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verses due on friday, at 12 am eastern time.
check in by wednesday
agree on line amount.
read LLL rules. good luck .
10 Lines..
- I Put on for my city thats a motha`fuckin fact -
yeah
Artificial Intelligence.
I need an extension feebs.. personal shit
I'll spit tomorrow for sure tho
Artificial Intelligence.
Lesson 1: Crushing Ur Opps, Confidence
calm down Thug whyte be calm and steady,
& It Doesn't help his nerves, ^That I beat him already!
Aus hittin shit hard it must be a ramp
His weights the 'Talk of the town' ina fuckin detention Camp
Auspic + writing + battling= Total Disaster,
He'd step his game up but he broke his stair master
... originilaties the one thing he's still searchin to find,
creavtily is pool of imagination & Aus drownd in the depth of his mind.
Its pure skill I don't need luck to have his lady spread.
Ayo Aus
& ur lady's luck wasn't just smiling on me, she gave me head
- I Put on for my city thats a motha`fuckin fact -
Lesson 2: lesson 1 sux
Horud Skys spit? naw, but at least he can bitch..
He was in orgin ill..
til they realized he wasn't the right species of sick..
Imagin this, stick to freeposting cuz rappins not smart..
He believes his Sig?..
herb, lemme serve 2 words.. "Sarcastic Remarks"..
^He'll take that to heart, so im stoppin his fame..
droppin him gay..
Yeah, he had this win..............On opposite day..
This aint dance class, but he's watchin wat steps hes makin
Ill? dude ya own crew leader said..
Just grope n' bitch, but notice this, ya hope is shitOriginally posted by Feeble Minded
Horud Skys is respected by many a veterans but never seems to live up to his
reputation.
He got this win locked..
but realized he lost the key to open it..
blah
Artificial Intelligence.
Vote: Aus...
better all around verse... the sig line got it... then the feeb line backed it up...
Horud you've been seemin to not care lately... I don't know what it is... but... My op...
Tag'D
Legend: Merk Squad
That 'feeble line' was actually said by me, feebs just posted it
I know Horuds been hav'n sum family issues and he broke his hand so its excusable
but he didn't come hard at all
Aus had an overall better verse, even though he used an opposite day line
the sig line was nice
Vote - Aus
Merk Squad...The Roster you weren't on
Diamond Minds...The Roster you're not on
LLL HW Champion...Been dope since forever
Vote - Aus
Better Rounded Verse. Punches Hit Harder. In Horuds Verse, You Could See The Concept For A Dope Punch, But Then Never Really Connected All That Well.
Auspicious fucked this up pretty good...
Much better wordplay...
And even a recycled line from me (opposite day)!
The personals were much too hard and on mark.
The "sarcastic" and the Feeble quote killed this...
I liked Horud's opener, but, really it was kinda all alone as far as dopeness.
"Stairmaster" was eh..."Drowned" was a bit of a played concept.
All around better and more impactful...
Aus
Peace
who wants to battle ma I will murder each one of you.
Dont post in LLL again herbie.
-Trapt
Last edited by Chrit.; February 8th, 2004 at 03:39 PM
Auspicious takes this. Feeble line was dope. Sig line wasn't bad. Opposite day line sucked.
... originilaties the one thing he's still searchin to find,
creavtily is pool of imagination & Aus drownd in the depth of his mind.
This was rather decent.
V/Auspicious
Do you pronounce your name Au-Spi-Shus? Or Au-Spick-You-Us?
Just wondering.
Au Spi Shus
Artificial Intelligence.
aush wins, yo.
horud .. < well that says it all .
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