10 linez
no nuttin/hate/d/r ladeda
at least 5 personals...so no pre-written fag
explained votes
good luk...you'll need it
spit up2 30 mins afta chek in
-Brixton-
Miami305
10 linez
no nuttin/hate/d/r ladeda
at least 5 personals...so no pre-written fag
explained votes
good luk...you'll need it
spit up2 30 mins afta chek in
checking in......ayo dumbass lets do this today, i work 50 hours this week, I aint got time for this, and be in charge of upping this shit up...Also no FEEDING!.
The stats on diseases are rising, civilians dying from Eazy-E to ex-cons
HIV...Jus iLL son? just to let this idiot know, emcees and HIV don't last long
I'mma fake ass thug?, then don't run, I roll with plastic 'guns..butt' Brixton for fun
(http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=85871)
Blood gush, "my son, I know I did a mistake like when I bang ya mom, I'm just correctin um"
Don't stress? your dead!?!, your happy since Jada says:
"You know dead rappers get better promotion", he meant audio not texts!
Back in time we swore when ya ancient played punches wern't re-word
Your a Herbivore right?, well i'm the T-Rex Canivore who eats this dinosaur
When you lost and got split by an Axe E. Um also got ya played punches laughed at
(http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=85339)
How you cried, and inet scream, "Miami305 you wack", and shit u say this inet isn't ya life,
THAT'S BULLLLLLLLLLLLCRAP!
Dont FEED of my verse....Votes better be explained for them to count..uno
this is not a chek in.....coz i got 2 battles on at the mo........but i'll spit ma verse as soon as one's done....nice verse......i like bringin the best outta peeps..pz
How long does it take for you to do a verse?..a very long time. o well it better me good.............................................. ....................................
Illiterate Fucking Latino, Steppin To Me? You Written An Es A,( Hey S.A)
You Gamble As If Its Casino, But I Sold Your Ass On E-Bay.
But What Can I Say, You Took The Risk…But Ya Got Butt Fucked,
Rest Of Ya Battles Cancelled, I’ve Already Got Ya Hearse Booked.
He’s Like A Bankrupt Chump…Just Wishin He Had A Bit Of Credibility,
Shootin Blanks Throughout His Verse, Shows Demise In His Fertility.
This Is A Fine Example, Of How To Be Merked And Then Forgotten,
West Hialeah..Gangland Miami?..Nuttin But The Wak & The Rotten.
Miami Jus Bin Viced…His Heads Jus Been Crushed Between Ma Lines,
Fuk Sliced N Diced…This Policeman Capped A Latino,Jus Like Old Times.
*Es A…….E.g Look What You Did To My Dawg S.A
*Miami Viced……Miami Vice…..Work it out dik eds
Tight battle, Voting begins Now............................................... .................................
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miami ure fukin wack dog ure shit sucks...a lot played punches, themes, and ideas
stretched bars fucked up structure and weak as scheme little wordplay and who is that guy who changed his undername??? fuck that guy musta been either dumb...or... nevermind he had to have been dumb
this might sound like im hatin but im not at all no beef or anything like that dog i just think u shud elevate ure a rookie and ure battlin brix who is somewhat of a vet
anyway it went like this to me
punches-brix
personals-tie both were weak
wordplay-tie both weak
vocab-brix
creativity-brix
overal-brix
miami elevate dog next time u battle someone look for these names to battle, OLIDOG, ROOKIE, HARDKOR3, 2HOT2HANDLE, CYN, those guys are more about ure level so u shud get a good battle out of them
peace!
oh yeah i did honest vote and very well explained so return favor and honest vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=86226
peace
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ima disagree coz i liked his verse and i think he's betta than most noobs but thanx for the vote anyways........i'm no vet...ive bin here b4 i was brix but i aint reached that level yet......
uppin uppin uppin uppin 111st
Laughing@Herbal....hmmm I guess i needed sum comic-relief, if u want Brix he can be counted, i dunt care, but u and I know he's a HERB. its all on you.. and thank you for backing me up^...
uno.
aight whateva ......................uppin uppin uppin
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this was a nice battle
personals=miami
punches=tie........both were very nice
structure=tie
flow=brixton
creativity=brixton
metas=miami
finisher=brixton........miami i was feelin everything but the finisher
my vote=brixton
nice battle props to both
holla
Vote=brix
miami, cmon man, what was that? Those punches were played as fuck, elveate like hell.
Brix, weak verse, flow was choppy, but your opener was the only line in this battle that I liked, so I give you my vote,
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Go Red Wings
punches-brix
personals-miami
flow-brix
structure-brix
enjoyment-brix
overall brix got this but miami u did well, jus battle some otha newbies first
pz