UrbanReelist vs Veloci-Rapper

[Brother Blue Collar]

Ten lines Max.
No Dickrydin or Bullshit Plz
I'll be droppin 2morrow it's 2 damn late

[Brother Blue Collar]

I'm checkin in and droppin in ten minutes so good luck to Veloci-Rapper

[Brother Blue Collar]

I peeped ya only textstyle that shit was sloppy to me,and you couldn't be ill with madness if you had sex wit bobby lee and caught a std and like a diamond deuce i always beat an ace of spades cuz i command mics wit a "fury" like marvel comics and agent nick must be talkin to nuts or pagin dicks thinkin you could beat me ya prolly yellow like an asian bitch ya just like my former lover who neva took showers ya extinct (ex stink) and i'm neva shook when it comes ta droppin so i won't no show ya like a clumsy pornstar your the only ones ta drop the ball and choke like kevon dyson when he was wit mcnair and'em so just lay down and die son ya prolly could come up with sum hot shit if ya lied down in it during july and quit if ya rap just bite from sumone and you couldn't finish (finnish) me off you came finland and hand me a "dutch" i'm dun 1


GL and i'm waiting

[Ace of Aces]

Check it...

This battles like a horror movie, y'all are guessin' whos the killer
Well forget the suspense, cuz even this kat knows that I'm Iller
Your like a 3 year old coloring outside the lines with wut you're sketchin'
I would tell everyone that ur dope, but that'd only be an "Urban" Legend

Switch...

It amazes me to know how you actually think that you have a chance in this thing
Reminds me of that asian guy on American idol who thot he culd dance and sing
Face it son, you're a lost cause striving for nothin
You're a detonator and I'm here holding the button
So guess what, your time is up, go bid farewell to your friends
On second thought its over, The Buttons pressed--Ur life ends

g'luck. sum freestyle.

pz

[Ace of Aces]

nice drop. and thanx for the compliment on my OM urban.
nice battle we got here. uppin this...
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[Ace of Aces]

don't slp plz. even tho we're fresh on this. shuld be a real easy
read. so uppin this. vote plz..
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[Ace of Aces]

cmon peepz. vote plz.
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[Ace of Aces]

dammit. lol...................voooooooote kidz....................
..................just cuz we can't.....
...it doesn't mean that you shuld...
i'll gladly hit urs up wen i can.........pz

[Poppa Bean]

urban i didnt like your verse it all,

the flow was off and the punches were pretty wack
nothing impressive it was kinda sad

veloci-rapper your shit was decent, not that great but better at least

the americon idol line was funny, prolly the best in the battle

vote- veloci

[Ace of Aces]

thanks, its funny how I keep posting to get votes, and when this thread
finally gets one, its not polled. lol. great.

pz.

[Ace of Aces]

uppin for some polled votes. i'll be able
to vote soon, so hit this up and i'll glady
vote fairly on ur battles in return.
thanx.
pz

[Brother Blue Collar]

Shit uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin shit if i have say uppin one more fuckin time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Brother Blue Collar]

prolly be uping this shit for life for the rest of my life dumbs sleepin bitchs

[Ace of Aces]

damn no votes yet. so sad. haha. i will return a fair vote to your battle

[Born To Kill]

Decent battle...

Good shit from Ace.

Definately enough to win.
(the opener was really,really nice)

Kinda went south from there, you never matched the fire of the first 2 lines...

But you didn't throw anything whack...

Steady attack with wordplay, the personal on the name...nothing great, but the jab was always there.

Flow was there.

Urban, on the other hand...

Used a format that guarantees killing flow.

What's wrong with regular lines, man?

Some good metas (fury, and asain bitch)...

But that was it, man.

His attempt at wordplay (extinct/ex-stink) was horrible...
Basically dissed yaself saying you were fucking a non bathing skank.

Overall, way too much filler, and punches that really missed.

Peace