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    Soft Focus: The Weathers Art

    Winter
    A dark silent walk home I glance to see the beautiful trees glow
    Remarkable the vision after the storm laid a blanket of snow
    Trapped in this peace of mind of the soft focus of the evils illusion
    Sparkling drops of snow easing my mind putting rest to confusion
    It's contagious I could stare at the mysterious eye candy all night
    An never feel I’ve had enough, It helps my ego..believe I’m alright
    Who would have thought just a walk could be a helpful therapist
    Take away the evil stop you from going and slitting your wrist
    Eyes feel focused staring at how the ecosystem actually works
    The winter is so precious maybe it's because of Jesus’ birth

    Spring
    The year is changing like the baby who was born in December
    Gods crying rain to wash up snow another season to remember
    Paralyzing hate with waterfall of lust that begins to prove love
    You sit and hear the angels play with the thunder from above
    Puddles left in the ground from the rain storm...nights perfection
    You stare in the dew of the damp leaves to see your reflection
    Imperishable the items on the trees that begin to slowly sprout
    The lakes begin to flow hard and you see fishermen netting trout
    This season is another blessing in disguise from powerful angels
    We pray to the keeper of earth to show we're forever thankful

    Summer
    Infatuated by the power from the sun and the bliss handed
    Down in rays letting flowers bloom an migrated birds be landed
    Animals awake from hibernation morning you hear birds chirping
    Look out side at the surroundings and see every things working
    From the smallest insect to the largest bear summers majestic
    With a symphony of sounds in the morning leaving us going hectic
    Wake up a little early so you see the sun go down feel the sunset
    Open yours eye like flowers see summer is beautiful...no regrets
    Heating up the water so our race can swim and enjoy pleasure
    Another season change that was opened up golden treasure

    Fall
    The temperature starts to fall similar to the leaves on the trees
    See the animals packing up an birds getting ready to be diseased
    Flowers being drowned in rain rivers start to have a light ice
    A sheet so thin but sets the mood just right an for know price
    Covered in leaves and mud from a little river on your property
    You can tell the seasons taken to you by the rain fallen promptly
    Trust this season will come back with more stormy weather
    Rain drenching ya close fog staling your journy..anything better?
    This is special in its own little way everything is a young waterfall
    Maybe this is actually why they declare this fallen season...fall

    The Art
    Seasons can't cure the blind but they help them feel there way
    Give a right purpose similar to thoughts on why Christians pray
    Showing different pictures from rivers to snow on the trees
    Incredible it's so blissful could take away the air you breath
    Take a glance around you and feel the mystical painting it draws
    Deserves an applause for many ways it leaves your eyes in awes
    Doesn't use a paint brush a pad it simply uses it's surroundings
    Tangles vines around trees leaving certain remarkable findings
    This is the portrait of life a daily picture that'll never depart
    Helps your insight rain snow fog mist all a beautiful art
    Last edited by rule; January 26th, 2004 at 08:47 PM
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    that was a prity good piece, i liked the way u described the different seasons and managed too keep it from being boring
    "It's contagious I could stare at the mysterious eye candy all night
    An never feel I’ve had enough, It helps my ego..believe I’m alright"
    some people might think thats a bit soppy but i know how u feel , when i have a lot on my mind and i have a beer at night and there are lots of stars in the sky its relaxing to look at them and helps me think.

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    i thought this was pretty good, even tho i did the exact samesorta piece, months ago... but you took a slightly different angle to me.... quite interesting and different from some drops.... i liked it, and not just cos ive used it..lol..... return the favour on my latest...
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    thanks...don't sleep...
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    ..I read this yesterday..i don't know why I didn't leave a feedback??....anyway..this was very good..your imagery was excellent..your wordplay was also great...i personally like the fall...

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    thanks a lot...thats apreciated
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    this is being slept on
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    rule...what can i say...
    dopeness on this 1 very ill
    my favorite verse personally
    would have to be The Art...
    you explained it all in one verse
    probly coulda dropped just that
    verse and still had a dope Open Mic...
    anyway i look forward to seeing more new stuff from you...
    ...and thanks for the compliment in poetic scriptures-
    just to tell you i jsut started topicals....
    check out my 2part Open mics if you haven't yet...

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    will do for sure next time on online for a good period of time...and your looking good for just beggining...hence the fact your beating me in out topical battle...bastered lol..j/p you had a dope pice
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    this was aight

    the concept was cool as fuck

    the imagry was dope, very graphic i enjoyed it

    the way the whole thing was kinda a huge metaphor was dope

    the only thing that wasn't extremly great was the flow

    props

    if you get a chance check this out
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