Wk 6: Smog(2-1) Vs Grimmzreaper(0-0)[open for votes]

[Spree]

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@Smog

If some one signs in for this week they're taking my spot

[Smog]

Well hot damn... 12 tops... cool?

[Spree]

@GrimmZReaper

[GrimmZReaper]

0-0?...that means im undefeated

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[Smog]

12 done

[Spree]

12 done

Pm it if you won't be around

[Smog]

Was actually 14... sent to @Kill Spree

[GrimmZReaper]

Pm it if you won't be around

ill be posting tonight when I get in.... around 9

[GrimmZReaper]

Your forces are weak, you don't stand a chance.. So you're lacking the 'might'
The only time we hear a decent bar, king.. is when your making up for having no bite

FOH..u couldn't clash wit Mike so u quit like a faggot right?
even started to label bar, king.. Just Based off 'UR'verses not having byte..

Smog vs art

heard u recycle? Prolly byte too so trust Smog needa slay kid
Cuz u can bet any verse Art supplies us with... has been cut copied n pasted

Lmao, look at this fuck…hypocrite much??....3 years of ya’ll buying the bluff from this fraud
With nothing solid to show, but honestly bro…who the fuck would expect to get substance from Smog??

You went from rabid savage…to has been status…made a splash but our only verdict from it...
Olympic diver..u climbed that ladder, stepped up the board…just to show us a perfect plummet

Whats worst to stomach, your downfall gets overshadowed by your whole gay tone
Now This white bitch dyin’… since aint no mo’ juice behind them bars….O.J. HOME!


That's ya daughter in the pic? I'll amber alert the bitch...machete across her belly
we talkin 'bout the same girl right? then she getting kidnapped & burned....Usher/Kelly

get a head shot..& ya wife leaving toe tagged & Zipped if ya BaeNblack graces
I'd line 'em up, we'll see your top out and your other half in the bag..., like potato sack races

the compassion is gone..fuck a target, THIS red dot on his circle when Ratchets is DRAWN
Catch ‘em snoozing and wash ‘em till his spirit float…he went to Bed, Bath, & Beyond

nowadays.. gun bars are quite the rage, like u bang on ya block...we don't Buy Charades
Plus, where im from..a bunch of fags reppin they flag in the streets….sound like a pride parade

[Smog]

GrimmZReaper aka BoyzNBlack

C'mon dawg,

Dirt on graves? Calzone? GameStop? U don't think that^ work is played,bitch
If it's used Reap Eats it, then got the nerve sayin all Uve heards the same shit

Originally posted by Grimmzreaper
Check my bullet count…Maestro, Caged, 18 other nameless bums, plus Sprees on that list

don't claim u wanna compete, quit the games bitch, it's lame ta front u a beast
When u stalk every noob in bitch slap, then admit that theres 21 nameless bums that u beat
But when u face skill this place chills, ur net buzz stops drawin crowds
3 straight W's might of started ur hype.. but we allllll seen DOT calm it down
Ur shits choppy n overworded, gettin thru it's like sitting in a waiting room
U rap like ur in trouble wit moms, Boy u gotta whoooole lotta explainin to do
I'll attack ur kidneys liver n ribs, leave u wit a hospital tab ur stressed to get
Funny I'll be workin on the side so much.. yet u the 1 in need of extra chips
Fuck this match it's unfair, a Boss wit art vs. a kid wit sloppy bars
There's no comparin Boyz ta Men.. cuz u ain't NEVER drop shit that's off the charts
FUCK religion, what I tote at waist'll blow ya face fa loud talkin
I'm sayin, when this bitch peel, Grimm.. it'll take u to that holy place without walkin

[Wuxia]

Smog vs art







Lmao, look at this fuck…hypocrite much??....3 years of ya’ll buying the bluff from this fraud
With nothing solid to show, but honestly bro…who the fuck would expect to get substance from Smog??

☆☆☆☆☆ just wanted to say i noticed you shortened the length of your bars, now your bars have better impact, you just have to stop putting stuff in bold and italics lol it really isn't necessary


You went from rabid savage…to has been status…made a splash but our only verdict from it...
Olympic diver..u climbed that ladder, stepped up the board…just to show us a perfect plummet

☆☆☆☆☆

Whats worst to stomach, your downfall gets overshadowed by your whole gay tone
Now This white bitch dyin’… since aint no mo’ juice behind them bars….O.J. HOME!

