10 lines min
25 lines max
no dick ride
recycled rhymez
no hate usaul rulez
checkin in battle due Friday Night 1/23/04
BakerKid89
OMiNoUS
10 lines min
25 lines max
no dick ride
recycled rhymez
no hate usaul rulez
checkin in battle due Friday Night 1/23/04
im checkin in and what do u mean by no hate
and the dick thing confuses me
dont worry about it then
yo im in a school so im gonna spit this hit at night if its alright with you?
ur fuckin week ur rymes really suck
ill run you over w/ this god damn monster truck
you stupid fuck
you better start represention ur race all this bitch is doin is slowin the pace
sorrie but i gotta rub it in ya face/ fill ur face with mace/ n win this race
i tell u im gunna win this battle this shit is as easy as cowboys ropen cattle
ask me ill say/ ima win this battle ur the cowboy bitch riden in the horses sattel
stright to seattle/ as u c / this bitch is a god damn mother fuckin pussy
i might be the runt outa the bunch/ but i got a hunch/
ur punchline is shit and so are u/ just go jump in the crick and soke for a week or two
come back to my turf n ill beat teh shit outta u/ n all of your pussy crew/ ill twist and turn till u finally learn/ only come back if u wanna die and burn
i stand by the fone n wait for the call/ ill meet u at the court n skool u in basket ball
the truth is u can't ball at all ill dunk ya ass in the basket slice u up n put u in a casket
lol this kids wack- mada fact when im done im a leave you spineless/
this kids so stupid he dosent know what a line is/
this battle is waste of my time/
i dont even have to look and ill win with these rhymez/
ill go all out to prove that your fake/
if i were you i would stick to bakeing a cake/ (bakerkid89)
get on your knees and tell me whos the better emcee
even if i burned you alive you wouldn't be hotta then me/
you cant hit me with those punch lines/
you have better luck winning a battle biten off of a mine/
half your verse dosent rhyme/
when you rap you suck so much im surprised its not a crime/
fucking with OMiNoUS is like fuckin with the devil/
you can get high pre-battle and you still aignt on my level/
aight good battle
uppin for votes now
people i dont want this to get slept on
uppin for votes
Yo, here's my insights...
Baker.. not bad but u can def. elevate.. work on ur structure and flow.. it was a little choppy. punches were good. Not bad. Ominous.. had better structure and flow.. punches are what matter most and I think you had him by a little. I also think you had more creativity. no hate.
vote- OmInous
(Can't poll yet... but i can soon... HIT MY BATTLE UP.. honest vote please.. gettin slept on REAL bad. I'll be back)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...6&page=2&pp=15
Polled. -Token
Last edited by Token; January 24th, 2004 at 07:49 PM
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aight thx for the vote
1 me
uppin for votes
Yo if i could vote it would be for ominous..he had better flow and punchlines are better..i think bake is pretty good too but what camrox said he need to work on his structure and flow i agree with that
can u guyz vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108934
alright thx for vote
yo OMiNoUS took this....
bakerkid u need structure...it aint cool fo the reader....
at all OMiNoUS had better punches, flow and structure...
vote:OMiNoUS
peace!
Shit vote gone -Token
Last edited by Token; January 24th, 2004 at 07:50 PM
aight man thx for the vote 3-0 me
uppin for votes
people dont sleep on this battle cmon vote
less go
This is your last up. -Token
Last edited by Token; January 24th, 2004 at 07:47 PM
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uppin vote me and i will return the favor 1 peece
I hope you're kidding, unless you want banned?^ -Token
Last edited by Token; January 24th, 2004 at 07:48 PM