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Rules:
Check in and agree on line amount
Regular League Rules apply
Verses are due Friday 12:00pm CT
Must have post 3 links to votes in your check-in post
For ever link you are missing you get docked a vote
Matches will be closed Sunday night.
Last edited by Allen McGregor; January 28th, 2004 at 09:44 AM
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actually rules say 20 max . read them
right...
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Artificial Intelligence.
T- minus... 10...
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Rape...
merk, wits, Av's a biter, name change.. gay words n stuff,
blurt, bitch, Aus is tighter.., should sum ya lame verse up...
but look, you're wack... that's all... n fuck it I won't persist,
Av'll make you cry ya i's out till Ausp_c_ous no longer exists...
duke you're feminine... but look a here he fought to no avail,
only problem is... while doin so... bitch slipped n broke a nail...
and you're fuckin garbage kid... it's sad n' suicide time,
cus the first time he made the cut...... he left a note behind...
while I'm at it you should fear... bullets'll fly through this queer,
n' fuck Hershey drinks... cause faggot it'll be YooHoo dies here...
and it's an illusion... you will win this bout with lines... played,
if the decisions mine I choose grave, now jump to conclusions...
you did have skills... fuck it... really... I aint even hatin man,
but there's enough dust on ya ass... to create the human race again...
bitches aren't prone to battle... please Verb'll rattle with steel,
cause pumps came with my shotty... your's included high heels...
and right now all triple L battlers should listen,
Auspicious proves you don't need comp... to hold a competition...
I only mention audios now... didn't really wanna diss em,
but one question... it take long to change ya studio,
back to the kitchen..?
VOTE: Thug Whyte...
Verbal for PRESIDENT...
(watch him turn something I said in this thread into a punch... LMAO... comedy...)
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who wants to kick me.......- Villin
Last edited by Richard Parker; January 27th, 2004 at 10:13 AM
scrolls for 2-3 minutes.. finds verse.. takes another 5 to see him vote for me.. then types..
Now im not a comical guy, but av's got me laughin at shit
I admit, i used to think av was dope..... back when he bit
but shit, i thought you ripped spits? now whats with this?
back on business,i leave Kent with what he checked in with
stretchin his stink hoe, hes starin at me but wont blink tho
We all know Kent aint good, but we like to let him think so
hoe.. Avalon serves no purpose to work with, hes worthless
thats kinda like flaming IRS agents playing clowns at a circus
I aint perfect, porcelian portraits could force it
Av would not be stable, if 13ths dick wasn't there to support him
but hey, im supportive. leave him red.. but i cant stand bulls
truth be told, if he held grudges, Av would have his hands full
say im on sum stupid shit. (.....................)put your excuses in
If some1 gave Kent a vote he wouldn't know what to do with it
a useless bitch.. now self acclaimed whore. More than before
i told him 'elevation is key', but he inserted it into the wrong door
good lord, Av cant score, someone tell him to please believe it
hes got this win like his sig...................... he just cant see it !
ya not needed.. ya verse what pale, blah, ehh and corny
Originally posted by Verbal Kent
(watch him turn something I said in this thread into a punch...
nah dawg.. your verse pretty much sumed that up for me
Last edited by Auspicious; January 27th, 2004 at 05:02 PM Reason: spelling errors
Artificial Intelligence.
ILL as fuck battle,, alot of people are interested in the evolve vs feeble match but this one is very ill also,,,
av came with a tight opener some decent punches and a funny as hell closer
the yoohoo line was nice....
Aus came with the flow,, it was dead on point and had some good punches in there too
such as the 'checked in with' line. overall a dope verse
It seems Av didnt really try to me coz i've seen so much better from him before.. and Aus just seemed to have the better overall verse.. it seemed he tried for it more and it showed so vote auspicious
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Av
merk, wits, Av's a biter, name change.. gay words n stuff,
blurt, bitch, Aus is tighter.., should sum ya lame verse up...
5/10....not hard hitting
but look, you're wack... that's all... n fuck it I won't persist,
Av'll make you cry ya i's out till Ausp_c_ous no longer exists...
7/10....lol, nice
duke you're feminine... but look a here he fought to no avail,
only problem is... while doin so... bitch slipped n broke a nail...
6/10....not bad, nothin new
and you're fuckin garbage kid... it's sad n' suicide time,
cus the first time he made the cut...... he left a note behind...
7/10....dope
while I'm at it you should fear... bullets'll fly through this queer,
n' fuck Hershey drinks... cause faggot it'll be YooHoo dies here...
7/10...haha, nice worplay
and it's an illusion... you will win this bout with lines... played,
if the decisions mine I choose grave, now jump to conclusions...
5/10...I get it, not great
you did have skills... fuck it... really... I aint even hatin man,
but there's enough dust on ya ass... to create the human race again...
5/10...wasnt feelin it
bitches aren't prone to battle... please Verb'll rattle with steel,
cause pumps came with my shotty... your's included high heels...
5/10....kinda played
and right now all triple L battlers should listen,
Auspicious proves you don't need comp... to hold a competition...
