Lightweight Promotion Match (OPEN 4 VOTES)

[Uncle Sam]

OATMEAL
VS.
STYLIZED




Check in due tuesday 11:59 pm

Line Minimum 14
Max 20 per team mate

Due date is friday night 11:59 pm

You will not get promoted with no show verse
If you no show your out for the next months cycle

1st person to drop sets the lines required
2nd must match this

Nobody may edit their verse after the 1st vote

Any voting exclusions must be posted in original check in

GOOD LUCK

[oatmeal]

hello

[Rapstyles]

hello

Santana can keep out

[Rapstyles]

Goodluck

Oatmeal to Personal;
Jesus broke bread and all, but not even he'll be my equal
it'll take a miracle to shut him up...so I'll break Person to people
gay marriage is legal in Massachusetts, it might hurt to accept it
but I don't hate on those who crave dick...it's just a Per$onal preference

 

I keep my drama off the net, whack verses? no reason to be afraid son..
..So I shouldn't take those nameplays Personal..
Considering you beat him with a verse full of played ones
BlockOps geek to the fullest, your wifey hasn't left home since the opening 
N so I don't even need a heartbeat monitor to sensor fatass approaching
You're on the freakiest shit, nothin could help but magic.. 
Cause this dude saw a guy on hard in a hoodie n instantly wanted to jacket
There prolly ain't an age limit for the kids u love, s'all true, fo'real.. 
Cause even the youngest of children are now wanting to spoon oatmeal
Oats is just a nobody, spits game to the girls and they reply with a "bitch please"
..See, Im Garnett and your Charlie Villanueva... 
The way you're just a cancer to this league
Sucha dumbass too, flippin out, but I'd rather foldem dead   
..I told him to Boost his lyrics..
He switched cell services and sent his verses with mobile web

[oatmeal]

Top spots mine... Well, after oatmeal beats me and I stay in LW..

2nd should do for now

I don't know why you're gassed, has anyone seen the people he kills?
at least you agree with the rest of us; we don't believe in your skills
you're not gonna go deep in this unless I show you how to
you could say "that's what she said," but she don't say shit about you
Style's been feeling curious, and he's straight he hopes
but its clear your sexuality is as suspect as AT's votes
and I'm sure you think it means "you'd be dope if you tweaked some stuff"
but when we say "shorten your bars"...its so we don't have to read as much
to find a similar generic style you wouldn't have to search very far
but your no-name punches are fine, cuz thats what my personals are
congrats on 50 wins, man, I'm glad you eventually got it
and its probably smart to flaunt it...since it doesn't mention your losses


good luck

[KnowP]

keep my drama off the net, whack verses? no reason to be afraid son..
..So I shouldn't take those nameplays Personal..
Considering you beat him with a verse full of played ones
---aight
BlockOps geek to the fullest, your wifey hasn't left home since the opening
N so I don't even need a heartbeat monitor to sensor fatass approaching
---nah
You're on the freakiest shit, nothin could help but magic..
Cause this dude saw a guy on hard in a hoodie n instantly wanted to jacket
---this went no where
There prolly ain't an age limit for the kids u love, s'all true, fo'real..
Cause even the youngest of children are now wanting to spoon oatmeal
---meh
Oats is just a nobody, spits game to the girls and they reply with a "bitch please"
..See, Im Garnett and your Charlie Villanueva...
The way you're just a cancer to this league
---ok
Sucha dumbass too, flippin out, but I'd rather foldem dead
..I told him to Boost his lyrics..
He switched cell services and sent his verses with mobile web
----NICE!


vs

I don't know why you're gassed, has anyone seen the people he kills?
at least you agree with the rest of us; we don't believe in your skills
---ok
you're not gonna go deep in this unless I show you how to
you could say "that's what she said," but she don't say shit about you
---nice
Style's been feeling curious, and he's straight he hopes
but its clear your sexuality is as suspect as AT's votes
---lol
and I'm sure you think it means "you'd be dope if you tweaked some stuff"
but when we say "shorten your bars"...its so we don't have to read as much
---aight
to find a similar generic style you wouldn't have to search very far
but your no-name punches are fine, cuz thats what my personals are
---nah
congrats on 50 wins, man, I'm glad you eventually got it
and its probably smart to flaunt it...since it doesn't mention your losses
---meh


