Jab -vs- Butcher

[Jab]

Check in when u see this link....Bwoi....

Aiiite????

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[Jab]

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[butcher]

checking in now beeyatch.......................................... ......................

and dont go offline again

[butcher]

hey j-a-b, dont eva test me/
its the butcha,come to slice and cook-ya/
noting but a pest to me, put jabs in your chest,lyrically/
bring a vest and a deadly weapon,
if you come to combat, otherwise keep steppin/
dy-nasty soldiers, is who im reppin/
allways roll heartless, i dont take exception/
chew bitches up, and shit 'em out my rectom/
so tell the rev unit, that you got stept-on/
your rymes dont stick, like writing on teflon

(the non stick coating on frying pans).

[Jab]

Butcher.....Tha only male who actually likes Ashton Kutcher....
You spit rhymes as if u got a cone up your ass,
Whats wrong dawg? Am i goin to fast...
You a butcher without a sausage and i shud know...
What can i saw bitch u wud of done better if u were a NO SHOW..
You talking bout bitches? only one u seen is ur relfect-ion
You chattin wid jab on tha REV UNIT - Connect-ion
Im a push u in tha right way give u sum Direct-ion
Cos looks like Dynasty** got a shit ass select-ion
So im a rest my mouth cos im hittin to hard....
If tha battle wasn't text IT BE NO HOSE BARRED...
Im a beat u like OJ beat his missus,
last thing im a say to u....BUTCHER DO THA DISHES
BITCH

***Dynasty is his "so called" Cru

[nolonger]

ite shit battle yall,
but jab gets this easy man, flow was ite structure got it and atleast an attempt at a punch........bit wak.butcher elavate alot man work on structure and punches.


hit this up dnt woz bout polls http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104426 .....................pz

[Jab]

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[Brethren]

Jab, you did good

Punches: Jab
Flow: Jab
Everything Else: Neither

Butcher.....Tha only male who actually likes Ashton Kutcher....
That was your best line, but if you re-worded it, it could've been a lot better.

Butcher, your verse just sucked.

Vote - Jab

PLEASE VOTE IN MY BATTLE, IN MY SIG

[Jab]

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[bloodymurder]

butcher
flow-2
meta-2
multi-1
punch-3
vocabs-2

jab
flow-3
meta-1
multi-1 (forced)
punch-2
vocabs-2

vote: butcher

please check out my battle:

[Jab]

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[butcher]

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[KaYNe]

I cant poll vote, but ima break it down for ya anyway.



Butcher, you had very few punches in this battle & the ones you did include were pretty weak. You talked way too much about yourself & wot u do to people which you from focusing on your opponent. Your flow was ok for most of the spit, but was off at points. Lack of metas, personals, wordplay..... but what you really need to work on is your punches.

Jab, that wasnt the greatest spit, but you did all that was needed. Punches were direct, although some werent that hard hitting. Personal was ok. Lacked metas & wordplay.
There was one only one MAJOR thing i saw wrong with the spit:
You a butcher without a sausage and i shud know...
^That line sounded gay

Vote: Jab



KaYNe -vs- Problem C
^ Could you do me a favour & drop a fair vote on this battle.

[Jab]

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[~King~cruncH~]

Jab got dis one, he flowed better, and had harder punches, but my vote doesnt count so w/e......

vote Jab

could u plz drop an honest vote on dis......

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104412