ite man,
10 lines,
both drop in 20 mins after check,
no feeding,
no freeposting,
no d/r hate or crew votes.
.................good luck man..........................pz
ite man,
10 lines,
both drop in 20 mins after check,
no feeding,
no freeposting,
no d/r hate or crew votes.
.................good luck man..........................pz
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checking in .......................................gd luck m8................................................ ....................pz
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checkin in....g'luck to you to dawg...this should be a good ass battle....let's get it poppin
yo yo,
yo so you how people say "if you dont get the punches, then dont even vote",
well im praying that aint the case..cause i cant understand a werd this bitch wrote,
i heard this bitch was alright..so ive got to cum hard-in-this,
what im tripping on is why you reply?...my bitch slapped didnt say retardedness,
em dsnt claim he is black...likewise cold dsnt swear that its hot,
so why you open your fucking mouth..claiming to be sumthing your not?,
diverses sig...lethal scriptures..with a thugged out pictures,
quotes talibs lines cause he cant come hard himself,
....................thats why i set this lyrical fixture,
diverse shakeing his lines..knowing i got instant back up if he mentions-me,
i got given 10 years...but only took 10 lines to post the piss take of the-century.
..........pz
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i don't even need any bait to get K hooked onto my lines
knock this kid on his flat back faster than a lazy boy reclined
watch as he strikes out,another K, bottom of the 9th inning
i'm grinning, if only for the simple fact that i know i'm winning
bringin so much heat, K's record inevitably gettin melted off
burnin this kid up in an instant, now even he can smell his loss
hittin his mouth with punches, fatal flurry devistates his entire face
now ya words just like your jawline, they both need to be replaced
resides in the U.K., to me that means nothing more than Usually Killed
even if it was a Michael Jackson video, ya words wouldn't leave me thrilled
ooohhh shit.....this is gonna be close....nice spit K
ite corection line 1 is mena say,
yo so you no how people say "if you dont get the punches, then dont even vote",
.................thx.........pz
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likewise man........................gd luck.............................................. ..........pz
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Pretty Good Battle, K Had Some Nice Lines Just Horrible Wording...And Diverse Had Some Good Wordplay, Better Structure, And Harder Punches..Which Is Why He Won This In My Opinion..
Punches - Diverse
Wordplay - Diverse
Flow - Diverse
Structure - Diverse
Personals - K
Vocab - K
RhymeScheme - Tie (K Had Good Personals)
Opener - Diverse
Closer - K (Diverse's Closer Was PLAYED!!!)
Vote - Diverse For A Better Developed Verse With Harder Punches, No Hate..
Can You Two Check One Of My Battles That Are Being Really Slept On...They Are On The Front Page Of This Forum, Pick One..LoL (Technician or Kaos Theory)
yo so you how people say "if you dont get the punches, then dont even vote",
well im praying that aint the case..cause i cant understand a werd this bitch wrote,
nope
i heard this bitch was alright..so ive got to cum hard-in-this,
what im tripping on is why you reply?...my bitch slapped didnt say retardedness,
you contradict yourself and just make yourself look stupid in this
em dsnt claim he is black...likewise cold dsnt swear that its hot,
so why you open your fucking mouth..claiming to be sumthing your not?,
not a punch
diverses sig...lethal scriptures..with a thugged out pictures,
quotes talibs lines cause he cant come hard himself,
....................thats why i set this lyrical fixture,
wack
diverse shakeing his lines..knowing i got instant back up if he mentions-me,
i got given 10 years...but only took 10 lines to post the piss take of the-century.
blah
i don't even need any bait to get K hooked onto my lines
knock this kid on his flat back faster than a lazy boy reclined
nope
watch as he strikes out,another K, bottom of the 9th inning
i'm grinning, if only for the simple fact that i know i'm winning
woulda been good but you worded it wrong and its not a punch
bringin so much heat, K's record inevitably gettin melted off
burnin this kid up in an instant, now even he can smell his loss
nope
hittin his mouth with punches, fatal flurry devistates his entire face
now ya words just like your jawline, they both need to be replaced
decent
resides in the U.K., to me that means nothing more than Usually Killed
even if it was a Michael Jackson video, ya words wouldn't leave me thrilled
played
well this was a weak battle almost no real punches thrown
you both need to work on structure and flow
K you need to learn what a real punch is
D you need consistancy and stay away from played lines
vote D
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New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz
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ite emerge get of my back......................................thx for the votes............................................. ......................pz
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iight...
before a start... props to both for tight verses... keep up both of ya...
here goes...
K... your verse was good flowing... you had a good structure... some nice creativity and complexity in your verse aswell man...
some nice solid punches aswell... couple of personals aswell...
a liked it man... was feelin the punches... cool...
fav line...
'diverse shakeing his lines..knowing i got instant back up if he mentions-me,
i got given 10 years...but only took 10 lines to post the piss take of the-century.'
Diverse... you had a decent flow... an iight structure aswell... some of your punches were played... especially your closer... some personals in there aswell... kinda creative... had some complexity to it aswell...
fav line...
'hittin his mouth with punches, fatal flurry devistates his entire face
now ya words just like your jawline, they both need to be replaced'
this was a tight battle in my opinion... very close indeed...
but a feel K took this... only just tho...
vote - K
keep up both...
good luck...
OUT
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ite thx man............................................... .........2-1..........................................uppin(1 ).............pz
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I aint got my registered to vote here yet....will do it 2nite. Get a mod to add my vote.
Breakdown:
punches - diverse
personals - tie
flow - tie
creativity - .:k:.
opener - diverse
closer - .:k:.
OVERALL - diverse
I've seen both of you come harder than this but diverse edged it, I think .:k:. worded a few lines wrong which let his verse down.
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I'm registered to vote here now so I added my vote....just lettin ya's know
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