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Thread: Self Inflicted (feat Speek.E.Z.)

  1. December 10th, 2003, 12:53 PM #1
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    Self Inflicted (feat Speek.E.Z.)

    Speek.E.Z
    My Urges For Her Always Left Me Feeling Restricted…
    Until One Day, Our Decision Left Us Self Inflicted…
    I Was With Her, And I Was Caught In The Moment…
    Felt A Turn In My Stomach, Swear It Was An Omen…
    But We Still Got Hot And Heavy Under The Covers...
    Exploring Each Other, We Were 2 Teenage Lovers...
    Experiment Our Love, And See What Sex Felt Like...
    Couldn't Explain How, When I Was In Her It Felt Right...
    Not Caring For The Consequences Of The Moment...
    Just As We Reached The Peak, On The Lights Went...
    Turned Around To See Her Mom And Dad At The Door...
    Panicked And Ran Out Screaming Your Daughters A Whore…

    The Realist
    A joining of two souls, the holiest union
    Why are the days before full of confusion
    No illusion, comrades second my actions
    Father liked tradition, now it was sanctioned
    Went ring shopping with her best friend
    The jeweler felt he had a price to defend
    Proposed at the location of our first kiss
    We then reminisced on our ongoing tryst
    Minds dedicated to the utmost devotion
    Both hearts soared from the love explosion
    The abundance of joy, lasting for days
    With her in my eyes my grin never fades
    She said those two words, emotions lifted
    This death of a bachelor was self inflicted

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  2. December 10th, 2003, 01:16 PM #2
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    that last par had me rollin haha that was nice for a short piece like that man gave me a real good image while reading this nice piece man

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97770

    hit that up for me will ya
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  3. December 10th, 2003, 01:59 PM #3
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    This collabo was definatly hot. It was a little short but it got the message across with a nice flow and structure. A good concept and title, good read, look forward to seeing more like this..
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  4. December 10th, 2003, 03:01 PM #4
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    nice shit niaa
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  5. December 11th, 2003, 12:04 AM #5
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    This was a pretty good collab here i thought...both of you had good structure in this....both of your flow was good here, stayed on point through out this as i read through it...good vocab from both as well...overall a pretty good piece here....keep at it.
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  6. December 11th, 2003, 12:22 AM #6
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    nice collab

    both kept on point..not strecthed structure was dope...flow was good..good vocab and creativity it was good cause it gave a picture in my head

    nice collab keep it up....yo speek n TR we should do a threesome collab
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  7. December 11th, 2003, 02:08 AM #7
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    this was a good Collab...Ya Had Good Flow It Was Hard Hitting All THe Way Through...your Structure was Nice Ya Keeped it A Good Length.....The Vocab was Great And The Wordplay was Good..All And All A Good Piece....k33p It Commin
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  8. December 11th, 2003, 04:42 AM #8
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    Yo I don't always go for that kind of thing but I'm down for a love joint now, (well it's loveish?!). Plain style worked well. SOme rhymes were strained abit abit but the flow kept it.

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  9. December 11th, 2003, 04:59 PM #9
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    please...red hurts my eyes

    yeah this was a good open mic...blah realist owns open mics whats new? do something new... great verses both flowed nice different styles obviously but they did not conflict so it was cool
    vocab precise blah blah blah

    *becomes a n00b for a moment*

    8/10!!!!

    *goes back to himself*

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  10. December 11th, 2003, 05:17 PM #10
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    wow i really liked this collab guys thought it held deep depth and emotion....And this kind of things happen to alot of people...real nice read guys and im lookin forward to doi diss part 2...both of you are in it


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  11. December 11th, 2003, 06:11 PM #11
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    This was good... A little simple with the rhyme scheme, but it wasnt made to be anything complicated. You didnt over-use the vocab, thats hard to do with small verses. I was feeling it pretty good... 7.5-8.0 / 10
    No Hate, just how I feel about it...

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  12. December 12th, 2003, 02:51 AM #12
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    that was hot!!!

    up to the top!!!
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  13. December 12th, 2003, 11:53 AM #13
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    pretty dope, nice ass vocab, sum descent wordplay... flow was on point from both... realist had a nicer flow... good job.. 1
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  14. December 16th, 2003, 06:03 PM #14
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    Nothing bad I can say here...
    Speak E.Z had a nice rhyme scheme, a good flow, and a nice closer. He looked like he was having fun with his piece. T.R had a short flow, and it went alot better, he had a nice topic, and it was a dope as hell read. I liked this alot, and as a special gift, my sig can be on your 2nd page of your piece for Christmas. Get out that lubricant!!!
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