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This punk is stumped, posts talkin guns like he keep heaters
When I bet he cant even get shotguns in his moms beamer
Still it seems like cats on your dick, but I bet that dudes frontin
So watch how im quick to stop such early buzz like the snooze button
Do somethin, say somethinnn son im high on cred
But only time i listen to FM is when my ipods dead
And i hate the radio, plus im busy with a bunch of broads myself
Only true attention filthy will ever get is from the board of health
He’ll fake all hard but, couldn’t match these bars
Maybe mimic, but that’s topps like baseball cards
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Last edited by The Incredible Hulk; November 21st, 2010 at 06:55 PM
Biography:
Enjoys long walks on the beat
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/member.php?u=137372
You enjoy walking the beat, but scared to roam alone at night
When he pulls them thangs out, he's aiming hard with flashlights
This flaming fag articulates how he gets down during male orgiesOriginally Posted by SirReaL
Mushroom stamps 2 the face produce more hits than Barry Gordy
New Edition 2 the noob division attempting what other gays can't
Attitude 'Do What I Gotta Do', sensitive nigga.......Ralph Tresvant
Sir's Baskin in fame........I'm Robbin him once he steps in the place
Kick 'Flava in Ya Ear' 31 times til u resemble Craig Mack in the face
He's living a dream thinking he's built 2 battle any Skillful opponent
Knock him into reality...1 punch'll wake him out this SirReal moment*
*Surreal
This punk is stumped, posts talkin guns like he keep heaters
When I bet he cant even get shotguns in his moms beamer
not feeling this
Still it seems like cats on your dick, but I bet that dudes frontin
So watch how im quick to stop such early buzz like the snooze button
nice wordplay, ok punch
Do somethin, say somethinnn son im high on cred
But only time i listen to FM is when my ipods dead
okay
And i hate the radio, plus im busy with a bunch of broads myself
Only true attention filthy will ever get is from the board of health
lol, funny
He’ll fake all hard but, couldn’t match these bars
Maybe mimic, but that’s topps like baseball cards
wording hurt here
vs.
You enjoy walking the beat, but scared to roam alone at night
When he pulls them thangs out, he's aiming hard with flashlights
meh... ok opener
This flaming fag articulates how he gets down during male orgies
Mushroom stamps 2 the face produce more hits than Barry Gordy
not feeling this
New Edition 2 the noob division attempting what other gays can't
Attitude 'Do What I Gotta Do', sensitive nigga.......Ralph Tresvant
wording hurt you here
Sir's Baskin in fame........I'm Robbin him once he steps in the place
Kick 'Flava in Ya Ear' 31 times til u resemble Craig Mack in the face
decent
He's living a dream thinking he's built 2 battle any Skillful opponent
Knock him into reality...1 punch'll wake him out this SirReal moment
not the best closer
punches won this for sirreal, Filthys wording hurt him too much in
this battle.
vote- Sirreal
DayumNation
And i hate the radio, plus im busy with a bunch of broads myself
Only true attention filthy will ever get is from the board of health
vs.
He's living a dream thinking he's built 2 battle any Skillful opponent
Knock him into reality...1 punch'll wake him out this SirReal moment*
Ima have to go with filthy on this it felt like he was more directive towards his opponent... and not 100% sure but i think i seen this line before...
So watch how im quick to stop such early buzz like the snooze button
just sayin...no offence..
Still it seems like cats on your dick, but I bet that dudes frontin
So watch how im quick to stop such early buzz like the snooze button
VS
He's living a dream thinking he's built 2 battle any Skillful opponent
Knock him into reality...1 punch'll wake him out this SirReal moment*
..Every line from both of you was nice..but i think Sir Real Edged it
V.SirReal
...Onslaught!
