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No Bullshit
D/R
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Ill Spit First
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shit didn't even realise this...
checkin in...i'll start keyin something in bout 5 minutes
Good luck man
Soft Focus
..Returns..
Kid set a call out..didn't respond..must of had to pre-write
Think about what he's gunna do..like a striaght hittin on a dyke
England..i've never heard of a english person do good audio
With that accent it can't be impressive or near audible though
I'm on a writters block..so i'm just gunna throw blocks atchu
Personals win battles..your 3d sphere..thats all i no about you
Acro Nim? What the hell is that..a new crew with respected vets?
Why the hell you on it..I haven't heard anybody respect you yet
Well I put emphisize on fillers to fill this bitch up like a virgin vagina
..now on the period..
Spreaden blood all over the place as quick as shattered china
^^quick key nothing special...good luck
Soft Focus
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Everything about this rules bent.and I aint one to hate
But you must be a protractor.....ya lines never straight
This herbs a disgrace to rb……..even noobs snap at rule
And hes just like Antarctica......he aint worth a capital
Mods just closing ya battles..give up..ya wont get it right
Stick to your topicals……...atleast then itl be a open mic
Rules always getting bitten….aint his skill tho…...its fate
Plus all the new fish noticed he’s just a piece of jail bait
Rules drowned out…...rainy days to him means alls good
It’s the only way rule can say…...…hes been in the hood
g/l
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meh..both pretty weak in my opinion.........
Theo Ginn wins cuz his verse was better....
neither had good punches but rule had way too much wakc shit in his
verse...
ginn wins..yup
yo theo took it cuz of better style..not that good but better......
u both got to use more personals.....n punches...
vote: theo
peace!
Man...
Theo fucked this up...
Better personals, wordplay, and definately punches.
Rule pretty much had only one tight line...
The "respected vets/respect you yet" was real nice...
But it was all by itself.
Much harder and wittier shit from Theo...
Just how I saw it...
Peace
Holla back...
Vote on this!
thanks
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Ok, here it is:
Rule- you seemed to be keystylin, so no doubt you could do better... but the only punch really hittin in ya verse was:
Acro Nim? What the hell is that..a new crew with respected vets?
Why the hell you on it..I haven't heard anybody respect you yet
^^LOL not bad
my advice - less wordplay more punches/personals - but not a bad drop.
and Theo - more focused on punches, structure was nice, stayed consistant and I felt you wanted this more - not an excellent drop, but definitely worthy of Elevated FL. Only advice - keep elevating.
This was a good read, I give it to Theo for staying consistant and punchin more. Props to both though
vote = Theo
yo - both yall drop a honest vote here
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=104931 shit's gettin madd slept on
thanks
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urry up n finish this
Both came nice an personal.. always makes for an interestin encounter.. some witty lines from both of u.. close in all catergories.. but it goes to rule cos i felt Sphere fell of at the end with the 'jailbait' line etc where as rule was consistantly hard hittin an funny.. props to both of u tho.. helluva battle to read.
VoTe = rule
Drop a vote here plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109369
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I wasnt really feeling this battle but heres how it goes....
Rule: Wasnt feeling your verse. You gotta work on hard hitting punches and wordplay, your structure was fine, but you need to work on your punches and wordplay.
Theo: Not a very good verse, but enough to pull the win. You had better punches and they hit harder.
V/ Theo
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