aight rules:
10-20 lines
he spits first
no time limit
no hate votes, etc...yall know how it is.
good luck
handcuffs
doc_knock
aight rules:
10-20 lines
he spits first
no time limit
no hate votes, etc...yall know how it is.
good luck
um...i guess hes a noshow?........................................... .................................................. .................................................. ...
I'm here, I'm here
checkin' in
spit in a few
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If brain cells were your slaves, you still couldn't be a mastermind,
you couldn't spit heat with coolness, if fire and ice intertwined,
I'm about to flatten your vision like contacts for the chinese,
I am about to stop your flow like a cardiovascular disease,
it's time to emarass you like kids having to shop with parents,
Then there friends see them tryin on clothes from clearance,
you couldn't lay the law, if you fucked 10 policeman,
my lyrics so hot, it'll make your brain start steamin',
you handle my shit, just like i removed your cornea,
can't really blame you, you're from California,
your life is on the line, yet there is no dial tone,
the heats getting to you in that temperate zone,
~peace~
that shit was the illest rhyme i ever heard dropped/
on the cutting floor that is, after the label leaves ya flopped/
im bout to cuff you to a brick, then ima laugh and watch you sink/
its so easy to beat ya i dont even got to think/
embarrassed? at what, your half-assed try to be sick?/
ive typed up iller battles than you with hoes suckin my dick/
and the only policeman ill fuck is strippers dressed in cop 'fits (outfits)/
gettin it from all the bitched when all u do is sit/
in a corner, by yourself, no fans, no love, no SHIT/
parental advisory my ass, you like a care bear little bitch/
so fuck ya stupid blabbing and yammering fakeass medical terms/
ima bury you so ugly you wont even be eaten by worms/
will ya body strewn with bullet holes, so many you barely mass (weigh)/
you roll ova in your grave every time you remember i kicked ya ass/
damn right im from california, where the fuck you from punk?/
i could out rhyme your weak ass even if i was piss drunk/
so why dont you take your little nelly shit and go trot to ya crib/
cuz i really dont want to have to kill another person with a slash to the rib
aight...we'll see
...should be from all the bitches, not from all the bitched in line 8..................
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doc-good flow ,good punches ,nice structure,good vocab and wordplay,good disses,no personals
Handcuffs-good flow ,good punches ,nice structure,good vocab and wordplay,good disses,no personals
this was a close battle but i gotta give it 2 doc cause he had more punches and a longer spit which gave him more flow
Vote:doc
please drop a vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103628
very ill battle best ive seen this week nah not realy
but it was ill gotta give it to handcuffs for me laughin the whole time and good structure
but doc was much funnier flowed better more word play very nice
my vote: doc
even tho he dissed me (kinda)
uppin 2.....your turn handcuffs......
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i will vote if he was not in my crew but honestly doc had this shit by far................so yeah this is not D/R vote cuz u might be like OMG But yeah i will vote him if he wasnt in my crew Doc ripped u badly dog....and that blue....Uhhh u need to cut that shit out....hurts peoples eyes including mine....nice try on the diss on our crew though....Could have been by others....keep elevating...... Overall is Doc.....
Ok here is the deal with this one
Sturucture: Handcuffs easier to read and stright to the point
Punches: This was tough but hey "I'm about to flatten your vision like contacts for the chinese, I am about to stop your flow like a cardiovascular disease" Because of that Handcuffs gets section
Open: Handcuffs but both sucked on this one
Close: Damn doc knock got this section that line was dope"could out rhyme your weak ass even if i was piss drunk/
so why dont you take your little nelly shit and go trot to ya crib/
cuz i really dont want to have to kill another person with a slash to the rib"
my third up....
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Doc_Knock - Vote
He Had A Much Better Verse..I Actually Liked Reading This..A Few Quatoable Here And Their..Didn't Have Much Flow Inside Of You're Verse Though Kid..Handcuff Came Out Aight, But I Dont Think His Verse Was Good Enough To Compete With Doc's Own..Vote - Doc For Better Punchlines..
Return The Favor;
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102074
doc knock got this
had some nice lines, flowed ok, overall just a better
verse all round,
handcuff you did ok, just not good enough to compete
and lose the blue writin!
vote = doc knock
hit this up with a honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103845
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