-10 lines
-No crew votes or D/R votes
-Verse & two links required within 24 hours of check-in
-10 lines
-No crew votes or D/R votes
-Verse & two links required within 24 hours of check-in
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
[YOUTUBE]4IbitVPIRwc[/YOUTUBE]
check
let me paint a picture for ya, the beginning of the one we call...Filthy McNasty
theres a circle around us, my opponent raises an open hand to his grill
this white thug asks "what's cracka-lackin?" to which the answer is skill
he's telling everybody he's a hustler, we can tell by the mack he busts
but the crowd already knows, he only hustles when he tries to catch the bus
the bell rings, I give him a 1-2, the pain can be seen in his eyes
everyone sees his shit is half-ass, when he sits he leans to the side
the crowd starts to call him Filthy McNasty as he begins to taste dirt
see he really did beat me to the ground, as I threw him down face first
the crowd lifts me in victory, but I throw a paper that I rolled into a bunch on his chest
on the address to my boxing gym's facebook, to help his punches connect
In the Society I'm from, real mean don't wach tennisOriginally Posted by oatmeal
I'll pistol whip this prick II times, similar to Chauncey from Menace...
....til his face turns the color purple like Grimace
I aspire to be the greatest of all time, you're simply a four-letter fill in like _ O A T
Now B, can't you C, when I give your girl the D, that fucking with M, she will no longer acknowledge your G*
Your girl told me why she left you; I really couldn't believe the shit that she said
Her Oatmeal was always done in an instant, plus he prefers to break fast in bed
See she was giving me free admissions, going 'down under' as I got the Australian Open and caked her
It's far too easy to take her when this faker shares the same facial features as the logo from Quaker
On this battle shit, I'll sink your battleship turn him into a cast-a-way for trying to be the nicest
Cause in a league known as FL, there's no way that OAT could stay afloat even with flotation devices
*four letter words ending with oat
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
[YOUTUBE]4IbitVPIRwc[/YOUTUBE]
I'm on the road now, but will have my two votes up within 24 hours...
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
[YOUTUBE]4IbitVPIRwc[/YOUTUBE]
Votes below. . . My first line should read men and not mean.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...03/index2.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...51/index2.html
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
[YOUTUBE]4IbitVPIRwc[/YOUTUBE]
theres a circle around us, my opponent raises an open hand to his grill
this white thug asks "what's cracka-lackin?" to which the answer is skill
meh
he's telling everybody he's a hustler, we can tell by the mack he busts
but the crowd already knows, he only hustles when he tries to catch the bus
funny but not really strong
the bell rings, I give him a 1-2, the pain can be seen in his eyes
everyone sees his shit is half-ass, when he sits he leans to the side
ehh
the crowd starts to call him Filthy McNasty as he begins to taste dirt
see he really did beat me to the ground, as I threw him down face first
not bad
the crowd lifts me in victory, but I throw a paper that I rolled into a bunch on his chest
on the address to my boxing gym's facebook, to help his punches connect
too wordy imo
vs
In the Society I'm from, real men don't wach tennis
I'll pistol whip this prick II times, similar to Chauncey from Menace...
....til his face turns the color purple like Grimace
not feeling it and hella stretched
I aspire to be the greatest of all time, you're simply a four-letter fill in like _ O A T
Now B, can't you C, when I give your girl the D, that fucking with M, she will no longer acknowledge your G*
way too wordy and the punch was lacking
Your girl told me why she left you; I really couldn't believe the shit that she said
Her Oatmeal was always done in an instant, plus he prefers to break fast in bed
not bad even tho you wrote "he prefers" lol
See she was giving me free admissions, going 'down under' as I got the Australian Open and caked her
It's far too easy to take her when this faker shares the same facial features as the logo from Quaker
weak and too stretched...you gotta work on reducing your words per line ratio homie.
On this battle shit, I'll sink your battleship turn him into a cast-a-way for trying to be the nicest
Cause in a league known as FL, there's no way that OAT could stay afloat even with flotation devices
ehh closer
V/Oatmeal
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...572/index.html
Oatmeal
theres a circle around us, my opponent raises an open hand to his grill
this white thug asks "what's cracka-lackin?" to which the answer is skill
lol good set up and punch on this one.
he's telling everybody he's a hustler, we can tell by the mack he busts
but the crowd already knows, he only hustles when he tries to catch the bus
okay descent bar here
the bell rings, I give him a 1-2, the pain can be seen in his eyes
everyone sees his shit is half-ass, when he sits he leans to the side
WP but played
the crowd starts to call him Filthy McNasty as he begins to taste dirt
see he really did beat me to the ground, as I threw him down face first
wasnt feeling this one
the crowd lifts me in victory, but I throw a paper that I rolled into a bunch on his chest
on the address to my boxing gym's facebook, to help his punches connect
played concept the whole punches connet thing needs to have an original twist if u are going to use it
vs
Filthy
In the Society I'm from, real mean don't wach tennis
I'll pistol whip this prick II times, similar to Chauncey from Menace...
