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blind spits
drop 1 hour after we both check in
who gives a fuck who votes...as long as it's fair
checkin in......
10-12 lines
blind spits
drop 1 hour after we both check in
who gives a fuck who votes...as long as it's fair
checkin in......
Ok Checkin In...........................................
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-An Original RB Member: Yes, We're That Much Doper Than You-
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Makin ya eyes black...You are white kid, get that through ur head
Fuck Axioms sig...
...You should be the representative for white Wonder Bread!
Wait a second, you can check second into a battle...but aren't you timeless
Contradictin ya own names...why don't you just call urslef Mindless
In my signature it states that if u PM for votes, then you'll get fucked
So then why do it and say i should have no beef...but aren't you a duck?*
This battle like the tortoise vs the hare...either one u r, ur just too slow
Yea ya timeless...
...Cuz you don't realize your winning streak is going to go!
But now I wonder why your timeless? suicidal thoughts makin u cry?
Don't worry...
...I'll toss ya out a window so you can discover how time can fly
Your record is 5-0, no wonder u gots no cents, so ya mind obsolete
You tryin to diss me like g-unit...but in the end...i'm "Cass-in- Di-Feat" **
* - People ducking, a duck is close to beef, ya get it?
** - In the new g-unit mixtape...they diss Cassidy. And his name is pronounced "Ka-sih-di"
ya seemed to need to battle me, ya tryed to get it set up in here pronto
ya give the image your hard on this site,but your from eva gangster toronto
a canadian on a rap site, wahts that? ya should get your shit and leave
ohh and T the only time you should wrap, is birthdays or christmas eve (lol)
theres no way you can twest me, even if ya had nas as your manager
and the only way i'm "C.N" you big, is on top of the CN tower in canada
i thought, i ought, to spit this shit i wrote, to see ya damm distraught
and the only way you'll ever beat me battlin, is when saddam is caught
ya nothing at 15 years old, and ya didnt know coke ment white lines
how many people have 2 tell ya 2 stop battlin,even your girlfriend is giving u signs
thats it another win added to me, now maybe i can get some respect
so t-west before ya think about battlin me again elevate and reflect
all votes have to be fully explained or i will report them. this is an important battle!!
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-An Original RB Member: Yes, We're That Much Doper Than You-
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LMAO..saddam is caught moron...havent u seen the news? anywayz..both had good drops..Timeless had some nice shit with alot of exceptions..especially that damn sadam line lol..you basically admitted defeat..and one canadian line is enough..when you diss origin to much you start being gay..T west won this with his more witty punches and shit..also timeless do not put links in ur battle that shit is played...so vote
v/t-west
Always Impervious an Axis Power.
Supermod Me.
Its Ment To Say And The Only Way Ill Beat You Is When Saddam Is Caught (lol) Made A Mistake. Uppin
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-An Original RB Member: Yes, We're That Much Doper Than You-
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uppin............................will return the favour!!!!
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-An Original RB Member: Yes, We're That Much Doper Than You-
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im gonna say timeless got this
flow time less
punches timeless it was very close
structure timeless
both need to work on vocab
t west needs to work on personals
some of t west lines were played
the duck and g unit line were corny as fuck
the gf line was prib the best
lmao...saddam being caugt...well..even with the correction
i think twest wins
his punches were cooler and i liked how
it was flowing
timeless is cool too but not cool enough..
i cant poll...sorry
uppin for more votes...............................
Ight Here It Goes
Punches:timeless....
Flow:timeless...
Structure:it Was A Tie.....
Personals:t West
Timeless Got This Cus In My Opinion He Had A Little Better Punches And Flow Than T West But Not By Much...
T West Had The Personals..timeless U Need To Work On Ya Personals And Structure
But....vote:timeless
Good Battle Tho
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Token
t west - i was feelin yo structure........flow fell off a lil, but caught back on towards the end.........vocab was good.......multis were nice.......some of the metas were tight.........good wordplay..........i was feelin most of ya punches.......nice personals.......
timeless - good structure.......flow was on target........vocab was nice........multis were pretty good.......ok metas.........wordplay was good at times........some of punches were tight........ok personals.....
breakdown -
structure - tie
flow - timeless
vocab - tie
multis - t west
metas - tie
wordplay - timeless
punches - t west
personals - t west
conclusion - t west takes it in multis, punches, and personals, so he gets my vote
VOTE - T WEST
yo since i took the time to leave my honest opinion id appreciate if u two did the same.......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112786
thanx.......
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iight...
This was close...
Ive read both twice... And really it is damn close...
T-West... Structure was ok... Flow was ok, but off in come places... Your punches were quite good... Some of the name personals didnt hit that hard... Worded badly methinks... Youve elevated quite alot from when a first saw you battle... Keep it up man... Pz...
Timeless... Structure was ok... Jus a regular thing... Flow was pretty decent... Your punches hit quite hard really... Your personals about Canada are played... But you had a decent flip on them... Your shit made me laugh quite a few times...
So...
The funnyness edged it after a close battle...
v/ Timeless
Pz...
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uppin............................................. .....thankx for the votes
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-An Original RB Member: Yes, We're That Much Doper Than You-
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Twest- Nice Verse, You Stayed On Topic, And you kept Throwing Punches Lines At His Name, You Flowed Tyte, And You Had Good Structure. Nice Verse.. Best Line:
Timeless- You Can Nice Too, Surprised Me..You Had Nice Personals, And Your Punches Were Connecting Not To Hard. Ok Flow, And your Structure Was Decent. Nice Verse..Best Line:Originally Posted by T West
Punches- TwestOriginally Posted by Timeless
Flow- Twest
Vocab- Tie
Multies- None Really
Structure- Tie
Vote- T West
Close Battle, Hit Mine Up Please Everyone
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113017
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