5/10.....ok
I only mention audios now... didn't really wanna diss em,
but one question... it take long to change ya studio,
back to the kitchen..?
6/10.....decent finisher
58/100=58%
Aus
Now im not a comical guy, but av's got me laughin at shit
I admit, i used to think av was dope..... back when he bit
7/10....nice personal
but shit, i thought you ripped spits? now whats with this?
back on business,i leave Kent with what he checked in with
7/10....yeahp
stretchin his stink hoe, hes starin at me but wont blink tho
We all know Kent aint good, but we like to let him think so
4/10.....nope
hoe.. Avalon serves no purpose to work with, hes worthless
thats kinda like flaming IRS agents playing clowns at a circus
3/10....never
I aint perfect, porcelian portraits could force it
Av would not be stable, if 13ths dick wasn't there to support him
5/10....better wording would have helped
but hey, im supportive. leave him red.. but i cant stand bulls
truth be told, if he held grudges, Av would have his hands full
5/10...not really a punch
say im on sum stupid shit. (.....................)put your excuses in
If some1 gave Kent a vote he wouldn't know what to do with it
5/10....meh
a useless bitch.. now self acclaimed whore. More than before
i told him 'elevation is key', but he inserted it into the wrong door
7/10.....dope
good lord, Av cant score, someone tell him to please believe it
hes got this win like his sig...................... he just cant see it !
6/10....decent
ya not needed.. ya verse what pale, blah, ehh and corny
Quote:
Originally posted by Verbal Kent
(watch him turn something I said in this thread into a punch...)
nah dawg.. your verse pretty much sumed that up for me
7/10.....good finisher
56/100=56%
Close as shit, both had some tight lines and some looser
I havent seen Aus battle in a while, he did better than I thought he would
but more consistency from the usual suspect
Vote - Av
Merk Squad...The Roster you weren't on
Diamond Minds...The Roster you're not on
LLL HW Champion...Been dope since forever
Well...Av:::
Your verse was...good
Well...Aus:::
Your verse was...good
But! Aus' closer killed the countdown....
But Av's opener killed the other opener...or is that the other way around....
Man...wait, are you sure they're both not Av...I mean..all those aliases?
J/p:
Really though:
Av...your verse got broke down pretty well by Walter, I don't understand why your lines go from make me laugh to make me cry....it's like reading a soap opera....
Aus...pretty solid, but lots of your lines could have been worded into actual punches
you were more or less just making statments in my opinion (not every line)....
Liked:
-while I'm at it you should fear... bullets'll fly through this queer,
n' fuck Hershey drinks... cause faggot it'll be YooHoo dies here...-
-And Aus' closer the most-
I'm pretty sure you can both do better
Overall...Av's punches came stronger throughout...Aus had a nice drop but like I said...
lots of it seemed like it could have been worded just a little better
Vote: Av
Honestly I Think You Both Couldve Done Much Better...Av Had Good Punches Here And There And Aus Was The Same...Only Difference Was Av Had A Few Old Concepts In His Verse...
Quotables:
^Dope Nice Wordplay...Took Me A Second To See What You Meant Though..LoLOriginally Posted by Verbal Kent
but look, you're wack... that's all... n fuck it I won't persist,
Av'll make you cry ya i's out till Ausp_c_ous no longer exists...
^2nd Line Was Funny And Witty..NiceOriginally Posted by Verbal Kent
you did have skills... fuck it... really... I aint even hatin man,
but there's enough dust on ya ass... to create the human race again...
^2nd Line Was GoodOriginally Posted by Auspicious
but shit, i thought you ripped spits? now whats with this?
back on business,i leave Kent with what he checked in with
^True, LoLOriginally Posted by Auspicious
good lord, Av cant score, someone tell him to please believe it
hes got this win like his sig...................... he just cant see it !
And Aus Had A Tight Closer..
Opener - Tie...I Expected Aus'
Punches - Tie
Personals - Tie
Wordplay - Av
Closer - Aus
Vocab - Av
Vote - Av....Av Started Off Fine Then Towards The End Slacked....But Aus Had A Few Good Lines His First Few And His Last Few In His Verse....The Middle Of His Verse Was Lacking With HARD Punches....
Classic...Originally Posted by Walter Wall
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This battle was really fuckin good...
Much respect and props to both skilled writers.
But when my vote drops, it drops for Av.
Both came spittin wit, used personals and wordplay effectively...
But I feel Av rolled his shit together and produced hard punches...
Aus produced the funnier shit.
So, real close, but Av takes this with aggression.
Peace
This Was A Good Battle...Good To See LLL Battles Becoming Dope Again.
Aus, You Had Some Decent Lines In Your Verse, But Then Some Really Weak Lines Aswell. You Would Have Won It If You Carried Your Consistancy Right The Way Through, You Fell Off Towards The End.
Av, Good Punches Throughout Your Verse, Kept Your Consistancy Throughout Your Verse. Pretty Faultless. Some Lines Werent All That Hard Hitting, But Enough To Make You Edge Out The Win.
Good Battle.
Vote - Av
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