☆☆☆☆☆

That's ya daughter in the pic? I'll amber alert the bitch...machete across her belly
we talkin 'bout the same girl right? then she getting kidnapped & burned....Usher/Kelly

☆☆☆☆☆

get a head shot..& ya wife leaving toe tagged & Zipped if ya BaeNblack graces
I'd line 'em up, we'll see your top out and your other half in the bag..., like potato sack races

☆☆☆☆☆

the compassion is gone..fuck a target, THIS red dot on his circle when Ratchets is DRAWN
Catch ‘em snoozing and wash ‘em till his spirit float…he went to Bed, Bath, & Beyond

☆☆☆

nowadays.. gun bars are quite the rage, like u bang on ya block...we don't Buy Charades
Plus, where im from..a bunch of fags reppin they flag in the streets….sound like a pride parade

☆☆☆

GrimmZReaper aka BoyzNBlack

C'mon dawg,

Dirt on graves? Calzone? GameStop? U don't think that^ work is played,bitch
If it's used Reap Eats it, then got the nerve sayin all Uve heards the same shit

☆☆☆☆☆





don't claim u wanna compete, quit the games bitch, it's lame ta front u a beast
When u stalk every noob in bitch slap, then admit that theres 21 nameless bums that u beat

☆☆☆☆☆ dope

But when u face skill this place chills, ur net buzz stops drawin crowds
3 straight W's might of started ur hype.. but we allllll seen DOT calm it down

☆☆☆☆☆ i've seen dot com used before but not as a personal against somebody else, you set this concept up perfectly

Ur shits choppy n overworded, gettin thru it's like sitting in a waiting room
U rap like ur in trouble wit moms, Boy u gotta whoooole lotta explainin to do

☆☆☆

I'll attack ur kidneys liver n ribs, leave u wit a hospital tab ur stressed to get
Funny I'll be workin on the side so much.. yet u the 1 in need of extra chips

☆☆☆☆☆

Fuck this match it's unfair, a Boss wit art vs. a kid wit sloppy bars
There's no comparin Boyz ta Men.. cuz u ain't NEVER drop shit that's off the charts

☆☆☆ boyz 2 men has been flipped alot, lessened the impact, still gave credit because the flip was kinda nice

FUCK religion, what I tote at waist'll blow ya face fa loud talkin
I'm sayin, when this bitch peel, Grimm.. it'll take u to that holy place without walkin

☆ pilgrim/peel grim is really forced, not to mention a played np on him

Boyz came pretty strong here with some nice concepts that were complemented with subtle hints and very well crafted. He started to fall off near the end but he was consistent nearly all the way through. The high-rated quotes in Smog's verse were fire. I think each of them were better than Boyz standouts because they were haymakers with serious force behind them. What fucked Smog up was the nameplays. They killed his momentum because they were all used before. If he would have replaced those 3 bars that had nameplays with the same material that was landing hard earlier in his verse he would of won.

v-boyznblack

[Notti]

Lmao, look at this fuck…hypocrite much??....3 years of ya’ll buying the bluff from this fraud
With nothing solid to show, but honestly bro…who the fuck would expect to get substance from Smog??
You went from rabid savage…to has been status…made a splash but our only verdict from it...
Olympic diver..u climbed that ladder, stepped up the board…just to show us a perfect plummet
Whats worst to stomach, your downfall gets overshadowed by your whole gay tone
Now This white bitch dyin’… since aint no mo’ juice behind them bars….O.J. HOME!

Vs

Dirt on graves? Calzone? GameStop? U don't think that^ work is played,bitch
If it's used Reap Eats it, then got the nerve sayin all Uve heards the same shit
don't claim u wanna compete, quit the games bitch, it's lame ta front u a beast
When u stalk every noob in bitch slap, then admit that theres 21 nameless bums that u beat
I'll attack ur kidneys liver n ribs, leave u wit a hospital tab ur stressed to get
Funny I'll be workin on the side so much.. yet u the 1 in need of extra chips

Hmm I got this tied in quotables at 3 a piece.. Pretty decent match and it really comes down to preference here. Out of all 6 of the quotables I felt that OJ line was the weakest. Aside from that, I felt grim had the better misses. With that being said

Vote grim

[Barcotic]

olympic diver
OJ home lotb this was fire

vs

repeats it
3 w's/dot calm
explainin to do lotb #2 damn

this was a pretty dope match tbh, props. I still think smog clearly got it tho
v/smog

[Letterman]

Tried to copy the bars but my phone isn't letting me right now

OJ Home
Usher/Kelly
Potato sack

Vs

Dot calm
Trouble wit moms
Working on the side

This was a pretty good battle. Pretty even but I edged BNB with slightly harder hitting lines

v/BNB

[Art.]

Olympic diver
Potatoes sack
Oj home

Vs

21 nameless bums
Dot calm
Explaining to do

Yeah I read this on Friday still tight .. gotta pick one in going boyz based on misses the misses on boys verse were lighter than smogs close battle but boys edged it out more consistency