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His rhyme schemes elementary so I'll break him down easily
He'll realize i'm not J/K, after i L M like i should've did NO P
Miracle's mother worked the corner of 34th Street..... rain, hail, sleet, snow
His biological dad's a mystery, but your piggy bank stayed full of John Doe
This battle's like his entry into this Earth..... call it a breeched birth
Cause before you come out ahead, you're likely to see da feet first
I'll Kanye his face... he'll experience Hellmann by the time I'm finished
Have Miracle talking through the wire hospitalized inside a Mayo Clinic
Scared to a pyr, amid top-tier battlers cuz your whole style is wack*
I'll put an O. in M. and make his body collapse like the fall of Mubarak
*M had an O.M. drop titled: 'Building a Great Pyramid'
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Cool...
he hangs out when beefs not popping n is scared to hold a weapon
so everyone know when its time to get SIRIUS, you'll never hear from FM
hes home w/ the doors locked. so ill burn it down, u'll see a disaster
till its only ash, sitting there------> like pikachu bounced on his master
ima rip ya legs off; twisting ya bones n making ya thighs bend
until there no support, on either side like a neutral alliance
watch me dump on you..i'll present this beating n he'll stand still
cuz we can see all you write is trash man, n is all you'll ever land Fil
also this guys a dickrider..loves the cock stupid
everyone knows F's on more tops then a bad student
quick verse sorry
His rhyme schemes elementary so I'll break him down easily
He'll realize i'm not J/K, after i L M like i should've did NO P
nice word play (alphabet), but ok opener at best
Miracle's mother worked the corner of 34th Street..... rain, hail, sleet, snow
His biological dad's a mystery, but your piggy bank stayed full of John Doe
missed here...
This battle's like his entry into this Earth..... call it a breeched birth
Cause before you come out ahead, you're likely to see da feet first
defeat lines are played... ok flip though
I'll Kanye his face... he'll experience Hellmann by the time I'm finished
Have Miracle talking through the wire hospitalized inside a Mayo Clinic
meh
Scared to a pyr, amid top-tier battlers cuz your whole style is wack*
I'll put an O. in M. and make his body collapse like the fall of Mubarak
eh... okish
vs.
he hangs out when beefs not popping n is scared to hold a weapon
so everyone know when its time to get SIRIUS, you'll never hear from FM
FM nameplays are over played... ok flip though
hes home w/ the doors locked. so ill burn it down, u'll see a disaster
till its only ash, sitting there------> like pikachu bounced on his master
creative... smirked a little but elemenatary bar
ima rip ya legs off; twisting ya bones n making ya thighs bend
until there no support, on either side like a neutral alliance
good metaphor, soft hit
watch me dump on you..i'll present this beating n he'll stand still
cuz we can see all you write is trash man, n is all you'll ever land Fil
eh... okish
also this guys a dickrider..loves the cock stupid
everyone knows F's on more tops then a bad student
meh closer
vote- Miracle
FM started out ok, but the punches he had became played as
the verse went on... Miracle just had fresher concepts and
were worded decent, so he gets my vote
DayumNation
His rhyme schemes elementary so I'll break him down easily
He'll realize i'm not J/K, after i L M like i should've did NO P
vs
hes home w/ the doors locked. so ill burn it down, u'll see a disaster
till its only ash, sitting there------> like pikachu bounced on his master
close battle...both had some dope wordplay buh overall im gonna go with miracle...that ash line was creative ..filthy could of came harder in some lines buh i felt the lines didnt connect as well
vote- miracle
Filthy
His rhyme schemes elementary so I'll break him down easily
He'll realize i'm not J/K, after i L M like i should've did NO P
lol abc bar..nice tho...EYO KNOWP he's talking shit!!! lol
Miracle's mother worked the corner of 34th Street..... rain, hail, sleet, snow
His biological dad's a mystery, but your piggy bank stayed full of John Doe
ROFL this shit hit...
