10 lines
blindspit
45 at most
no/crew/hate/dr/
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10 lines
blindspit
45 at most
no/crew/hate/dr/
check in pz
INSANE JOKA LYRICIST
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Sending subliminal messages like under's fronting a cult...
Avatar backward's stating to "IM" him in "Bulc"!/1
Your lucky your even here, monitors preventing my reach
If wakness was censored'your whole verse would be bleeps!/2
This kid's ancient, Key'in up and dealin wit splinters..(wooden keyboard)
Droppin played punches more than a Kinko's printer!/3
Sayin you don't wanna get rusty and u too busy wit school..
And know your more topical? How? ur gettin 4-0'd by Rule!/4
I dont even have to say shit, your own crew laughed at your pic
Half bitch, only reason your mother kept u was to get circus rich
Beaten still with absence of both Bio information and avatars.....
cuz your a herb ...look at the evidence you still number your bars....
Kid wants to get a name for himself get known.... he's just thirsty to rhyme...
but like fools getin played at prom........your just left in the punch line...
Check it i know why you named yourself after a pair of glasses...
cause the shades hide the black eyes i give to you in Masses...
3-0 nice start why step to me and stunt your growth...?...
up against the ropes in a choke....lemme help ya get the beef out ya throat..
prolly came really personal on me.......... cause i got plenty shit to play with.....
your like the last three letters of your name plus the first....you scared little bitch(yelo)
get an avatar nub pz
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Oakley Break down
Sending subliminal messages like under's fronting a cult...
Avatar backward's stating to "IM" him in "Bulc"!/1
Creative but not hard hittning
Your lucky your even here, monitors preventing my reach
If wakness was censored'your whole verse would be bleeps!/2
^ok for a filler
This kid's ancient, Key'in up and dealin wit splinters..(wooden keyboard)
Droppin played punches more than a Kinko's printer!/3
OK pretty good
Sayin you don't wanna get rusty and u too busy wit school..
And know your more topical? How? ur gettin 4-0'd by Rule!/4
Tight
I dont even have to say shit, your own crew laughed at your pic
Half bitch, only reason your mother kept u was to get circus rich
Tight
8/10
Underated Breakdown
Beaten still with absence of both Bio information and avatars.....
cuz your a herb ...look at the evidence you still number your bars....
Tight
Kid wants to get a name for himself get known.... he's just thirsty to rhyme...
but like fools getin played at prom........your just left in the punch line...
no great but ok
Check it i know why you named yourself after a pair of glasses...
cause the shades hide the black eyes i give to you in Masses...
good filler
3-0 nice start why step to me and stunt your growth...?...
up against the ropes in a choke....lemme help ya get the beef out ya throat..
tight
prolly came really personal on me.......... cause i got plenty shit to play with.....
your like the last three letters of your name plus the first....you scared little bitch(yelo) Tight as closer
9/10
Tight battle you both are good some shit that i didnt like was the underrated stucture but liked his punches. Oakley had some creative shit but fillers wernt very good so I am gonna have to give this to under
flow was def. Oakley
but punches were owned by under
closing/opening-under
Under gets my vote
ThA Ce
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113988
vote there^^^
underrated took this on punches, oakly had a better structured verse and a few decent punches but nothing mentionable.. better finisher as well.....
vote: Under
Unexplained vote gone. -Token
Last edited by Token; February 14th, 2004 at 11:12 AM
Def Poets
I second this, no offense, but Under had the best punch lines, but Oakley Ur flo is tight!!Originally Posted by ThA Ce
This was a pretty good battle...
Oakley...you had some strong points to your verse but could have re-worded some things to make them better or more unique good verse though just nt very consistant
Under...good verse a little more consistant with hard punches structure from both was same
Over all Under took this with more creativity and wittiness
Soft Focus
..Returns..
oakleys wackness line was hot.. his flow was pretty decent but not all that consistant, if it was he couldve taken this, underrated had some kool rhymes a few kool disses, even tho oakley had the quote of the match i feel under was more original and creative, with a little bit more consistancy in his verse.. aiming at his opponent a little bit more, vote- under
return an honest vote no hate or beef..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...4&page=1&pp=15
word alright thanx to all those that have voted thus far.....lookin for a couple more poll votes love for all the new to rB's though....................pz
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aiight the only things oakley had in this battle was structure and flow besides that he was missing the major thing u need in order to win a battle which is punches and personals, theunderrated came a lot harder with his shyt so he gets mah vote
vote=theunderrated...sorry i cant poll
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113661
This was a tight battle but I must slide this to Under...why?
punchlines: he had sum great punches with a gud wordplay and they just came harder than Oakley's punches
personals/ Under had sum nice personals while Oakley din't had so much and Under were jsut betta cuz of the wordplay and the originality of the personals
flow: Oakley had a nice flow with sum variation but also did Under, you both were gud on this part
structure: Oakley had a betta structure I thought cuz I just felt that his verse was more easy to read and it just workt out gud
Overall vote: The Underrated (but close)
Hit this back thx: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113596
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sorry underated....but this was botherin me....
uppin
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