Stylz verse wasnt consistent. some punches were forced and a couple were blah
oats had the funnier more creative verse here so he gets it

v. oats

[Tony20]

I keep my drama off the net, whack verses? no reason to be afraid son..
..So I shouldn't take those nameplays Personal..
Considering you beat him with a verse full of played ones
this was alright.
There prolly ain't an age limit for the kids u love, s'all true, fo'real..
Cause even the youngest of children are now wanting to spoon oatmeal
lol.

v

Style's been feeling curious, and he's straight he hopes
but its clear your sexuality is as suspect as AT's votes
lol this was cool.
to find a similar generic style you wouldn't have to search very far
but your no-name punches are fine, cuz thats what my personals are
this was okay.

This battle was alright, I guess. some of your guys wording didn't connect too well but you still had some cool shit. I feel as though Stylez misses hit a little bit harder than Oats. Quotables were even and Style was a little bit more consistent. v/ Style

[A.T.]

I'll edit this with my "suspect" vote when I get home. Lol

I keep my drama off the net, whack verses? no reason to be afraid son..
..So I shouldn't take those nameplays Personal..
Considering you beat him with a verse full of played ones
decent
BlockOps geek to the fullest, your wifey hasn't left home since the opening
N so I don't even need a heartbeat monitor to sensor fatass approaching
lol
You're on the freakiest shit, nothin could help but magic..
Cause this dude saw a guy on hard in a hoodie n instantly wanted to jacket
meh
There prolly ain't an age limit for the kids u love, s'all true, fo'real..
Cause even the youngest of children are now wanting to spoon oatmeal
ok name play
Oats is just a nobody, spits game to the girls and they reply with a "bitch please"
..See, Im Garnett and your Charlie Villanueva...
The way you're just a cancer to this league
decent
Sucha dumbass too, flippin out, but I'd rather foldem dead
..I told him to Boost his lyrics..
He switched cell services and sent his verses with mobile web
nice

vs.

I don't know why you're gassed, has anyone seen the people he kills?
at least you agree with the rest of us; we don't believe in your skills
nice flip on the personal
you're not gonna go deep in this unless I show you how to
you could say "that's what she said," but she don't say shit about you
good
Style's been feeling curious, and he's straight he hopes
but its clear your sexuality is as suspect as AT's votes
OTHER THAN THE LOW-BLOW... this was funny
and I'm sure you think it means "you'd be dope if you tweaked some stuff"
but when we say "shorten your bars"...its so we don't have to read as much
decent, could be worded better
to find a similar generic style you wouldn't have to search very far
but your no-name punches are fine, cuz thats what my personals are
decent
congrats on 50 wins, man, I'm glad you eventually got it
and its probably smart to flaunt it...since it doesn't mention your losses
ok...could be worded better

overall this was pretty close- both had a few quotables, both had misses
due to wording. So basically it comes down to consistancy, and in that
aspect I have to give it to Oats... even thought the fucker dissed me, lol.

vote- Oats

[Switch.]

There prolly ain't an age limit for the kids u love, s'all true, fo'real..
Cause even the youngest of children are now wanting to spoon oatmeal
Sucha dumbass too, flippin out, but I'd rather foldem dead
..I told him to Boost his lyrics..
He switched cell services and sent his verses with mobile web

vs

you're not gonna go deep in this unless I show you how to
you could say "that's what she said," but she don't say shit about you
Style's been feeling curious, and he's straight he hopes
but its clear your sexuality is as suspect as AT's votes
to find a similar generic style you wouldn't have to search very far
but your no-name punches are fine, cuz thats what my personals are

Not a bad battle, both had some decent lines and shit but i feel oats edged it for more quotables and he generally came more personal and wittier with his punches. No hate to either. Gl to both.

v/oats

[MV]

