aight ~10 lines~
you spit first
~letz~ do this
set-ignorance
Chugs4Life
aight ~10 lines~
you spit first
~letz~ do this
Bitches like you come soft, like piss paddles made with cloth
my explosive style could rip ya head off with critical intention
punk your delerious to even think 'Chugs4life' is a name worth to mention
feel the tention when its just me upon you, watching my words stick like glue
crazy ass bitch screaming "what the fuck am i gunna do, this is it im done for"
forget my fuckin battle records, thats just a miss-calculated batlle score
i'm raw like meat with a bacteria.....
watch me defeat this little bitch like he didn't even have a criteria...
you lack charisma, your better off being a cross dresser...
follow the footsteps of 'Boy george' better yet 'Garry glitter'
"Blood 4 Lyf"... "S'happenin mah dawg? .. Got nuttin but love 4 you.."
***Battle**** I fucked this up, hold up................................................ .................................................. ...........................................
"Blood 4 Lyf"... "S'happenin mah dawg? .. Got nuttin but love 4 you.."
Bitches like you come soft, like piss paddles made with cloth
my explosive style could rip ya head off with critical intention
punk your delerious to even think 'Chugs4life' is a name worth to mention
feel the tention when its just me upon you, watching my words stick like glue
crazy ass bitch screaming "what the fuck am i gunna do, this is it im done for"
forget my fuckin battle records, thats just a miss-calculated batlle score
i'm raw like meat with a bacteria.....
watch me defeat this little bitch like he didn't even have a criteria...
you lack charisma, your better off being a cross dresser...
follow the footsteps of 'Boy george' better yet 'Garry glitter'
"Blood 4 Lyf"... "S'happenin mah dawg? .. Got nuttin but love 4 you.."
Man i fucked this up, completely fuck it i'll leave as it is
Peace
"Blood 4 Lyf"... "S'happenin mah dawg? .. Got nuttin but love 4 you.."
here it goes,
when i'm done u'll SQUEAK~like~a~MOUSE, ur so borin u didnt even kick~ya~spit & I'm already DEEP~ASLEEP~on~the~COUCH
Define me as "OVERSEASONED" for the REASON that~I~ "slap the taste out ur MOUTH
"Crunch" mcs like CEREAL, these are CAESER~RHYMES cos i'm highly IMPERIAL Recordin u fuck ur mom on LEISURE~TIME is ur only raw MATERIAL
TORCH ya up slowly like the dynamite's FUSE, BEFORE I "explode" & my words let LOOSE
I'll "take ya out," with verbal ABUSE, "twisted & CONFUSED" like unwinded SCREWS
I "RAP~so~FAST" so when my lyrics DASH~PAST they leave ya sizzling like melting GLASS
AT~LAST i'll STAMP~on~ur~ASS cos i'm known to SMASH
I FEAR~NONE, "hold ya fate" cos i'm flowing like RUM
DROP~this~QUEER~ONE only with text but it's still forceful enough to POP~ur~EARDRUMS
set ignorance - wack structure.......flow was hard to catch on to.........vocab was ok..........some of the multis were ok...........wordplay was basic.........some of the punches hit pretty hard........no good personals........
chugs4life - ok structure........flow fell off a lil.........vocab was ok.........multis were tight as hell.........wordplay was ill...........punches hit hard............ok personals.......
conclusion - chugs takes this in multis, wordplay, and punches so he gets my vote......
VOTE - CHUGS4LIFE
yo since i took the time to leave my honest feedback id appreciate if u two did the same.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110019
thanx........
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Yo, at least you were honest, it was whack... Peace
"Blood 4 Lyf"... "S'happenin mah dawg? .. Got nuttin but love 4 you.."
uppin1..................................... letz get some votes
uppin2............................................ ...........
uppin3............................... c mon letz get some votes on dis battle
uppin4............................................ .................... need dem votez
uppin for the last time another slept on battle....................
flow-goes to set-ignorance I liked it.
punches-chugs. Your structure is cool to me. i shouldn't be giving advice.
word use-Chugs
good battle I give my vote to Chugs4Life.
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