[Third World.]

[pot1ent]

I have biscuits for dinner so I can have a rich tea
Also getting jumped by three chumps who hit me
Till my lip bleeds. . making me choke on my blood
As I gazed dazed. .suddenly I awoke with a thud
Coped from hugs that swarms like bees to honey
The pussy screamed 'oh no, hes sees it as funny
Aint need his mummy' damn right this is my world
Keep hands tight on the fly girls that likes the mic
Or like invites to dike while potent fights wit hype
Tikes are like worthless crashes. .they're write off
Potent sights don't get forgot like the porno ones
Tore-souls don't run. They remisce about the legs
Thats been lost. . & now they pouch in their beds
Third worlds like the missin scene of cassablanka
But can spin round continuesly.Go ask ya hamster

..Look for the positives & look for the negatives
..Too neaturlize your life & have joyful elevation
..In your world

[noncentz]

odd but ill work here tight drop all around

[Sublime D]

this was good, real hot, written well, i like, a lil boasting, but good, suprised i never heard ur name b4

[pot1ent]

Ty. .Its a real fucked up day today, Half came of aiight I spose, but half of it was personal shit. .

[rule]

whoa, that was actually really good i thought i liked your rhyme and flow it was really good, you had a great piece here keep it up an can ye check myn that'd be cool i've been workin on wut ye told me to so it'd be cool if i cud get ye input thanks man

[Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic]

Pretty dope..
I actually enjoyed the little story, which gave away to some parts of humor in it, but having an overall serious tone. Everything from you is a nice read, so jea. Good shit, fam