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MCBeats
Se7eN
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u spit first
no hate, d/r, crew, or bullshit votes
No checking in u already did so drop the spit here
At the spur of the moment I'll merk you, then mark it down as a planned-kill
So you can hit me back, grab your rosery beads and pray for a standstill
Sure you expect to win, but I'mma disregard everything that you knew son
Opinions are like assholes, everybody's got em... and I'll rip you a new one
Only 10% of your brain is used for thinkin, that's one-tenth that's sick of me
The other ninth-tenths? Well fuck, you better use that to wish ya way to victory
Cause I attack bastards with tactics that leave rappers cadavers and ashes
Your flows are like butterknives, mine cut through like daggers when slashin
Rip Se7en with fine raps composed of the intellect which his mind lacks
Takin out McBeatz? More like fold under pressure, listen as his spine cracks
U and ur hole crew never blew, so I guess I should come armed with dynamite and wick to help
Look at his name, homie trying to be me so much I might as well diss myself
I came first, try to flip it, claim otherwise, but tell me... Who you tryin to lie to?
C'mon now Se7en, don't act dumb, I could slit my throat and you'd prolly die too
Copperfield or Merlin? Doesn't matter, his illusions caused you to fear his raps
But after his last losin battles, we'll all see this Se7ens new disappearin act
ayt i think this is 16 lines but it will do now u spit
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This guy can’t “flip the script” , God forgot to give him a gift
So only talent, he has is countin’ how many times he gets ripped
So my spits stick like a virus, so he can’t disect or try to imply this
Life isn’t “a box of chocolate”, you have no skills, so don’t try this
Trying this is like death, if the coast you living on is in the west
Cause my words inscript, have you hit till you have no Ego left
MC beats, sounds like a name that is fresh from the streets
Your unique, cause this bitch is backwards like you “soe wat you reap”
Please, freeze all thoughts, with all the bullshit that this guy caught
He could be a walking, talking Bill Clinton that somebody brought
So no fillers, juss punches for you, hear my scream and roar too
Have you feeling sore in the ass, more than the fucking motha that bore you
You think after you took a drink, that your skills would finally sink
I spit one line, in one rhyme your ass was exploded and gone in a blink
Wink and be intelligent, My shit is always repelled and sent
His real name has to 1/4 a dollar, cause his skills fell of a few cent
uppin times one and MC beat u can only up 5 times
UPPIN x1 please VOTE PEOPLE PLEASE VOTE pz out VOTE!!!!!!!
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come on and vote people please don't sleep on this battle
Uppin' x3
ayt uppin this battle dawgs drop ur opinions at once i get 100 posts il vote on urs so drop ur links
yall want a vote well here's one....
!!!WORK ON STRUCTURE BOTH OF YOU!!!
ok da run down
opener: Se7en... both was ok, but se7en's flowed better.. and a lil easier to read
closer: Beats... Seems like se7en fell off twords da end
punches: both.. both had some real good punches.. and some real lame ones.... bothe kinda fell off at parts.
structure: Se7en... much easier to read than beats..
Overall it wasn't too bad.. just try to keep da intensity goin through da whole verse.. both...
Vote: Se7en
for better punches and structure
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Da blakest nigga dis side of da moon.
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Get Aktive Nigga...
-blakout-
uppin numero 2**************************************
This was actually a pretty close battle, MC beats opened strong but his flow started dying off, Se7ens was overall a lot more consistent with what i felt were better punches. vote: Se7en
Hey guys please drop a vote on this battle, this kid talks a lot of smack:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110243
"I'm posessed by Hip Hop's delivering spirit, and i fear it cuz my head is constantly scribbling lyrics"
-Benefit
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Ok, Here's the Breakdown:
McBeats - I see a lot of potential here... witty wordplay, decent punches, only thing you lacked was ill personals. The set up of your punches could be better.. but hey, the verse was an enjoyable read and you showed a lot of skill. nice drop props
Se7en - some potential here too, but still in need of development. You have the right ideas, just have to carry them through with more thought and punch harder. Some of your stuff was too basic, but it was nevertheless a decent read. You can see your inexperience but still not too bad
the vote goes to McBeats for better punches, wordplay and all around better verse
yall hit this up w/an honest vote, gettin mad slept on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110264
flow/structure-
goes to 7, mc had multis unlike 7 but his lines were stretched out the asshole fucking everything up, 7's lines were much less stretched and easier to follow
punches/personals-
goes to mc, neither of them had any decent personals, but mc had better punches than 7 so he gets this element
wordplay/creativity-
both need to work on this.....
opener/closer-
goes 2 mc... seven's opener and closer are pretty lame, mc's were decent so he gets this element as well
overall vote-
McBeats, even though his lines were stretched out the asshole, his content was better than sevens...
plz hit up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110000 and vote honestly
wat happened to the vote I had, wtf.........................Uppin x5 PLEASE VOTE PLEASE VOTE>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>VOTE
aight fellas....heres tha rundown
se7en - ya lines were never that hardhittin' and the punches didn't really hit.......flow was nice and sum multis used.........metas were coo..........sum nice personals used but not with great effect.......sum descent wordplay.......verse was ok but lak'd punches
MC Beats - punches hit a lot harder and finisha was mad tight......u played with ya words n shit and ya had sum nice metas..............sum gd multis used.......flow was cool...............but, overall, punches hit a lot harder
MC Beats wins this with better punches............
was a fairly close battle on other concepts but beats wins with better punches......
vote = MC Beats
vote on ma battle with skandalz fairly plz.........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110097
peace
JAY FIORZ
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