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Thread: Thug Lyfe

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    Newbie LA_4LYFE's Avatar
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    Thug Lyfe

    Verse 1:
    I force myself into ur ears like Kobe on fuckin females
    otha MC's derail an bump sales jus 2 prevail,
    in da industry, shady figures hopefully 1 day will c hell
    but in da present all we can do is pray dat we dont c jail
    recievin mail from federal agents, identity steady changin
    police raids keep us vacating our mutha fuckin stations
    heart 4-ever stay racin, pace maker 2 pace it,
    trippin offa dis chronic as if somebody had laced it
    playa hatta's is trippin, pray de neva catch me slippin
    leave wounds so big they'll need extension cords 2 stitch em

    Hook:
    HOLLA THUG LIFE BITCHES!!!!!!
    Poverty stricken children
    AND 2 ALL MY NIGGAS!!!!!!!!!!
    strugglin jus through livin
    IS IT REAL OR FICTION!!!!!!!!!
    and 2 all those we missin
    stay true through da mission
    HOLLA THUG LIFE!!

    Verse 2:
    Semi-Automatics replaced wit mike stands on stage
    MC's go out in a blaze of unattainable rage
    and holla thug life, made da transition became witness
    screamin on mikes like 20 women all in semmision
    in da same no1 listen 2 pac till he switched positions
    and changed da words revolution 2 thug livin
    got shot in vegas an months lata his former freind Chris did
    and 2 all who died 4 der beliefs, only bleesins

    Hook 2X:

    haha
    thug life
    princible of poverty, injustice, an missery
    thug life
    da revelotion of american upcoming
    haha
    Its all on me
    LA
    $4$-Life

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    Ok this is your 3rd or 4th open mic today and none of them had links/names of replies...Start leaving your links/names or your pieces will get closed.

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    this is averge..nuttin special..make your verses longer if your gonna make a hook like a song...and atleast have 3 verses

    keep elevatin

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    .WP.
    .. It' Still Perfect..

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    ^^ LoL

    Work on your vocab.. It was an ok piece.. Jus keep elevating

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    Originally posted by Sureal
    You Really Suck... Wow... Kill Yourself Now...

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    this was aiight
    you went off topic alot tjhough
    you'll improve
    4.5/10

  8. #8
    LastPoet
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    ..This shit is garbage...your wordplay sucked...your concept sucked..overall..you sucked...

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    Arsonist, Outlaw, Watcher Withersman's Avatar
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    Originally posted by Sureal
    You Really Suck... Wow... Kill Yourself Now...
    RIP MANET

    OPEN MICS

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    Not Feeling This At All...Fake Ass Ja Rule...And Ja Rules Fake, So Your Fucked

    Peace

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    Dropz
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    yo sureal take it easy but ya it did need some work

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    This was ok...

    Nothing special.

    Pretty good hook...

    But the rest was the same fake ass wanna be gangsta shit I've heard a hundred thousand times.

    Grow up some, LA_4LYFE...

    We ain't buyin it.

    4.75/10

    Peace

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