Stylized
I keep my drama off the net, whack verses? no reason to be afraid son..
..So I shouldn't take those nameplays Personal..
Considering you beat him with a verse full of played ones
ok
BlockOps geek to the fullest, your wifey hasn't left home since the opening
N so I don't even need a heartbeat monitor to sensor fatass approaching
lol...even tho there is no heartbeat monitor in black ops
You're on the freakiest shit, nothin could help but magic..
Cause this dude saw a guy on hard in a hoodie n instantly wanted to jacket
ok word play here i liked this one
There prolly ain't an age limit for the kids u love, s'all true, fo'real..
Cause even the youngest of children are now wanting to spoon oatmeal
Dosia used a line like this awhile back but his was worded better imo
Oats is just a nobody, spits game to the girls and they reply with a "bitch please"
..See, Im Garnett and your Charlie Villanueva...
The way you're just a cancer to this league
ok hi here
Sucha dumbass too, flippin out, but I'd rather foldem dead
..I told him to Boost his lyrics..
He switched cell services and sent his verses with mobile web
wasnt feeling the closer

vs

Oatmeal

I don't know why you're gassed, has anyone seen the people he kills?
at least you agree with the rest of us; we don't believe in your skills
ok
you're not gonna go deep in this unless I show you how to
you could say "that's what she said," but she don't say shit about you
nice
Style's been feeling curious, and he's straight he hopes
but its clear your sexuality is as suspect as AT's votes
^^^^ lol i liked this one
and I'm sure you think it means "you'd be dope if you tweaked some stuff"
but when we say "shorten your bars"...its so we don't have to read as much
ok
to find a similar generic style you wouldn't have to search very far
but your no-name punches are fine, cuz thats what my personals are
descent hit here
congrats on 50 wins, man, I'm glad you eventually got it
and its probably smart to flaunt it...since it doesn't mention your losses
ehh i see where u were going but it just didnt hit that hard


descent read here seems like Stylized was more hit and miss. oats was def lvl across the board with his punches.


v/Oatmeal

[The Archetype]

I keep my drama off the net, whack verses? no reason to be afraid son..
..So I shouldn't take those nameplays Personal..
Considering you beat him with a verse full of played ones
decent...
BlockOps geek to the fullest, your wifey hasn't left home since the opening
N so I don't even need a heartbeat monitor to sensor fatass approaching
the concept is ok, but the punch misses... plus the wordplay comes off awkward
You're on the freakiest shit, nothin could help but magic..
Cause this dude saw a guy on hard in a hoodie n instantly wanted to jacket
same shit as the previous punch...
There prolly ain't an age limit for the kids u love, s'all true, fo'real..
Cause even the youngest of children are now wanting to spoon oatmeal
decent...
Oats is just a nobody, spits game to the girls and they reply with a "bitch please"
..See, Im Garnett and your Charlie Villanueva...
The way you're just a cancer to this league
eh...
Sucha dumbass too, flippin out, but I'd rather foldem dead
..I told him to Boost his lyrics..
He switched cell services and sent his verses with mobile web
ok...

vs

I don't know why you're gassed, has anyone seen the people he kills?
at least you agree with the rest of us; we don't believe in your skills
decent...
you're not gonna go deep in this unless I show you how to
you could say "that's what she said," but she don't say shit about you
ok...
Style's been feeling curious, and he's straight he hopes
but its clear your sexuality is as suspect as AT's votes
funny, but i've seen and used shit like this before...
and I'm sure you think it means "you'd be dope if you tweaked some stuff"
but when we say "shorten your bars"...its so we don't have to read as much
eh...
to find a similar generic style you wouldn't have to search very far
but your no-name punches are fine, cuz thats what my personals are
ok...
congrats on 50 wins, man, I'm glad you eventually got it
and its probably smart to flaunt it...since it doesn't mention your losses
eh...

vote oat

[King]

I keep my drama off the net, whack verses? no reason to be afraid son..
..So I shouldn't take those nameplays Personal..
Considering you beat him with a verse full of played ones

vs

you're not gonna go deep in this unless I show you how to
you could say "that's what she said," but she don't say shit about you

much better battle than the quotes suggest. but overall oats verse seemed more polished. better wording and better attempts throughout. style had some ok attempts, but a couple complete misses also.

so

V/oat

[Uncle Sam]

Oatmeal wins and is promoted to HW