This battle's like his entry into this Earth..... call it a breeched birth
Cause before you come out ahead, you're likely to see da feet first
i have to agree with A.T. on this one defeat lines are played but this is a good flip on a played concept
vs
miracle
he hangs out when beefs not popping n is scared to hold a weapon
so everyone know when its time to get SIRIUS, you'll never hear from FM
good opener here. just like the last quote from Filth this one was a good flip on something played
hes home w/ the doors locked. so ill burn it down, u'll see a disaster
till its only ash, sitting there------> like pikachu bounced on his master
rofl this was a new one to me
watch me dump on you..i'll present this beating n he'll stand still
cuz we can see all you write is trash man, n is all you'll ever land Fil
set up is the only thing that hurt this bar...other than that good shit here
i have 3 quotables a piece. miracle your last quotable was had a kinda off setup and your out of the 2 bars i didnt quote for both of you, filthy had the stronger bars there. pretty close battle here. but imma go with FM
v/FM
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His rhyme schemes elementary so I'll break him down easily
He'll realize i'm not J/K, after i L M like i should've did NO P
meh too choppy imo
Miracle's mother worked the corner of 34th Street..... rain, hail, sleet, snow
His biological dad's a mystery, but your piggy bank stayed full of John Doe
ehh
This battle's like his entry into this Earth..... call it a breeched birth
Cause before you come out ahead, you're likely to see da feet first
bit played
I'll Kanye his face... he'll experience Hellmann by the time I'm finished
Have Miracle talking through the wire hospitalized inside a Mayo Clinic
meh
Scared to a pyr, amid top-tier battlers cuz your whole style is wack*
I'll put an O. in M. and make his body collapse like the fall of Mubarak
not feeling it
vs
he hangs out when beefs not popping n is scared to hold a weapon
so everyone know when its time to get SIRIUS, you'll never hear from FM
meh
hes home w/ the doors locked. so ill burn it down, u'll see a disaster
till its only ash, sitting there------> like pikachu bounced on his master
lol
ima rip ya legs off; twisting ya bones n making ya thighs bend
until there no support, on either side like a neutral alliance
smart but not harsh
watch me dump on you..i'll present this beating n he'll stand still
cuz we can see all you write is trash man, n is all you'll ever land Fil
so-so
also this guys a dickrider..loves the cock stupid
everyone knows F's on more tops then a bad student
meh
V/Miracle
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His rhyme schemes elementary so I'll break him down easily
He'll realize i'm not J/K, after i L M like i should've did NO P
..uuh..What?
Miracle's mother worked the corner of 34th Street..... rain, hail, sleet, snow
His biological dad's a mystery, but your piggy bank stayed full of John Doe
lame..Doesn't make sense.
This battle's like his entry into this Earth..... call it a breeched birth
Cause before you come out ahead, you're likely to see da feet first
not bad.
I'll Kanye his face... he'll experience Hellmann by the time I'm finished
Have Miracle talking through the wire hospitalized inside a Mayo Clinic
not feelin it
Scared to a pyr, amid top-tier battlers cuz your whole style is wack*
I'll put an O. in M. and make his body collapse like the fall of Mubarak
again..what??
vs.
he hangs out when beefs not popping n is scared to hold a weapon
so everyone know when its time to get SIRIUS, you'll never hear from FM
lol. Liked the wordplay
hes home w/ the doors locked. so ill burn it down, u'll see a disaster
till its only ash, sitting there------> like pikachu bounced on his master
pokemon reference...meh.
ima rip ya legs off; twisting ya bones n making ya thighs bend
until there no support, on either side like a neutral alliance
too streched. no contact.
watch me dump on you..i'll present this beating n he'll stand still
cuz we can see all you write is trash man, n is all you'll ever land Fil
not bad
also this guys a dickrider..loves the cock stupid
everyone knows F's on more tops then a bad student
lol
v/miracle
risin
feel like some of filthy mcnasty's rhymes are forced and dont flow well... down easily - did NO P, sleet snow - john doe, style is wack - fall of Mubarak.. its choppy. trying to come up with punches is one thing, coming up with punches and making it have a fluent rhyme scheme is another. the Mayonaise bars were probly his best, but theyve coulda been written better. fell short on his closer.
miracle worked out a pretty good verse. the FM bar was dope, the land Fil bar. Pretty hard hitting verse. Ending fell off but by then he didnt really need a good one to win it. Nice job.
v/miracle
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