10 lines
no bullshit
just drop ya shit in a hour or so
and g/l
MARVOLoUsJ1009
Cata_Strophix
10 lines
no bullshit
just drop ya shit in a hour or so
and g/l
as i grow older my words become colder
so i walk a str8 path and hope i dont need to look over my shoulder
My lines like coke when they quiver ya mind and shiver ya spine
when i deliver this line..I'm WhITE and ur dick still aint bigger than mine
bitch u just livin after this battle would be just Marv-o-lous
but i'm gunna inject an overdose of lead causin ya heart-2-bust
I'll carve ya lips and retard ya hips..take his beef so hes to starved 2 spit
cut ya hands off so 2 you my LINES ..............are to fuckin HARD 2 grip.
u had to start some shit---so in the heat of battle...u got charred 2 crisps
split this kids mouth open...just 2 show him he needs to guard his lips
this Kid claims he's the sickest on this site...you aint got 1 W...plus u aint white
i aint racist but lets face this...readin ya sig..says it all...u just aint that 9ice..nice
ABout the "u aint white line" he SAys he's the only Black person on this site... Nothin racist bout it so nobody can hate on it) or hate on it if ya wanna
as i grow older my words become colder
so i walk a str8 path and hope i dont need to look over my shoulder
kid says a 20 min times limit and posts a hour later ??????
MarvolousJwun009: jea whuts da time limit
IllCataStrophix: how quick can u drop somethin
MarvolousJwun009: 20 minutes or less ...........
so drop ya verse man Dayum
as i grow older my words become colder
so i walk a str8 path and hope i dont need to look over my shoulder
lol^^^.....
Listen...dat weak verse i could see u dont-know-marv //
u might as well "serve drinks at a gay club" cuzz all u just spit was "homo bars" //
i got bullets ima ya put it in ya spline cuzz da fo-fo-large //
but everybody's tired on dis "pussy on da screen" like old "porno stars" //
whut u know about toatin-dem-tools,but you'll end up broken and bruised //
i'll put ya "chest on ya book" so u could have some "soul in ya bars" like they were wrote in ya "shoe's"//
by dem corny bars u spittin,i could tell u gotta problem-spittin //
why rap u "suck on da mic" more than "robbin givens" //
i gotta play greasy cuzz dis cowards-amp //
u neva gon get on hot97 4 ya song da be "radio-active" u gota bring ya cd 2 a "power plant" //
ummm jea!
cata takes this one. better structure for sure. marv had long lines and tried to squeeze too mch. cata used good mets and punches. not the best battle but prolly interesting. cata used a good rhyming style. i liked that. but otherwise, youse need some improvement. no hate.
give us a vote___
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107704
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106808
shibby___
uppin uppin ......................................
as i grow older my words become colder
so i walk a str8 path and hope i dont need to look over my shoulder
Cata takes this one cuz marvolus stretched out his lines to far.................thats y cata gets my vote
vote=cata
Punches: Cata
Wordplay: Marv
Personals: Cata
Multis: Cata
Vote - Cata
Cata ended this battle with decent multis straight through his verse, with har personals, Marv's wordplay was pretty dope, but you just need more, I thought you wasted a lot of space in the beginning of your verse.
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
upppin for the close of bizniss
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as i grow older my words become colder
so i walk a str8 path and hope i dont need to look over my shoulder
v/cata...
I thought punches were pretty even, but cata just got it on structure and readability...
He also came a little more creative...
Please return the favor (all we need is one more vote):
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108767
Hence Forward
axis powers
uppin............................................. .........
as i grow older my words become colder
so i walk a str8 path and hope i dont need to look over my shoulder
wow this was one Ill battle lmao....
But I cant vote due to Cata being an Ass
Props to both tho lol
ok...this was a simple...on read through each verse....and find the winner battle...obviosly it was Cata_Strophix he had an all around better verse...
Marv-ya shit was straight but before you post next time proofread ya shit i couldn't understand half ya verse..so that fucked up ya flow...still a average verse all around...
Vote-Cata_Strophix
Reason-All Around better punches and flow
Can you please peep this battle anyone...thanxs
DNUFO2 Vs. Young Savage
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109012
uppin............................................. .........
as i grow older my words become colder
so i walk a str8 path and hope i dont need to look over my shoulder
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