shirk
    Everyday flies and no one knows me and no ones opposes me
    Hear people talking and they are talking of me still being here supposably
    Hate this shit, I WANNA BE NOTICED!!!!!!!!!
    IT FEELS LIKE MY WHOLE SOUL IS ROMOTEST!!!!
    Please somebody look at me and talk cuz I cant stand this
    I wish I could go back to the beggining and reminisce
    The attention and interaction is what I most miss
    The people ignore me like I am a dinosuar and I dont exist
    Yup I have skills of rapping but no one can listen to them
    I am having a heart failure please get me some Cardizem
    Please just notice me cuz you will be happy with my talent
    Im more aware of my skills then a guy that is a gallant
    I have more talent then Sylvester Salvant
    Please I beg you, Please I beg you, Please I beg you
    Here I my rhymes that you can view and look through
    Still I am being ignored again and again cant you see?
    I always ask the people of America, "What About Me??"


    Chorus

    I Strive Off Attention.. I'm Getting None What Should I Do
    Theres A Special Somone.. For Everyone You See
    Too Busy With Themselves.. But What About Me?




    Next Year in the City Newspaper....

    "Two boys found dead in a parking lot out side of Pizza Express
    The boys were in raggedy clothes with blood and they were a mess
    Someone said that they always dressed like that and they could careless
    One of the two boys friends said they were going through a lot of stress
    But no one knows what made them stressed and depressed
    We have investigated and found that success is what they obsess we guess
    Also we investigated some more and found slits on their necks
    There was blood everywhere and on one of the boy`s specs
    Later that evening we found they killed them selves because of being ignored
    And they dressed like that because it`s alll they could afford
    Anyone that can find out the whole case will get a hundred dollar reward
    Both of them had the same dynasty ring
    They were knowned by the name of TiLLEyEDiE and M.Perror Ming."

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    dis was a pretty good collab....maybe even better than the azn pride ones, topic was kind of played, but it was still a pretty damn good collab, the imagery was good, nice use of multis, excellent flow, overall 9/10............try out for cryogenix

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    Good collab a lot of deatil from both of you. emotionly very well rounded good concept. you both fit well together with your styles. keep it up...i think you's should do a part 2...very good dope piece
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    This was pretty nice for a collab..Topic isnt completely original but you know everyone has different versions of things...I like how you portrayed the life being at an end in the newspaper article
    Even Angels Wings Turn Black

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    This collab was pretty good! I felt a lot of raw emotion coming from this.......which made the read much better........reminds me of one of my styles its dope.........Lets see if theres one thing i can give advice would be to M.Perror is that some lines were a bit stretched but it was dope none the less you know? Keep up the coo work yo!! Hit me up sometime!

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  8. #8
    M.Perror Ming
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    Yea we will hit you up for a collab sometime. Not sure when though. TiLLEyEDiE and I are collab partners.

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    This was a tight collab, all parties complimenting the other...deep shit, keep it up, i'd like to see more from you...check out this battle for me...

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115177

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