blind spit
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10-12 lines
good luck
-Technician-
Meters
blind spit
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10-12 lines
good luck
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Meters, easily beaten I'm acheivin beleivers with readers
I chose blind spit for proceedin reasons that u is a feeder
Ur lines Totter & teeter, like Something About Mary "We've got a bleeder!"
Punches seek you like heaters, follow them shits? my structures ur leader!
An extra bar you needin, I said 10 lines u changed it whats ur reason?
Beatin's in season, I'd let you watch the leaves change red but ur leavin
Not welcome here cuz your frace is purple, black and blue
I might take an L ............... but only if i wasnt battlin' you
See i gotta be quick cuz my ride is out front right now waitin
So leme take my win there and make a start to celebratin'
No more debatin, Your whack....simply it's only a statement
For me ne way face it.....you live it every night in ya basement
I'll knock ya writer's block off fag, tear apart your retreating smarts,
And i'd bleed your wack ass dry but you ain't even beating hearts!,
I got ya devoured and flayed, this false Tech's wack at his trade,
Fag's got screws loose, structure crumbles leaving votes swayed,
Technician only spits shit, quick wit got him winded like the breeze,
Bitch'd rather flee than step to me, this faggot scared to cross t's!,
Like a fat marathon runner, watch as his afraid voice gets hoarse,
Everyone'd rather see you off tracks like ya career's run it's course!,
Livin' at Cloud 420, so it hits you plane that you've been merked,
Acting hard in battles, i'm the agent, my punches have ya worked,
Scared of your own shadow, i'm blurring the lines between the two,
Because after this battle Technican, you'll also be black and blue
Hm, we both talk about being black and blue. Remember that it was a blind spit so i wasn't feeding. Good battle.
If you understand wordplay, drop a link and a vote.
Upping for honest votes. We'll make this the third upping i guess.......
One sided battle....
Tech... that was one of tha worst verses I've seen from you dawg
Meters had punches and personals and flow and structure.....
Tech i certainly could tell you was in a hurry... and ya rhyme scheme
wasn't working.....sorry
so
V/ Meters
"I'm sorry, we've never met.. my name is driftwood. Thanks friend.. good lookin', I'll never see you again.." -Aesop Rock
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ima give this here to meters, cause he had more
punches, it seemed like tech wasnt even tryin, when
you battle you got to have attitiude, which is what meters had.
my vote:meters
vote:meters
better punches,bit week tech bud!!!!!!!!!!
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"THE FRANCHISE"
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Breakdown:
punches - meters
personals - meters
flow - tie
creativity - meters
opener - meters
closer - tech
OVERALL - meters
And coz the two of you like returnin favours.....drop an honest vote on the battle in my sig. The links at the bottom
LM The Life
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...The Rhymes
Drop a vote and a link..(4 i think)
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meterz took dis easily........
ive seen technician come out wayy harder in oda battlez
meterz......nice werdplay..punhces.....flow....n everytin else......
technician-...........ive seen u do better
vote: meterz
hit dis up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106822
Thanks for the votes, last upping to get some final votes on this battle
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