rules:
10 lines
all normal house rules
no bitin
no dickridin
no hate votes
no feedin........yall know em, and if ya dont find out
GL
M.C. SHADOW 13
HYPER-ACTYVE
rules:
10 lines
all normal house rules
no bitin
no dickridin
no hate votes
no feedin........yall know em, and if ya dont find out
k son ive bin waitin for a wile and here i thought this nigga wass mild/
u call yo sellf hypa activ thats only cause u wak it/ insted of ass
tappen this nigga deal aint eva goona happen/ this guy shood
quit rappen and stay in school and keep lian about breakin tha rules/
dont stall cause we all know u pussy and all last i heard he went to
a womens ball/ this fu challenged me to battle a g and it seems
he disapoints me/ this fuck aint no thug matafact this guy neva shot a
slug/ if i went to ya crib i proabliy see him melisting kids/ ile pop u
like a womens cherry while u still think vagina is scary/ u cant hack
it, this guy is a flamin fagit/ ive bin here longer than u and u consider
yo self a lyrisist 2/ if u see a gun i know u will start to run even if
it was a fake one/ i am tha betta one and i considea this fun
ile beat u and eat u like a kuki krum u should consida frontin to be
a Ganasta one and please what art work has bin done (at the bottom
of his post it says art by: HYPER-ACTIVE)
aight checkin in, sorry for being late, had sme issues at the house, but ill spit when i get home from school, peace
everyone can tell this dudes a herb, from the way he walks in this battle, thinking hes good/
u can't spit close to me, the only thing uv done right here, is wishin u could/
this dude had to state he raps 4 times, just to even try and convince/(its in his profile)
but u aint convince me, cause ya verse aint make no fuckin since/(u still a herb)
right now, im hyper, ready to shoot and kill like a snyper,............ur my 13th victim shadow
got 12 down, and 1 to go..............u should have pulled a no show/(wut were u thinkin)
do you even know when an Mcs ILL?...its when one spits wut he feels is real/
and let me tell u.....u aint got that, cause ur wut an mc kills/
So in conclusion.....imma slice and dice this MC virgin, like imma MC surgeon/
i made this shit disterbin, causeing you to have nightmares after my verse is in/
yo can we get some votes up in this peice////////////////////////////
yo man uppin fo some votes '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''' ''''''''''''''
yo hypa active put some uppins fo some votes11111111111111111111111111111
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hyper active have this for some reasons: he was better and respected apparently the rules (no 20 lines)
he had some good punches and they were pretty hard (not really, but much better than the others cat)
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
comn v lets get somo votes///////////////////////////
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uppin ////////////////////////////////////////////////////
uppin fo votes/////////////////////////////////////////////////
mc wins with out a shawdow of a doubt
hyper keep elevatin
breakdown
punches tie
flow mc
meta mc
structure tie
vocabulary mc
over all my vote is for mc
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Token
Ja'e Roc Entertainment 2004
uve gotta be shittin me Ja'e, i have no idea where half of u kats come from, cause ur bitch ass dont know how to vote, but wuteva, uppin(1)
yo i should go ask for u to be dq'd cause u uppined six times, but i aint..............oh yeah uppin(2)
punches ha: right now, im hyper, ready to shoot and kill like a snyper,............ur my 13th victim shadow /
got 12 down, and 1 to go..............u should have pulled a no show/(wut were u thinkin )
metas ha: do you even know when an Mcs ILL?...its when one spits wut he feels is real/
and let me tell u.....u aint got that, cause ur wut an mc kills/ (kinda)
flow: mc his bars wasnt as stretched
multies So in conclusion.....imma slice and dice this MC virgin, like imma MC surgeon/
i made this shit disterbin, causeing you to have nightmares after my verse is in/
overall i gotta go with hyper
both vote on this please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110386
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