ightt check in u spit first 10-20 lines
no hte votes no crew votes
expected in 30mins
ightt check in u spit first 10-20 lines
no hte votes no crew votes
expected in 30mins
so i'm guessin' i just flow cause I don't know so i'm just gonna go
ye u got it u check in 1st then u go............good luck..........
I'm from the Midwest so come & put me to the test
I'll put you to rest without havin' to put holes in ya chest
Sayin' you're a hard hitta yo i bet I could load you in my hitter
Smoke you up then take your girl fuck her then forget her
I gotta bark with my bite and I ain't no fly by night
So what if I'm white? I guess that means I deserve your spite
But don't worry I'm fully contrite when I spit this fuckin type=
And just because I'm suburban doesn't make my stability right
So you better back down when I come around
Give me weight, motherfucker Pound By Pound
Cause I can smoke a pound before I hit the ground
So you better get to runnin' so you can be safe and sound
But you better not run here cause I live in a sun down town
ightt.....yo this kidds style is just as wack as his name dont know what he was thinking when he steped in this game//
sayin hes gunna pack me up and smoke me,motha fucka u can suck my dick whiel i choke ya//
this faggot aint holdin he IM'd me and asked how to check in!now im rollin..haha..//
battleing me is like bowling/
Balls are the only thing you gay ass is throwing/
thats right u live in a sun down town where ur wack ass wears a dress and whores it around///
and no shit your stability aint right your the wackest MC on this site!!/
you picked the wrong MC to battel cuz whein i spit im like a nascar driver all i see is checkerd//
shouldnt have picked me dowwg now u got a 0-1 record!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ightt yo........upin for them votes..........................*1*
dude you smoked me anyways so it aint much of a vote
upin for thes mo fuckin votes...........................#2
ightt dont let this get slept on come uppin again................#3
marlboro man - ok structure........flow was pretty good........vocab was basic........multis were ok.........wasnt feelin ya punches.........no personals......
hardhitter - wack structure........flow fell off........vocab was weak........some of ya multis were aight........some of the punches hit hard.........ok personals......
conclusion - hardhitter takes it in multis, punches, and personals so he gets my vote
VOTE - HARDHITTER
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Yo, can't poll but here's my insights...
maroboro.. not too bad.. but not good. need to elevate alot. had an alright flow. work on the punches, they were lacking. hardhitta guess thats why u got your name.. yea you had better flow, alot better punches. Just hit him harder basically... you got my vote
vote- hardhitter
Return favor. Anyone reading this please honest vote HIT UP MY BATTLE.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108266
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Ight, A descent battle, hardhitter u showed signs of improvment and elevation...
Punches-Both didn't come to hard, But Hardhitters Were more humerous then Marb man's,
Wordplay-Hardhitter switched it up, put more creativity into his shit, he used a bigger field of words.
Flow- Some what of a tie, both had there ups n downs......
structure-Hardhitter work on your structure, That is about the only thing He had you on...
Marb Man, you Fluently made references to yerself in yer rhyme almost making it sound like u were making fun of yourself........
V/ Hardhitter
MARLBORO YOU CAME KINDA WEAK BUT YOU DO HAVE POTENTIAL
THERE POINTS IN THE BATTLE WHERE I COULD ALMOST SAY YOU WERE BATTLELING YOUR SELF.
YOU NEED TO FOCUS MORE ON YOUR OPONENT
AND UR PUNCHES
HARDHITTER MAN YOU WERE COO AND STOOD UP FOR UR NAME U CAME HARD
BUT MY VOTE GOES TO HARDHITTER
NO BEEF
BUT CAN YALL VOTE ON THIS
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...66#post1110466
I'm not even gonna vote malboro's was so wak, you were dissing yourself in your verse, what the fuck is wrong with you?
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
2 more pole votes come on lets get these votes in pleaz...i will return the favor........
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