As5a5sIn5 Vs. Dazasta

[assassins24]

Dazasta
You read the rulezin callout...
You know the drill, Spit 1st..30 minutes...

[Daz]

this is my check in and my verse...

this kid called me out for posts so he can finally vote/
still his lines could get any hotter if i lit a fire in his throat/
nope...the only dope you kno is to get feens/
while you dreamt of beating ace in cyphers during wet dreams/
it seems like the odds are piling against you rapidly/
you'll get ahead in life...right in back of me/
your that easy..i've been to jails and seen better bars/
you'll always be a step ahead...right in front of cars/
you run with sars...my punches leave you sick and weary/
i went first to give you time to study the..dictionary/
im strictly scary...i had to get you votes to wreck 'um/
your moms affection shown by sticking weapons up ur rectum/

[assassins24]

This mutha fuckin' emcee has filled me with laughter//
The bitch can't even spell his own name 'Dazasta'//
That explains how much of a vocab you got ferreal//
Go out to diner before I post, and eat ya last meal//
When I look at this bitch I must start to be starvin' to death//
Cuz I'ma eat this emcee real fast, Dazasta take ya last breath//
I'ma murder this rapper, and he won't even know he dead//
This kid will be left in 'wonder' like his last name was 'bread'//
I'm the one causin' lyracal 'dazasta', faster, then the master, of all of rap//
Can't this bitch emcee, see me, and breath deep, I beat em for a fact//((Damn))
I'm out this battle dawg, I barely even tryed, I'm sorry//
Even though your murked you still can come to the afterparty//

Vote Peoples...

[Daz]

ok.....uppin for votes now..done with this battle...let the voting start

[Daz]

explanations for my verse...

he imed me and i couldnt battle him beause he needed votes on his other battles..so i helped him get votes..
The ace line was when he told me he think he beat ace in cyphers because ace kept coming back and dissing him...

everything else is clear..except for spelling errors

[Steven William]

close battle i say TIE.....
wonder bread line and after party line pulled this back up to a tie
for that kid assassins... the rest of his verse nah...
i really didnt like either verse much...
Both need elevation... Pz...

[Daz]

i see im gonna have to up this battle until some one stops being gay and votes...vote

[Lingwistik]

iight, dazasta took thisd, the other guty i think was a lot more played, dazasta was played in the sars line but other than that he had good flow. the other dude i dunno, 4 some reason i wasnt feelin him, but dazasta was harder in punches too, n better personlas 2, bot needa elevate but dazasta took it

[Daz]

thanx for the vote you rejected math course...lol j/k uppin for more votes

[Mad Mike]

Wow, this battle was certainly close as hell......But I'm gonn have to give this to dazasta, As5a5sIn5 you came hard as hell dogg, good shit, yer wordplay was ight, punches hit good, but i think that dazasta jus has a cleaner flow and better wordplay, and also hit harder on some of his punchlines, good battle tho, keep elevatin
v/ dazasta

[assassins24]

hmmm..is it suspicous that MichaelMadness and Flo~0~Mentry have voted for you before...and you voted for them?

Should I suspect D/r's?

[LM]

^^Stop bitchin

punches - dazasta
personals - dazasta
flow - Assassin
creativity - tie
opener - dazasta
closer - Assassin

OVERALL - dazasta......All catagories were close but dazasta edged it in the ones that really matter

Hit my battle up....links in my sig

[Provoke]

Dazasta
this kid called me out for posts so he can finally vote/
still his lines could get any hotter if i lit a fire in his throat/
Its a text battle..
nope...the only dope you kno is to get feens/
while you dreamt of beating ace in cyphers during wet dreams/
Obivously one would think of all ppl i would like it..
..Its an ok punch regardless who it concerns..
it seems like the odds are piling against you rapidly/
you'll get ahead in life...right in back of me/
Ok, little wordplay.. ok punch
your that easy..i've been to jails and seen better bars/
you'll always be a step ahead...right in front of cars/
Basically kind of the same concept..as one bar back..
..Though better executed & more of a punch, ok..
you run with sars...my punches leave you sick and weary/
i went first to give you time to study the..dictionary/
..It's been done but ok..
im strictly scary...i had to get you votes to wreck 'um/
your moms affection shown by sticking weapons up ur rectum
Weak closer..

Assasin
This mutha fuckin' emcee has filled me with laughter//
The bitch can't even spell his own name 'Dazasta'//
..Alright.. ok punch..
That explains how much of a vocab you got ferreal//
Go out to diner before I post, and eat ya last meal//
Now ur contradicting yourself..
In the second line you clown him for not bein able to write..
..If i am correct..its spelled "for real" not "ferreal"..
So that's wack.
When I look at this bitch I must start to be starvin' to death//
Cuz I'ma eat this emcee real fast, Dazasta take ya last breath//
..Played, but one of your better lines.
I'ma murder this rapper, and he won't even know he dead//
This kid will be left in 'wonder' like his last name was 'bread'//
Ok wordplay..but just cause you put 2 words tween ' s..
Dont mean you take the wordplay catagory..but ok punch
I'm the one causin' lyracal 'dazasta', faster, then the master, of all of rap//
Can't this bitch emcee, see me, and breath deep, I beat em for a fact//((Damn))
..No real punch..& that damn comment after your lines is wack to..
I'm out this battle dawg, I barely even tryed, I'm sorry//
Even though your murked you still can come to the afterparty//
..No punch..filler lines, bad closer.

Both came weak in my eyes..neither really came with hard punches..
Or comedy..very mediocre & un-creative..both had slightly played lines..
But Dazasta came with better punches & most important more personal punches..
Which give him the upper hand in this battle..
Both where even when it comes to structure & flow..
..Assasin had a little wordplay..so yeah he would have taken that catagory..
But nothing great..
Dazasta wins basically cause of better punches & personals.

vote Dazasta

[Daz]

haha thx for the vote..........LMAO at the way he picked at the verses....one of my weaker verses..sorry fans....its ok..

[CarsonJetX2]

I gotta say....this was pretty close....
Both really tied in every category....except for punches...
I think dazasta really brought the majority of them here...
not too great but not bad at all....
but due to the quality and quantity of punches daz takes this....

vot- dazasta