BONESPITTER vs LM

[bonespitter]

10 - 12 lines
u got time
u drop first
when i get back
ill check in and drop
GOOD LUCK

[LM]

Ok......checkin in. I'll drop ASAP. Probably bout 30 minutes, maybe less

[bonespitter]

kool well im taking off now
ill drop a soon as i get back
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[LM]

Here's my verse....

I wont hit your ass hard with punches......just a little tap
Coz lookin at your past work I aint convinced you can rap
Your wack, cant handle punches comin like a chain reaction
Your lines are forced, sqeezed out like a brain contraction
Take some action, carry your fat ass to the fuckin W.E.C
You need to coz the wackest of Mc's are merkin you easily
Your not one of my enemies but I know you aint got a flow
Coz otherwise you'd be in a crew, not the unknown N.B.O
I smell a KO, 5-0 to me coz dawg your fuckin wack to fuck
You aint dope, I could merk your ass if I was ecstacy'd up
Your luck is up and not one of my lines came at you hard
But still who cares.....my 33rd win is still on the cards...


^^Not my best but goodluck anyway

[bonespitter]

alright im back ready to spit so i will
be dropin in around 15 - 20 minutes
thanks fo waittin

[bonespitter]

you bout to get beet clown , N.B.O.’s get down or lay down
your rhymes sound dead,they bound,and burried underground

this LM dint come up wit a real name, so im rissin up stronga
ill eat you up like dinna, its bonespitta chew ya like a rotweilla

your rymes aren’t catchy,they just aint stickin,I spit beats slash/ pam
LM claims that I cant rap or flow, but still you get played like pac man

leaving your rhymes at nuthin, ya feel week so take back yo bitch skit
Your rhymes aren’t reela, when u dropp im dreamin, I realy don’t feel it

think ya something with 45 battles, my rhymes make yours rattle
trying your hardest, we commin from a fosset Id flow, you drizzle

ya disgustin, steelin ya liltle sistas pink skirt,wear it to W.E.C.
drop it,pick up tha bed skirt, only way you phat is spelt F.A.T.

there we go im glad you dint do your best cause I am out of it no more
battles today for me but id like to get some votes


plz vote on my other battle I had today thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108117

[Feeble]

v/ LM

punches - LM. LM didnt have too many, but the other cats were played like that pac man one, and others...

flow - neither.. although bonespitters was choppy at some points neither really shined...

metties - ermmm... aka punches.

bonespitter - u had too many played lines, and old concepts.. read other peoples battles and see whats played. improve.

LM - arrite job..

both of you go vote here: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...86#post1104486

[LM]

^^How come nobody can ever poll when they vote on my battles

[bonespitter]

cause he dosent have 100 posts you should no that
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lets get some votes

[Feeble]

erm ill poll for you on my mod name hoe. now go vote on my battle i linked you too...

i just polled. now go vote honestly on my bttle or i'll take it back.

[Ja'e Roc]

vote LM
Breakdown,
Punches: lm
Metas: LM
Flow: LM
Structure: Lm
Vocab: LM

U just need to keep elevatin bone.

[Born To Kill]

LM hit harder...

Had a better flow and format...

Hit personally...

And touched on wordplay here and there.

Bonespitter did none of the above.

But he threw some metas and attempted to come hard.

Good effort, can tell ya trying.

You're just coming up with shit that's been heard to death.

You had one witty line wit the "F A T" line...
That showed nice wordplay and hit hard with humor.

But that's all ya had, man.

Peace

Winner: LM

Holla back...Vote here!

[LM]

Uppin for votes (1).........................................

[LM]

Uppin for votes (2)..................................

[Freeman]

iight...

LM... a nice spit from you... good hard hittin punches and some good vocab and wordplay in there aswell... was feelin ur verse... liked it... good structure and flow aswell...

Bone... played shit from you... wasnt bad, but played... try n create some of your own ideas... keep elevating...

Vote - LM

hit this up please... only need one more for the 5-0...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108269

thanks

OUT