....til his face turns the color purple like Grimace
i didnt see a punch here
I aspire to be the greatest of all time, you're simply a four-letter fill in like _ O A T
Now B, can't you C, when I give your girl the D, that fucking with M, she will no longer acknowledge your G*
very wordy i even lost track of what i was reading during the last line.
Your girl told me why she left you; I really couldn't believe the shit that she said
Her Oatmeal was always done in an instant, plus he prefers to break fast in bed
rofl even tho u put "he" instead of "she" *freudian slip* this was prolly the best line in the battle
See she was giving me free admissions, going 'down under' as I got the Australian Open and caked her
It's far too easy to take her when this faker shares the same facial features as the logo from Quaker
okay
On this battle shit, I'll sink your battleship turn him into a cast-a-way for trying to be the nicest
Cause in a league known as FL, there's no way that OAT could stay afloat even with flotation devices
on this battle shit, i'll sink ur battleship lol i dont know why but that makes me laugh. this punch should have been worded different an it would have hit hard. wasnt feeling it as is.
I Think this battle was close.oatmeal had some played lines and filthy was just 2 wordy. i have 2 quotables from each. the deciding factor to me was that i gave the LOTB to Filthy.
V/Filthy
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
up...
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
[YOUTUBE]4IbitVPIRwc[/YOUTUBE]
he's telling everybody he's a hustler, we can tell by the mack he busts
but the crowd already knows, he only hustles when he tries to catch the bus
vs
On this battle shit, I'll sink your battleship turn him into a cast-a-way for trying to be the nicest
Cause in a league known as FL, there's no way that OAT could stay afloat even with flotation devices
*four letter words ending with oat
these were my favorite lines from this battle... it was pretty good and i think oats verse was definitely a little easier to read i think mcnasty your stuff was good a little stretched and too filler-y but anyways keep elevating overall nice battle my vote goes to oat
gup
theres a circle around us, my opponent raises an open hand to his grill
this white thug asks "what's cracka-lackin?" to which the answer is skill
nah..
he's telling everybody he's a hustler, we can tell by the mack he busts
but the crowd already knows, he only hustles when he tries to catch the bus
liked only the second part of the second line
the bell rings, I give him a 1-2, the pain can be seen in his eyes
everyone sees his shit is half-ass, when he sits he leans to the side
not bad..
the crowd starts to call him Filthy McNasty as he begins to taste dirt
see he really did beat me to the ground, as I threw him down face first
only the first line
the crowd lifts me in victory, but I throw a paper that I rolled into a bunch on his chest
on the address to my boxing gym's facebook, to help his punches connect
that was funny. I actually laughed
Vs.
In the Society I'm from, real mean don't wach tennis
I'll pistol whip this prick II times, similar to Chauncey from Menace...
....til his face turns the color purple like Grimace
nice..
I aspire to be the greatest of all time, you're simply a four-letter fill in like _ O A T
Now B, can't you C, when I give your girl the D, that fucking with M, she will no longer acknowledge your G*
fucking epic shit, my fav part
Your girl told me why she left you; I really couldn't believe the shit that she said
Her Oatmeal was always done in an instant, plus he prefers to break fast in bed
not bad..
See she was giving me free admissions, going 'down under' as I got the Australian Open and caked her
It's far too easy to take her when this faker shares the same facial features as the logo from Quaker
that punch with the Quaker was hell funny
On this battle shit, I'll sink your battleship turn him into a cast-a-way for trying to be the nicest
Cause in a league known as FL, there's no way that OAT could stay afloat even with flotation devices
tough ending. good punch
hands down, McNasty for me.
2-2... upp
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
[YOUTUBE]4IbitVPIRwc[/YOUTUBE]
the crowd starts to call him Filthy McNasty as he begins to taste dirt
see he really did beat me to the ground, as I threw him down face first
the crowd lifts me in victory, but I throw a paper that I rolled into a bunch on his chest
on the address to my boxing gym's facebook, to help his punches connect
vs
Your girl told me why she left you; I really couldn't believe the shit that she said
Her Oatmeal was always done in an instant, plus he prefers to break fast in bed
i got oatmeal on this one with harder hitting punches, more multis, and a better flow. mcnasty your lines were way too long. v/oatmeal
Posting Rules
