I got down with a local cypher series and this is the first one I was in. It's the first video I've been in, so I wanna know what y'all think.
[youtube]WdIEhl1IfPI[/youtube]
I got down with a local cypher series and this is the first one I was in. It's the first video I've been in, so I wanna know what y'all think.
[youtube]WdIEhl1IfPI[/youtube]
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lol at you flying into the screen when the other cat finished. Skipped the other cats cause im about to have a shower. Listened to it twice. Iunno if thats was the best beat for you though. Seems not bad. but im not 100% sure if youre fully feeling the beat, but your flow works with it. Id have to listen to it more to pick it appart. Lyrics are decent.
props for getting out there. keep it up.
In terms of how you looking on camera. hmm. seems about right for the lyrics you spitting. is nice for your first time.
Last edited by Oxymoron; March 15th, 2014 at 04:27 AM
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shit was straight...
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As an overall video I think it was lame how they used a different beat for everybody, there no consistency. I was pretty bored up until Colorz came on cause everyone before him kinda did what I expected, tough guy bars with little intensity. Colors & your verse were good cept he looked stiff on the camera and that one shot where they had you against the truck I would had you look towards the camera not away and also vary the wardrobe in the different shots.
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@it's Moist I almost busted my ass on that part. I tripped over the other dudes foot after pushing my boy lol. And word, the beat was different. That's what we wanted though, we figured most people would try using hard beats and shit. I made the beat we used though, so I might like it a little more than most lol.
Thanks for the feedback fellas. @Pair-A-Dyce word I already thought about different wardrobes. we said we would do that when I do a full video for a song though. It woulda been too much work just for a 16 bar. I'm big, I hate changing in cars lol.
@Toobs thanks for peeping. Any advice on what I coulda done better? I had mad fun doing this one. But I've never done a video before so it was a learning experience remembering how we shot it and watching it edited.
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I couldn't veiw it. I wanna see it tho...
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Naw, I'm at the spot selling my rocks and the wifi is shitty.
Haha, careful.
Ah true. you made that. cool. That changes my mind a little. Props. Yeah its a little odd. I was expecting snares to hit in bits that they didn't. but that aint a bad thing.
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not really man...not my forte...never was a fan of music videos much...
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i thought the dude before colorz the dude wit the diverse hat was dope, thought colorz was dope not to ur part yet
nah u killed this, ur lyrics was fucking top notch n the best in the cypher
didnt liek the dude after u much
I wasn't a fan of the beat they had you on.. your video presence reminded me of early Snoop, almost as if you were uncomfortable looking at the camera. I skipped everyone else so no comment on them.
I didn't like the beat change for everybody. It threw me off and was inconsistent. Other than that, is it me or do you sound different in a video than you do when it's just audio? Your verse was straight, it didn't wow me but the video overall was very cool.
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