10 lines
i set up
you spit first
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Born To Kill
menolin
10 lines
i set up
you spit first
usual rules
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Here's tha truth: ya ugly and you called out, I answered, you lose...
But Menolin, ya can't face tha facts, cuz the facts won't face you.
No profile on Menolin, must be embarrassed that he even exists...
The only bitch who could work a kissing booth, and not get kissed.
Cuz let me be Frank, and say ya suck through and through...
And while I'm at it, Bill, Joe, & Ted...wanna rip on you too!
Cuz ya gotta huge head and no brain, in tha dark bout being a fool...
So when I pulled his head out tha sand, his parents built a pool.
It's why they love the family dog better, hardly ever tell it no...
But they don't love it like a child, Menolin set that bar too low.
a load of sex life punches... off BTK is now what i expect...
projecting through punches...
.........everything in his life... which he never gets...
try your luck against me.. i'll leave your luck with dice,
more chance winning...
......than rolling with a snake eyes with one die...
all in know about you is you been on RB forever,
an rocked that same avy..
so much, that on my comp its becoming weathered,
my motto.... bring in the new, get rid of the old,
you once brought the heat, now im ridding of the cold,
if i lose, it will be like judge judy losing her baby..
a mis-carage of justise..
but never mind BTK.. a miricle might happen.. maybe?
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nice verse BTK, maybe this time i may of won you!!
drop an honest vote, an a link,
an at least one of us will hit ur battle up!!
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I cant vote officially ( not enough posts) but here is what I thought anyways:
First off I would like to say that I have seen better from both, not that great of a battle, but still good. Good flow and structure from both. Basic vocab and also a few personals from each, didn't seem to hit that hard though. Creativity also wasn't one of the battles strengths. The Punches also seemed a little sub-par for these guys, but in my mind I would have to say that B2K's just seemed to hit a little bit harder with his. Menolin's just came a little flatter with his. I felt his punches could of hit harder. Close battle
but I would have to say that B2K edged him out, just barely though.
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BTK:
punches were nice, flow was awesome, personals were good, vocab was there, structure was very good, consistence was nice, overall = very nice verse..
Best Lines:
No profile on Menolin, must be embarrassed that he even exists...
The only bitch who could work a kissing booth, and not get kissed.
^lol
Men:
punches were ok, flow was eh, personals were ok, vocab was there, structure was good, consistence was good, overall = nice verse..
Best Lines:
try your luck against me.. i'll leave your luck with dice,
more chance winning...
......than rolling with a snake eyes with one die...
^lol
BTK gets this because he came harder nice job by both cats, ill reply later with a link for menolin to hit up, BTK already did..
Vote - Born To Kill
wouldnt let me edit:
heres the link for MENOLIN to return the favor, PLEASE VOTE 2-3 him:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111358
Dope Battle, It Was A Good Read
B2k- Nice Verse You Came Hard As Usual, NIce Structure And Flow. Most OF Your Punches Hit, And You Had Some Good Personals. Nice Verse, Keep It Up B2K
Menolin- Nice Verse Too, You Came Hard Aswell. Structure Was Nice Too, The "New" Kind, And Your Flow Was Decent. Your Punches Connected Too, With Ok Personals.
Punches- B2k
Flow- B2k
Structure- Menolin
Vocab- B2k
Creativitiy- B2k
Personals- B2k
Overall B2k
Nice Battle, Keep It Up Both Of you
Hit This UP
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113017
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1st Uppin...
Drop the votes...
We'll return favors and shit.
You know the score.
Peace...
Here's tha truth: ya ugly and you called out, I answered, you lose...
But Menolin, ya can't face tha facts, cuz the facts won't face you.
^heheh this is old school but i like it......
No profile on Menolin, must be embarrassed that he even exists...
The only bitch who could work a kissing booth, and not get kissed.
^eheh this is an Ok punch....
Cuz let me be Frank, and say ya suck through and through...
And while I'm at it, Bill, Joe, & Ted...wanna rip on you too!
^this is just like....ionno i wasn't feeling this line...
Cuz ya gotta huge head and no brain, in tha dark bout being a fool...
So when I pulled his head out tha sand, his parents built a pool.
^Lmao...nice punch good line
It's why they love the family dog better, hardly ever tell it no...