This punk is stumped, posts talkin guns like he keep heaters
When I bet he cant even get shotguns in his moms beamer
lol
Still it seems like cats on your dick, but I bet that dudes frontin
So watch how im quick to stop such early buzz like the snooze button
meh
Do somethin, say somethinnn son im high on cred
But only time i listen to FM is when my ipods dead
not bad actually
And i hate the radio, plus im busy with a bunch of broads myself
Only true attention filthy will ever get is from the board of health
so-so
He’ll fake all hard but, couldn’t match these bars
Maybe mimic, but that’s topps like baseball cards
ehh weakish closer
vs
You enjoy walking the beat, but scared to roam alone at night
When he pulls them thangs out, he's aiming hard with flashlights
ehh
This flaming fag articulates how he gets down during male orgies
Mushroom stamps 2 the face produce more hits than Barry Gordy
not feeling it
New Edition 2 the noob division attempting what other gays can't
Attitude 'Do What I Gotta Do', sensitive nigga.......Ralph Tresvant
weak
Sir's Baskin in fame........I'm Robbin him once he steps in the place
Kick 'Flava in Ya Ear' 31 times til u resemble Craig Mack in the face
ehh
He's living a dream thinking he's built 2 battle any Skillful opponent
Knock him into reality...1 punch'll wake him out this SirReal moment
could of done better with the concept imo
V/SirReal
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...277/index.html
This punk is stumped, posts talkin guns like he keep heaters
When I bet he cant even get shotguns in his moms beamer
Eh not feeling it.
Still it seems like cats on your dick, but I bet that dudes frontin
So watch how im quick to stop such early buzz like the snooze button
This woulda been better if you worded better
Do somethin, say somethinnn son im high on cred
But only time i listen to FM is when my ipods dead
Not bad, I liked this line.
And i hate the radio, plus im busy with a bunch of broads myself
Only true attention filthy will ever get is from the board of health
Funny.
He’ll fake all hard but, couldn’t match these bars
Maybe mimic, but that’s topps like baseball cards
Nah.
vs.
You enjoy walking the beat, but scared to roam alone at night
When he pulls them thangs out, he's aiming hard with flashlights
Nah.
This flaming fag articulates how he gets down during male orgies
Mushroom stamps 2 the face produce more hits than Barry Gordy
Alright I guess
New Edition 2 the noob division attempting what other gays can't
Attitude 'Do What I Gotta Do', sensitive nigga.......Ralph Tresvant
Coulda been worded better
Sir's Baskin in fame........I'm Robbin him once he steps in the place
Kick 'Flava in Ya Ear' 31 times til u resemble Craig Mack in the face
Decent, not bad
He's living a dream thinking he's built 2 battle any Skillful opponent
Knock him into reality...1 punch'll wake him out this SirReal moment
Kinda wack way to finish
Vote: SirReal. The iPod line edged it for me.
This punk is stumped, posts talkin guns like he keep heaters
When I bet he cant even get shotguns in his moms beamer
nice opener, nice jab
Still it seems like cats on your dick, but I bet that dudes frontin
So watch how im quick to stop such early buzz like the snooze button
not feeling this one
Do somethin, say somethinnn son im high on cred
But only time i listen to FM is when my ipods dead
nice nameplay, nice flow
And i hate the radio, plus im busy with a bunch of broads myself
Only true attention filthy will ever get is from the board of health
alright bar
He’ll fake all hard but, couldn’t match these bars
Maybe mimic, but that’s topps like baseball cards
umm not too great of a closer
You enjoy walking the beat, but scared to roam alone at night
When he pulls them thangs out, he's aiming hard with flashlights
alright opener, not great
This flaming fag articulates how he gets down during male orgies
Mushroom stamps 2 the face produce more hits than Barry Gordy
hes getting poked by dicks..... alright cool cool
New Edition 2 the noob division attempting what other gays can't
Attitude 'Do What I Gotta Do', sensitive nigga.......Ralph Tresvant
damn this had potential, I think it should have been flipped,
the punch is the first line, IMO
Sir's Baskin in fame........I'm Robbin him once he steps in the place
Kick 'Flava in Ya Ear' 31 times til u resemble Craig Mack in the face
I like these concepts, like the first line, the punch didnt sting tho
He's living a dream thinking he's built 2 battle any Skillful opponent
Knock him into reality...1 punch'll wake him out this SirReal moment*
yep, nice closer
Damn Filthy you think outside the box homie, your missing the punch element though, practice more, Im doing the same. So dont get defensive, I actually think with the concepts you had on set up lines, if executed right you taken this no prob. Sir had 2 nice bars, some were lame though, but the actual punchlines were nice.
V-Sir
