10 lines
no crew
U DROP FIRST
Joker
LM
10 lines
no crew
U DROP FIRST
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Checkin in. Sorry bout the wait. I was droppin against Nephew J. I'll post ASAP.............................................. .........................
Peace!!!
LM The Life
& Times
...The Rhymes
6-0, I bet you think you've took a fuckin dope pill...
Fuck that, your only good win was vs Born To Kill...
Write your will coz you truly are hip hops joker...
You wanna be dope but face it, your a no hoper...
I'm sittin here sober but I bet I could murk you drunk...
Coz you aint no real MC, your a motherfuckin punk...
Fuckin chump, you cant rap so why you on this site...
Forget this music bitch, every one of your lines are shite...
I'd keep goin til the mornin light but I gotta stop at 10... (10lines)
So fuck you bitch earn a reputation and battle me then...
Peace!!!
LM The Life
& Times
...The Rhymes
My bad…I was busy…here I go….
I’m battling this Llyrical Manwhore even tho he aint no fight
I’ma always come befo LM even tha poll shows I’m right
This nigga made a crew and no1 tried out u should be slapped
Getting mad tryin to take his anger out on me but got his ass tapped
This nigga is a retard he thinks hes from the so called Promise land
u is a bitch u cant go nowhere wit out the central girls holdin ya hand
Ur punches came up a bit short like ya carrin genes of gary coleman
Fuckin around and be eatin 100 hundred bullets like ms pac-man
LM…this nigga is no vet battlin nephew j tryin to get easy wins
Nigga u might as well surrender cause this is where ya life ends
Line 3: the only people that tried out 4 his crew was newbies
Line 6: his crew is central
close battle but i think joker takes this....LM came real fundamental, and simple....i think he underestimated. his punches just werent clever enough....so i didnt really feel the wow factor....Joker same thing....nothing to clever...but at least he got personal with it and was some what clever. it was average punches vs. average punches + pesronals...
thats why i feel Joker barely took this one...
good battle
vote Joker
i took the time to vote so...
hit this up for me both of you with honest votes please....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103318
A h e U n c D e f I o r B w a L r d E
6-0, I bet you think you've took a fuckin dope pill...
Fuck that, your only good win was vs Born To Kill...
^^inacurate...he beat ILLUNATIC...do ur homework-
punches-Joker(much stronger wit delivery and word'd better)
flo-(tie) both had same scheme goin on
meti4-Joker(I found his a bit more amusing
multi-LM(he ran better wit his multi's in most of his lines)
personals- close(Joker)....his were more accurate and harsher
overall-Joker.....not that close to me....he took it easy
hit this wit an honest vote thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103318
This was an okay battle, but...
LM: You had the better flow and some pretty good punches. Your wordplay was just okay, and your metas were pretty good. Nice profile use, and okay creativity. Keep elevatin'.
Joker: Your flow was weak, but you took the punches. Your wordplay was about the same as his, and your metas were pretty good. Not much profile use, but you took it in creativity. Keep elevatin'.
uppin 4 votes
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LM verse
6-0, I bet you think you've took a fuckin dope pill...
Fuck that, your only good win was vs Born To Kill...
good pounch with a bit of a personal (6-0 win)
Write your will coz you truly are hip hops joker...
You wanna be dope but face it, your a no hoper...
nice pounch im laughing and personal
I'm sittin here sober but I bet I could murk you drunk...
Coz you aint no real MC, your a motherfuckin punk...
weak pounch pretty basic
Fuckin chump, you cant rap so why you on this site...
Forget this music bitch, every one of your lines are shite...
didn't rhyme and no pounchs
I'd keep goin til the mornin light but I gotta stop at 10... (10lines)
So fuck you bitch earn a reputation and battle me then...
weak closer
good flow you had a good structre for it to follow but no real hard pounches after the first 3
joker verse
I’m battling this Llyrical Manwhore even tho he aint no fight
I’ma always come befo LM even tha poll shows I’m right
good personal and pounch --better opener--
This nigga made a crew and no1 tried out u should be slapped
Getting mad tryin to take his anger out on me but got his ass tapped
good pounch and personal --pounch,personal--
This nigga is a retard he thinks hes from the so called Promise land
u is a bitch u cant go nowhere wit out the central girls holdin ya hand
funny pounch--pounch--
Ur punches came up a bit short like ya carrin genes of gary coleman
Fuckin around and be eatin 100 hundred bullets like ms pac-man
pounch and meta--pounch, meta--
LM…this nigga is no vet battlin nephew j tryin to get easy wins
Nigga u might as well surrender cause this is where ya life ends
better closer
----vote joker for an overall better stronger verse harder pounchs and personals also used metas
poll vote------JOKER----
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vote - Joker..
his punches were better, the only thing LM had was alot of personals, LM structure aswell was stronger and his diss, but Joker dominated the punches, wordplay, creativity, opener and having some-what flips on personals and names which got him this win.
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