But they don't love it like a child, Menolin set that bar too low.
^this was an Ok closer.....not as much heat as normal but good overall...
a load of sex life punches... off BTK is now what i expect...
projecting through punches...
.........everything in his life... which he never gets...
^this was good wordplay nice punch...
try your luck against me.. i'll leave your luck with dice,
more chance winning...
......than rolling with a snake eyes with one die...
^creative a good punch......
all in know about you is you been on RB forever,
an rocked that same avy..
so much, that on my comp its becoming weathered,
^this is a good punch too creative.......
my motto.... bring in the new, get rid of the old,
you once brought the heat, now im ridding of the cold,
^hmmmm filler sorry bra.......
if i lose, it will be like judge judy losing her baby..
a mis-carage of justise..
but never mind BTK.. a miricle might happen.. maybe?
^this was a really creative verse kind of abstract but overall i liked it......
I think B2k takes this one beacause he had more constitent punches it was close though nice drop by double 0......pz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112739
^word this is the most slept on battle plz help
INSANE JOKA LYRICIST
BTK takes this.. His flow stayed consistent and didn't really fall off at any point. While Menolins flow was all over the place. You need to work on re wording your lines to where they meet their full affect. BtK.. you're still elevating man but you'll get there because I know you can come harder than this. But still you took it with a few witty concepts while Menolin had forced wordplay. Nothing is worse than forced flow and wit/wordplay.
V/ Born To Kill
Born To Kill
Here's tha truth: ya ugly and you called out, I answered, you lose...
But Menolin, ya can't face tha facts, cuz the facts won't face you.
multi's,wordplay = 6
No profile on Menolin, must be embarrassed that he even exists...
The only bitch who could work a kissing booth, and not get kissed.
personal,punch,metiphore = 4
Cuz let me be Frank, and say ya suck through and through...
And while I'm at it, Bill, Joe, & Ted...wanna rip on you too!
metiphore = 3
Cuz ya gotta huge head and no brain, in tha dark bout being a fool...
So when I pulled his head out tha sand, his parents built a pool.
metiphore,punch = 5
It's why they love the family dog better, hardly ever tell it no...
But they don't love it like a child, Menolin set that bar too low.
punch = 5
Not too good, seemed like you had writer's block here, things got worste as you went on. The pool metiphore was pretty funny, but all in all this was a very sub-par verse.
Overall = 23
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Menolin
a load of sex life punches... off BTK is now what i expect...
projecting through punches...
.........everything in his life... which he never gets...
wordplay,punch = 8
try your luck against me.. i'll leave your luck with dice,
more chance winning...
......than rolling with a snake eyes with one die...
-flo,metiphore,self hype = 3
all in know about you is you been on RB forever,
an rocked that same avy..
so much, that on my comp its becoming weathered,
personal,metiphore = 7
my motto.... bring in the new, get rid of the old,
you once brought the heat, now im ridding of the cold,
filler = 3
if i lose, it will be like judge judy losing her baby..
a mis-carage of justise..
but never mind BTK.. a miricle might happen.. maybe?
wordplay,metiphore,punch = 7
[color=blue]You had the best line of the battle and the worste line's of the battle. However you did open an close your verse well, just inbetween was iffy. This was a decent verse tho, consistency is what lacked here.
Overall = 28
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Vote = Menolin
drop an honest vote here please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...19#post1172519
man, this battle was close, both of ya'll came weaker than i am used to seeing but BTK was more consistent throughout his whole verse...like token said, 007, your flow was choppy in some spots and others it was perfect, just work on keeping it the same throughout...BTK, your flow was nice throughout, some of your punches were kinda weak but you still dropped okay...overall i'd have to say that BTK took this battle although it was very close, nice drops by both of you though.....please hit the battle in my sig with an honest vote.
i cant see how i lost this battle,
but the voters get the final say
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first off i wanna say good verse both of ya'll i liked ya shit...heres my breakdown...
Flow=Born
Metas=Tie
Punches=menolin
Vocab=born
Structure=born
Creativity=tie
personals=born
overall=born
hot shit no doubt but i think born to kill got this one.....But yo Born To Kill or Menolin if you want a Real Battle Holla At Me!!!!!....and i'll show you kats how its done....
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